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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 6:16 pm
by crackf
crackf wrote:
qlus wrote:hey, i've been working on this track for quite a while and would like to hear some feedback. not a proper mix, no panning, but you can get the idea
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is the track any good? :roll:
yo i like this one man, i reckon it could be sick, i feel that it doesnt hit me enough though, like the drums could perhaps be less soft and it feels like it needs something,

but im not really too good with tips but i reckon this song could be so sweet :D nice work! :D:
also, forgot to say i love the oriental sounds, perhaps not the same thing but if you used little bits of it maybe cut up in the first drop?

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 6:48 pm
by JemGrover
busker wrote:
JemGrover wrote:
busker wrote:
slyman wrote:
JemGrover wrote: Soundcloud
i like this one u should finish it. its mad chillin. reminds me of mount kimbie. wat synth r u using for the bass and that violin sound?
amen on the chillin, the percussion really keeps it rollin, finish it off, thats something i'd buy..
You'd buy it, eh?
Thanks. I think that just made my day, mate :D
no doubt mate, quality sound u got comin out.. have a listen to my little downtempo..ish thing i'm working on :)

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Mmm, I'm liking it.. I reckon; Throw a little off-beat shuffle into it every now and again and it'll sound sweet.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 6:27 am
by th@-pu$$y
Working on a new tune and so far I'm pretty happy with it. The only thing that is driving me nutz is the the high end bass is really empty sounding to me. I've been playing around with it for a couple days now and just haven't been 100% satisfied. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated! :u:
http://soundcloud.com/th-pu-y/tracks

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 2:56 pm
by general knowledge
Depone wrote:Heres a clip of a moody funker!

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Any feedback appreciated, even if its one word. :mrgreen:

[Sorry this is also posted here - http://www.dubstepforum.com/depone-dark ... 15142.html]
Fucking Disgusting! love the drums just before the drop man huge! Maybe the kick needs a little beefing up, a tad more low end or something, only thing that really jumped out at me. Gonna be big when it's done.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 7:34 pm
by germskiller
Been working on a remix of Nouvelle Vague - Guns of Brixtion (originally done by The Clash)
Would love some feedback on the sound and any changes you think I should make. Much Appreciated.
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 8:28 pm
by last & least
germskiller wrote:Been working on a remix of Nouvelle Vague - Guns of Brixtion (originally done by The Clash)
Would love some feedback on the sound and any changes you think I should make. Much Appreciated.
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manged to get a proper reggae feeling going here, only thing i find is the drums sound quite mechanical, not alot of variation in samples (velocity etc and not really shuffly)

i can't really hear the sub very well, try beefing it up or pitching it up maybe. Also needs to be dirrrtier! Thats what these remixes always beg for : ) ah generic dubstep remixes of pop songs....

if you like giving mine a little feedback heres mine

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 11:57 pm
by louissmusic
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Looking for feedback, will feedback whoever feedbacks me.

Thanks

Louis :)

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 4:51 am
by th@-pu$$y
louissmusic wrote:Soundcloud

Looking for feedback, will feedback whoever feedbacks me.

Thanks

Louis :)
Dug the tune for sure. The main thing I'm hearing is the snare seems to jump out and distract from the rest of whats going on. Not a volume issue, maybe just to sharp for how chill the tune is?

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 4:54 am
by th@-pu$$y
Finally figured how to put the track in the post! It still needs a mixdown and master any feedback on sound and structure would be great.Soundcloud

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 8:23 am
by last & least
louissmusic wrote:Soundcloud

Looking for feedback, will feedback whoever feedbacks me.

Thanks

Louis :)
could do with a bit of high end maybe hi hats, don't think the shaker fills it out enuff, and when the strings aren't doing there main riff, i think less movement could be better, but instead have a filter going, its a bit too quick at some points, like the drums style, maybe could do witha heavier kick sometimes...
heres mine

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 9:10 am
by thierry_le_dj
hey everyone just a new one by me http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj/tezzabytes .:Tezzabytes:.
the name of the track is silly but i would some feed back if anyone has the time..
Thanks

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 6:54 pm
by rook
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Almost finished.
Gotta do something about the hats at the beginning. Might toss em and start from scrap.

Mix is pretty rough.

Any critiques much appreciated.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 8:40 pm
by karmacazee
Rough mix, just wondering how the arrangement sounds, and if there's any weirdness in there my ears ain't picking up...

:P

http://www.divshare.com/download/9409154-86c

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 3:41 pm
by 86.
it's like 85% done is I'd like to know what people think. a few things I think may sound a bit off but they may not to people so let's see. cleaner mixdown needed of course

you can't embed divshare on here? PANTY MAN MOVEMENTS

DivShare File - Integration of Sorrel.mp3

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 3:55 pm
by 86.
karmacazee wrote:Rough mix, just wondering how the arrangement sounds, and if there's any weirdness in there my ears ain't picking up...

:P

http://www.divshare.com/download/9409154-86c
:)

ill tune! I enjoyed it. but:

1:36-1:49 section should be extended another 8 bars :D . the reason I think so is because I'm not a fan of the bass @ 1:50 - 2:41.

3:12-3:25 or so, with the pads. should be more than 4 bars :D

I say 'should' as in 'it would be nice if'.

:)

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 6:04 pm
by louissmusic
th@-pu$$y wrote:Finally figured how to put the track in the post! It still needs a mixdown and master any feedback on sound and structure would be great.Soundcloud
Do like the track, would say my critisisms are probably the drums seem really like stiff at the start? could maybe do with a bit of swing. Also the snare didnt really seem to have much crispness would sound nice layered with a clap. Generally really liked the track with the glitchy stabs nd the rise to the drop was great :D

Louis

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 8:55 pm
by Rickmansworth
rook wrote:Soundcloud

Almost finished.
Gotta do something about the hats at the beginning. Might toss em and start from scrap.

Mix is pretty rough.

Any critiques much appreciated.
sick remix. i like the guitar riff... what is that from?

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 9:08 pm
by decree
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newest uploaded bit on soundcloud

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 9:12 pm
by Province
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looking for some honest feedback! heard it so many times i dont even know how to think what it sounds like.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 9:48 pm
by slyman
rook wrote:Soundcloud

Almost finished.
Gotta do something about the hats at the beginning. Might toss em and start from scrap.

Mix is pretty rough.

Any critiques much appreciated.
im loving this right now nice work