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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 5:29 pm
by hideouz
www.myspace.com/hideouz
I R ZOMBIE
i dont like it but meh, it's my first tune. im working on a second now it's going ok but i cant make the wobble

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 6:37 pm
by fhsueh
So here goes. My first track for feedback. Also interested in how it sounds on different setups. No proper monitors.
http://soundcloud.com/policy/heavy
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 9:12 pm
by jsaxton
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BAMMMM!!!
whatchu think
pretty killer yeah?
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 10:34 pm
by djwom
cynical wrote:Could I have some feedback please
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This track was inspired from the games/film of silent hill. Its an atmospheric/dark wobbler
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Influenced by Sully's shanks - give me up (MAD TUNE) and the end of a Skream fabric set when he started playing more breaksy stuff. Breaks/dubstep/jungle sound with a bit of funk.
feedback4feedback lolz
Good production! what do you use? i left a track up, but no feedback
djwom wrote:Lost all the midi instruments at the last minute on this 1. Can't change any of the levels, but what does anyone think?
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 11:34 pm
by zonetrooper5
Needs to be louder for a start lol, liking the drums alot, they have a good feel to them. The drop was quite weird though but in a good way.
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 3:16 am
by drivepilot
Not dubstep, but check out my tracks! Free 320kb mp3s of both albums.
http://drivepilot.bandcamp.com
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 7:28 am
by johnthethird
cynical wrote:
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Influenced by Sully's shanks - give me up (MAD TUNE) and the end of a Skream fabric set when he started playing more breaksy stuff. Breaks/dubstep/jungle sound with a bit of funk.
feedback4feedback lolz
Nice tune man. The break sounds a bit tinny, could use some better eqing to give the drums some punch, maybe around 200hz?
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 8:53 am
by thierry_le_dj
.: Safari Dub :.
http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj FEED BACK PLZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!
thanks..
Thierry
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 10:23 am
by kamuh
Check out my chune!
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 3:19 pm
by marshy
First track up for feedback, finished version is on my myspace.
http://www.myspace.com/marshydub
Only track on there, if you're interested in a free 320 there's a thread in the 'Dubs' section (Or just check the blog)
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 3:22 pm
by marshy
Sounds pretty muddy in places, but in a good way. Really like it! Also i don't know if it was intentional but i love how when the drums first come into the intro they feel slightly out of time, but work their way in.

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 3:27 pm
by PumpKing
Hey guys!!
I've started a new alias for my dubstep (I use to make dnb)
Got my first track finished, its a jazz influenced dubstep track as I'm a pianist and play classical and jazz piano.
Here's my myspace -
www.myspace.com/PumpKingUK
Hope u like it!!
PumpKing 'AKA Richy'
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 6:40 pm
by jak-a-tron
Hey. I would like a bit of feedback on a tune i made lately. Im a complete amateur so constructive criticism needed please. This samples a part from the film Hellraiser "I am pain"
Thanks in advance
http://soundcloud.com/jak-a-tron/jak-a-tron-pain
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 1:44 am
by rapsag111
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 3:48 am
by fhsueh
marshy wrote:
Sounds pretty muddy in places, but in a good way. Really like it! Also i don't know if it was intentional but i love how when the drums first come into the intro they feel slightly out of time, but work their way in.

Thanks! Listened to This Thing. What a fitting title. Great job turning cold metallic sounds into grinding, organic cud

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 8:35 am
by marshy
fhsueh wrote:marshy wrote:
Sounds pretty muddy in places, but in a good way. Really like it! Also i don't know if it was intentional but i love how when the drums first come into the intro they feel slightly out of time, but work their way in.

Thanks! Listened to This Thing. What a fitting title. Great job turning cold metallic sounds into grinding, organic cud

'Grinding organic cud'. Possibly the coolest feedback i've had yet. That's going on my myspace!
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 1:23 pm
by thierry_le_dj
http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj
just finish 3 new trax...Safari Dub,Mon-Dazed,Feeling It)
feed back would be great
http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 5:03 pm
by fhsueh
legend4ry wrote:fhsueh wrote:legend4ry wrote:Will give feedback to whoever gives me feedback, as standard
legend4ry: I'm new at this, so take my comments with a grain of salt, but I liked Point hill's chilled out vibe. Also liked the "space" and atmosphere of the track. I'm guessing there's a "Point Hill" or some other meaningful place this evokes for you?
Easy man, thanks for the feedback ! While most of my music is pretty much on this vibe (am not huge on harsh sounds) Point Hill is a place in Southeast London, somewhat of a hidden spot where you can see all of SouthEast London - all the way up to central London on a clear day/night - I recently went there and it inspired me to make something about it !
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2526/382 ... e0691e.jpg
Theres a small and daytime (sadly) picture

! Its much better at night.
Nice!
I saw your other thread about "deep". Please check out my track. Curious what you think. Thanks man.
http://soundcloud.com/policy/heavy
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 5:13 pm
by legend4ry
fhsueh wrote:legend4ry wrote:fhsueh wrote:legend4ry wrote:Will give feedback to whoever gives me feedback, as standard
legend4ry: I'm new at this, so take my comments with a grain of salt, but I liked Point hill's chilled out vibe. Also liked the "space" and atmosphere of the track. I'm guessing there's a "Point Hill" or some other meaningful place this evokes for you?
Easy man, thanks for the feedback ! While most of my music is pretty much on this vibe (am not huge on harsh sounds) Point Hill is a place in Southeast London, somewhat of a hidden spot where you can see all of SouthEast London - all the way up to central London on a clear day/night - I recently went there and it inspired me to make something about it !
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2526/382 ... e0691e.jpg
Theres a small and daytime (sadly) picture

! Its much better at night.
Nice!
I saw your other thread about "deep". Please check out my track. Curious what you think. Thanks man.
http://soundcloud.com/policy/heavy
Easy man, I absolutely love the progression of the synths - I feel the drums are a little boring and could do with a lot more space, with the minimalness of the synth progression - If the drums were more spaced out and less harsh it would give a lot more character and would make the track a lot more beautiful and very very epic - I'm thinking lots of spacey - slightly reverbed hats and nice big delayed crashes, the kick on 1 and snare on 3 beat would suit this a lot better too
Overall I think its a great track but the drums spoil it from being a instant persy!
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 6:02 pm
by fhsueh
legend4ry wrote:
Easy man, I absolutely love the progression of the synths - I feel the drums are a little boring and could do with a lot more space, with the minimalness of the synth progression - If the drums were more spaced out and less harsh it would give a lot more character and would make the track a lot more beautiful and very very epic - I'm thinking lots of spacey - slightly reverbed hats and nice big delayed crashes, the kick on 1 and snare on 3 beat would suit this a lot better too
Overall I think its a great track but the drums spoil it from being a instant persy!
Thanks legend4ry! Appreciate the feedback.
legend4ry wrote:
the kick on 1 and snare on 3 beat would suit this a lot better too
Haha. Essentially: "make it sound like dubstep"

Point taken
