Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

[masterjr]

Deffiantly a nice vibe for this track, Maybe could even do with beefing up a bit with a low volume synth give the whole thing a bit more flavor?

[the wiggle baron]

Blimey! Ive no idea what ive gone and done to this track here...but I like it.

Starts out as a plodder then...very much stops being a plodder. Think ima stick with it, but ive over listened it now and it sounds wrong when it switches up...but actually shat me up with surprise first time!

Love to hear anything about the switch up at like 3 mins or so!

http://www.divshare.com/download/10818646-434

edit: have spotted a couple of the mid range bass noises being off key...sorting that now

[masterjr]

@Hexade those are some raw tunes youve got there nice tasty wobbles deffiantly feeling the whole collection of sounds going on this track wether you read this or not is another thing

[Bassmagnet]

Here's my latest:

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Thanks in advance to anyone who takes the time to listen. The old deal still stands - you review this and i'll review 2 songs of your choosing.

Duuuuude, this shit is so great while your BAKED. Your wobbles got it going on. Ill have to check it out again tomorrow for sure.

Cool man, thanks! Let me know which two tracks you want me to review.

Lets go with any random 2 you would like on my soundcloud brotha!

[Bassmagnet]

@Bassmagnet: Nice vibes, especially when shit starts happening at 1:11. Nice movement to the track, my only criticism would be that really harsh saw wobble thing that comes in 2:11, it feels out of place and a little hollow.

@Zap: I like what your doing here, but be careful about frequency range and levels, when that detuned synth comes in, your snare loses alot of its body.

Decided to work a little bit more on this despite how generic it is as I invested a good bit of time into it. It's coming along a little more.

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I wasnt too sure about that harsh wobble either, ill be looking into it after the weekend! Thanks for the feeds!

[martainnn]

hey guys, just finished my new track, take a listen and any postive/negetive feedback would be greatful
cheers Tain
ps i cant seem to get the embeded thing to work? someone wanna help me with that lol
http://soundcloud.com/martainnn/tain-drop
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WLH8AbWpoE8

[the2bos]

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this is something i started today, looking for new ideas on structure, im falling into the same ones again and again.

-max

here's an update thanks for the feedback
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[VoteYes]

hey guys, just finished my new track, take a listen and any postive/negetive feedback would be greatful
cheers Tain
ps i cant seem to get the embeded thing to work? someone wanna help me with that lol
http://soundcloud.com/martainnn/tain-drop
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WLH8AbWpoE8

nice track man, pretty heavy on the synths but it works.

[VoteYes]

@Bassmagnet: Nice vibes, especially when shit starts happening at 1:11. Nice movement to the track, my only criticism would be that really harsh saw wobble thing that comes in 2:11, it feels out of place and a little hollow.

@Zap: I like what your doing here, but be careful about frequency range and levels, when that detuned synth comes in, your snare loses alot of its body.

Decided to work a little bit more on this despite how generic it is as I invested a good bit of time into it. It's coming along a little more.

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I wasnt too sure about that harsh wobble either, ill be looking into it after the weekend! Thanks for the feeds!

I agree with the previous poster, the tune suffers a bit from the massive synth.

[cleanexecution]

here's an update thanks for the feedback
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i liked the style, if anything try and beef up your drums with some more layers to give it a heavier sound.

[cleanexecution]

heres a new track ive been workin on. its still untitled really. any feedback would be great!
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[VoteYes]

Current track im working on, mad repetitive, but i like it. Let me know what i should do or where i should go. Im down to collab if anyone is.
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Definately finish that one man. So far sounding good...looking forward to hearing the finished article!

[VoteYes]

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Hey only my second ever track so would appreciate some feedback. Some real deep vibes! Cheers!

[PUb-DUb]

Hey i'm new here, just got into this new sound and i'm trying to suck as much of it in, as i can. Don't make tracks like these but i felt compelled to do so. harsh opinions needed, but the obvious things i will iron out soon. cheers ;P. The thing thats pissing me off the most is trying to control the speed of the wobble in massive, didn't come out of automation right . Soundcloud

[rez pez]

diggin it man, i dont even think you should have the wobble synth at :33, mess around with some sub melodies instead or try making a synth that doesn't follow a constant generic rhythm. i think what you laid before the wobbles was way more unique than the synth work that followed, take advantage of that!

[HAACK]

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Hey only my second ever track so would appreciate some feedback. Some real deep vibes! Cheers!

Definitely see where this is going, so far my favorite part of your productions is the ability to represent atmosphere and samples in the right places and at the right time. The track lacks in the low end, bring out the sub, also too much space, try filling it out by getting the drums to the forefront and bring that sub where it should be.

Reference your untitled track, you seem to have filled out the sound here much more.

[grasseffect]

here's an update thanks for the feedback
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I like, but I have to agree with cleanexecution, your drums could use a bit more beef.
The gated sequences are ace though.

[grasseffect]

heres a new track ive been workin on. its still untitled really. any feedback would be great!
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I love the intro in this, but I'm not too fond of the harsh bass.. it sounds a bit uncontrolled. It's your own choice of course, but I would have made this a more subby roller than this, as to me that would've fit in better with the intro.

[grasseffect]

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Something I have been working on for a few hours now.. Not mixed or anything, I'd love feedback.

[VoteYes]

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Hey only my second ever track so would appreciate some feedback. Some real deep vibes! Cheers!

Definitely see where this is going, so far my favorite part of your productions is the ability to represent atmosphere and samples in the right places and at the right time. The track lacks in the low end, bring out the sub, also too much space, try filling it out by getting the drums to the forefront and bring that sub where it should be.

Reference your untitled track, you seem to have filled out the sound here much more.

Thanks a lot for the feedback man! Agree with the sub, i don't actually like the sub in it and was planning on changing it. Cheers!