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i dont like it but meh, it's my first tune. im working on a second now it's going ok but i cant make the wobble

kotku wrote:if something sounds like shit and is not pop then it's techno, or is this definition flawed aswell?
Good production! what do you use? i left a track up, but no feedbackcynical wrote:Could I have some feedback please
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This track was inspired from the games/film of silent hill. Its an atmospheric/dark wobbler
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Influenced by Sully's shanks - give me up (MAD TUNE) and the end of a Skream fabric set when he started playing more breaksy stuff. Breaks/dubstep/jungle sound with a bit of funk.
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djwom wrote:Lost all the midi instruments at the last minute on this 1. Can't change any of the levels, but what does anyone think?
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Needs to be louder for a start lol, liking the drums alot, they have a good feel to them. The drop was quite weird though but in a good way.boyswanstep wrote:working on a gritty hard tune
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ignore the intro, its horribly made and seriously isnt finishe
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Nice tune man. The break sounds a bit tinny, could use some better eqing to give the drums some punch, maybe around 200hz?cynical wrote: Soundcloud
Influenced by Sully's shanks - give me up (MAD TUNE) and the end of a Skream fabric set when he started playing more breaksy stuff. Breaks/dubstep/jungle sound with a bit of funk.
feedback4feedback lolz
Sounds pretty muddy in places, but in a good way. Really like it! Also i don't know if it was intentional but i love how when the drums first come into the intro they feel slightly out of time, but work their way in.fhsueh wrote:So here goes. My first track for feedback. Also interested in how it sounds on different setups. No proper monitors.
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Thanks! Listened to This Thing. What a fitting title. Great job turning cold metallic sounds into grinding, organic cudmarshy wrote:Sounds pretty muddy in places, but in a good way. Really like it! Also i don't know if it was intentional but i love how when the drums first come into the intro they feel slightly out of time, but work their way in.fhsueh wrote:So here goes. My first track for feedback. Also interested in how it sounds on different setups. No proper monitors.
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'Grinding organic cud'. Possibly the coolest feedback i've had yet. That's going on my myspace!fhsueh wrote:Thanks! Listened to This Thing. What a fitting title. Great job turning cold metallic sounds into grinding, organic cudmarshy wrote:Sounds pretty muddy in places, but in a good way. Really like it! Also i don't know if it was intentional but i love how when the drums first come into the intro they feel slightly out of time, but work their way in.fhsueh wrote:So here goes. My first track for feedback. Also interested in how it sounds on different setups. No proper monitors.
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Nice!legend4ry wrote:Easy man, thanks for the feedback ! While most of my music is pretty much on this vibe (am not huge on harsh sounds) Point Hill is a place in Southeast London, somewhat of a hidden spot where you can see all of SouthEast London - all the way up to central London on a clear day/night - I recently went there and it inspired me to make something about it !fhsueh wrote:legend4ry: I'm new at this, so take my comments with a grain of salt, but I liked Point hill's chilled out vibe. Also liked the "space" and atmosphere of the track. I'm guessing there's a "Point Hill" or some other meaningful place this evokes for you?legend4ry wrote:Will give feedback to whoever gives me feedback, as standard
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2526/382 ... e0691e.jpg
Theres a small and daytime (sadly) picture! Its much better at night.
Easy man, I absolutely love the progression of the synths - I feel the drums are a little boring and could do with a lot more space, with the minimalness of the synth progression - If the drums were more spaced out and less harsh it would give a lot more character and would make the track a lot more beautiful and very very epic - I'm thinking lots of spacey - slightly reverbed hats and nice big delayed crashes, the kick on 1 and snare on 3 beat would suit this a lot better toofhsueh wrote:Nice!legend4ry wrote:Easy man, thanks for the feedback ! While most of my music is pretty much on this vibe (am not huge on harsh sounds) Point Hill is a place in Southeast London, somewhat of a hidden spot where you can see all of SouthEast London - all the way up to central London on a clear day/night - I recently went there and it inspired me to make something about it !fhsueh wrote:legend4ry: I'm new at this, so take my comments with a grain of salt, but I liked Point hill's chilled out vibe. Also liked the "space" and atmosphere of the track. I'm guessing there's a "Point Hill" or some other meaningful place this evokes for you?legend4ry wrote:Will give feedback to whoever gives me feedback, as standard
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2526/382 ... e0691e.jpg
Theres a small and daytime (sadly) picture! Its much better at night.
I saw your other thread about "deep". Please check out my track. Curious what you think. Thanks man.
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Thanks legend4ry! Appreciate the feedback.legend4ry wrote: Easy man, I absolutely love the progression of the synths - I feel the drums are a little boring and could do with a lot more space, with the minimalness of the synth progression - If the drums were more spaced out and less harsh it would give a lot more character and would make the track a lot more beautiful and very very epic - I'm thinking lots of spacey - slightly reverbed hats and nice big delayed crashes, the kick on 1 and snare on 3 beat would suit this a lot better too
Overall I think its a great track but the drums spoil it from being a instant persy!
Haha. Essentially: "make it sound like dubstep"legend4ry wrote: the kick on 1 and snare on 3 beat would suit this a lot better too
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