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hideouz
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by hideouz » Wed Nov 11, 2009 5:29 pm

www.myspace.com/hideouz


I R ZOMBIE


i dont like it but meh, it's my first tune. im working on a second now it's going ok but i cant make the wobble :u:

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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by fhsueh » Wed Nov 11, 2009 6:37 pm

So here goes. My first track for feedback. Also interested in how it sounds on different setups. No proper monitors.

http://soundcloud.com/policy/heavy

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Post by jsaxton » Wed Nov 11, 2009 9:12 pm

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BAMMMM!!!
whatchu think
pretty killer yeah?
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Post by djwom » Wed Nov 11, 2009 10:34 pm

cynical wrote:Could I have some feedback please :)

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This track was inspired from the games/film of silent hill. Its an atmospheric/dark wobbler
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Influenced by Sully's shanks - give me up (MAD TUNE) and the end of a Skream fabric set when he started playing more breaksy stuff. Breaks/dubstep/jungle sound with a bit of funk.

feedback4feedback lolz
Good production! what do you use? i left a track up, but no feedback :-(
djwom wrote:Lost all the midi instruments at the last minute on this 1. Can't change any of the levels, but what does anyone think?

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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by zonetrooper5 » Wed Nov 11, 2009 11:34 pm

boyswanstep wrote:working on a gritty hard tune


http://www.zshare.net/audio/68318810987a13a1/

ignore the intro, its horribly made and seriously isnt finishe

cheers
Needs to be louder for a start lol, liking the drums alot, they have a good feel to them. The drop was quite weird though but in a good way.

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Post by drivepilot » Thu Nov 12, 2009 3:16 am

Not dubstep, but check out my tracks! Free 320kb mp3s of both albums.

http://drivepilot.bandcamp.com

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Post by johnthethird » Thu Nov 12, 2009 7:28 am

cynical wrote: Soundcloud
Influenced by Sully's shanks - give me up (MAD TUNE) and the end of a Skream fabric set when he started playing more breaksy stuff. Breaks/dubstep/jungle sound with a bit of funk.

feedback4feedback lolz
Nice tune man. The break sounds a bit tinny, could use some better eqing to give the drums some punch, maybe around 200hz?

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Post by thierry_le_dj » Thu Nov 12, 2009 8:53 am

.: Safari Dub :. http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj FEED BACK PLZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!
thanks..
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Post by kamuh » Thu Nov 12, 2009 10:23 am

Check out my chune! :t:

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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by marshy » Thu Nov 12, 2009 3:19 pm

First track up for feedback, finished version is on my myspace.

http://www.myspace.com/marshydub

Only track on there, if you're interested in a free 320 there's a thread in the 'Dubs' section (Or just check the blog)

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Post by marshy » Thu Nov 12, 2009 3:22 pm

fhsueh wrote:So here goes. My first track for feedback. Also interested in how it sounds on different setups. No proper monitors.

http://soundcloud.com/policy/heavy
Sounds pretty muddy in places, but in a good way. Really like it! Also i don't know if it was intentional but i love how when the drums first come into the intro they feel slightly out of time, but work their way in.
:e:

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Post by PumpKing » Thu Nov 12, 2009 3:27 pm

Hey guys!!
I've started a new alias for my dubstep (I use to make dnb)
Got my first track finished, its a jazz influenced dubstep track as I'm a pianist and play classical and jazz piano.

Here's my myspace - www.myspace.com/PumpKingUK

Hope u like it!!
PumpKing 'AKA Richy'

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Post by jak-a-tron » Thu Nov 12, 2009 6:40 pm

Hey. I would like a bit of feedback on a tune i made lately. Im a complete amateur so constructive criticism needed please. This samples a part from the film Hellraiser "I am pain"
Thanks in advance

http://soundcloud.com/jak-a-tron/jak-a-tron-pain

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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by fhsueh » Fri Nov 13, 2009 3:48 am

marshy wrote:
fhsueh wrote:So here goes. My first track for feedback. Also interested in how it sounds on different setups. No proper monitors.

http://soundcloud.com/policy/heavy
Sounds pretty muddy in places, but in a good way. Really like it! Also i don't know if it was intentional but i love how when the drums first come into the intro they feel slightly out of time, but work their way in.
:e:
Thanks! Listened to This Thing. What a fitting title. Great job turning cold metallic sounds into grinding, organic cud :)

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Post by marshy » Fri Nov 13, 2009 8:35 am

fhsueh wrote:
marshy wrote:
fhsueh wrote:So here goes. My first track for feedback. Also interested in how it sounds on different setups. No proper monitors.

http://soundcloud.com/policy/heavy
Sounds pretty muddy in places, but in a good way. Really like it! Also i don't know if it was intentional but i love how when the drums first come into the intro they feel slightly out of time, but work their way in.
:e:
Thanks! Listened to This Thing. What a fitting title. Great job turning cold metallic sounds into grinding, organic cud :)
'Grinding organic cud'. Possibly the coolest feedback i've had yet. That's going on my myspace!

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Post by thierry_le_dj » Fri Nov 13, 2009 1:23 pm

http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj
just finish 3 new trax...Safari Dub,Mon-Dazed,Feeling It)
feed back would be great
http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj

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Post by fhsueh » Fri Nov 13, 2009 5:03 pm

legend4ry wrote:
fhsueh wrote:
legend4ry wrote:Will give feedback to whoever gives me feedback, as standard
legend4ry: I'm new at this, so take my comments with a grain of salt, but I liked Point hill's chilled out vibe. Also liked the "space" and atmosphere of the track. I'm guessing there's a "Point Hill" or some other meaningful place this evokes for you?
Easy man, thanks for the feedback ! While most of my music is pretty much on this vibe (am not huge on harsh sounds) Point Hill is a place in Southeast London, somewhat of a hidden spot where you can see all of SouthEast London - all the way up to central London on a clear day/night - I recently went there and it inspired me to make something about it !

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2526/382 ... e0691e.jpg

Theres a small and daytime (sadly) picture :)! Its much better at night.
Nice!
I saw your other thread about "deep". Please check out my track. Curious what you think. Thanks man.
http://soundcloud.com/policy/heavy

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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by legend4ry » Fri Nov 13, 2009 5:13 pm

fhsueh wrote:
legend4ry wrote:
fhsueh wrote:
legend4ry wrote:Will give feedback to whoever gives me feedback, as standard
legend4ry: I'm new at this, so take my comments with a grain of salt, but I liked Point hill's chilled out vibe. Also liked the "space" and atmosphere of the track. I'm guessing there's a "Point Hill" or some other meaningful place this evokes for you?
Easy man, thanks for the feedback ! While most of my music is pretty much on this vibe (am not huge on harsh sounds) Point Hill is a place in Southeast London, somewhat of a hidden spot where you can see all of SouthEast London - all the way up to central London on a clear day/night - I recently went there and it inspired me to make something about it !

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2526/382 ... e0691e.jpg

Theres a small and daytime (sadly) picture :)! Its much better at night.
Nice!
I saw your other thread about "deep". Please check out my track. Curious what you think. Thanks man.
http://soundcloud.com/policy/heavy
Easy man, I absolutely love the progression of the synths - I feel the drums are a little boring and could do with a lot more space, with the minimalness of the synth progression - If the drums were more spaced out and less harsh it would give a lot more character and would make the track a lot more beautiful and very very epic - I'm thinking lots of spacey - slightly reverbed hats and nice big delayed crashes, the kick on 1 and snare on 3 beat would suit this a lot better too


Overall I think its a great track but the drums spoil it from being a instant persy!
Soulstep wrote: My point is i just wanna hear more vibes
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by fhsueh » Fri Nov 13, 2009 6:02 pm

legend4ry wrote: Easy man, I absolutely love the progression of the synths - I feel the drums are a little boring and could do with a lot more space, with the minimalness of the synth progression - If the drums were more spaced out and less harsh it would give a lot more character and would make the track a lot more beautiful and very very epic - I'm thinking lots of spacey - slightly reverbed hats and nice big delayed crashes, the kick on 1 and snare on 3 beat would suit this a lot better too


Overall I think its a great track but the drums spoil it from being a instant persy!
Thanks legend4ry! Appreciate the feedback.
legend4ry wrote: the kick on 1 and snare on 3 beat would suit this a lot better too
Haha. Essentially: "make it sound like dubstep" :) Point taken :)

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