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J-one im loving the vox in that first track its pretty damn good no lies

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can I get some constructive feedback on this one? I posted it a couple days ago and didn't get anything really, I gave feedback as well....

Started a dubstep project.

http://polymass.com/audio/supdup.mp3

Dignan - nice melodies and synths up top. good little chiller. atm im listening on laptop speakers cant hear the bassline -probs cos its sub bass

Thor - loving the almost dnb style..... good and frantic!

keep up the good tunes guys

junior spesh wrote:

zonetrooper5 wrote:

junior spesh wrote:New wobbler! FEEDBACK PLEASE!

I give a fair amount of feedback so i fink its only fair i recieve sum

anyway, this is the foundation of tune im workin on>> Soundcloud

Really liking the piano sample and synths, obviously the song could be longer, I think the drums could be given some more punch and maybe add a saturator to your bass line to fatten it up, other then that I think your on to something pretty good.

SAFE, yh this is just half of the actual tune cuz i jus uploaded enuff 4 you 2 get an idea.. anything u want me to drop feedback on btw?

really like this track and i have to agree with zonetrooper5 that the beats need to beef up a little bit more so u can feel kick and snare a bit more..

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still trying to get used to this forum and layout, it can be a bit confusing whens there's comments within comments....but anyway jus wanted to say i thought this was a good track whoever made it...

marshy wrote:Basis to a new track, any feedback would be appreciated! I'll return any favours.

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really like this track marshy.... its very minimal compared to other tracks on here and i like that,the track gets start to the point and it has a nice fast paced feel to it which is great...

mars wrote:Please let me know what u guys think!

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preview of a new track!

thanks in advance to those who listen

BadBoy track.... ...good work mars

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can I get some constructive feedback on this one? I posted it a couple days ago and didn't get anything really, I gave feedback as well....

really good track dignan i can tell you put a lot of work into this track as its always evolving which is great, it does'nt at any point seem like you repeated any part of the track if that makes sense which is really impressive as i'm new to making music and one of the hardest things i find is to try and keep the track interesting and not just repeating itself....any tips

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can I get some constructive feedback on this one? I posted it a couple days ago and didn't get anything really, I gave feedback as well....

Typing as i listen!

Very nice! Normally i'd say to bump up the drums, add a kick and snare that really shape the track. But i think this works well, everything blends together really nicely. Really like the instrument playing at 20 seconds, what is that? Real nice instrumentation throughout really. Nice use of delayed claps too, mixing it up slightly. I'd turn the sub up though, especially once it hits into the more DnB feel. It gets slightly repetitive without the sub bass really driving it, perhaps cut out some of the kicks in the first 28 seconds so there's even more difference when it starts to kick in? Seems to suddenly jump in with a load. Great track though!

Not even really into this style but i'd definitely play this.

here are a few tracks from me and i know the levels are off on probably every sound but i just did'n worry about mixing the tracks at this point i just made the tracks.
let me know what u think..

http://soundcloud.com/penndragon/keep-on

http://soundcloud.com/penndragon/x-tc

also has anyone got any tips or good links to website on how to get the kick drums and snare and bassline to really stand out so you can feel them more...thx
i am using just fl studio 8

To get the bassline to stand out more, have a go with the 'freesound bundle' from Soundhack.

Try Chebychev, can add some real harmonics and grit to your basslines!

The XTC bassline could end up sounding really nice if you mess around with these for a while.

http://www.soundhack.com/freeware.php

Working very very slowly on this one, it's the same track as the one i posted yesterday but with a few slight difference.

Slightly different bass tone, more FX, guitar slide (too loud in the mix right now), a cool little delayed double clap midway through.

Still stuck on how to keep this from getting repetitive though, and i'm having no luck at all working an intro in.

Any ideas?
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marshy wrote:Working very very slowly on this one, it's the same track as the one i posted yesterday but with a few slight difference.

Slightly different bass tone, more FX, guitar slide (too loud in the mix right now), a cool little delayed double clap midway through.

Still stuck on how to keep this from getting repetitive though, and i'm having no luck at all working an intro in.

Any ideas?
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I'm not sure how helpful my feedback will be since I don't make tunes like this, but I love goin' nuts to a nice, aggressive dubstep tune... one thing I noticed was that the high frequencies in the snare were hurting my ears lol, maybe maybe roll them off around 13-15k. I was diggin your synths and bass sounds though man.

Thanks for giving me some feedback on my tune man, big up!

penndragon wrote:

dignan wrote:Soundcloud

can I get some constructive feedback on this one? I posted it a couple days ago and didn't get anything really, I gave feedback as well....

really good track dignan i can tell you put a lot of work into this track as its always evolving which is great, it does'nt at any point seem like you repeated any part of the track if that makes sense which is really impressive as i'm new to making music and one of the hardest things i find is to try and keep the track interesting and not just repeating itself....any tips

thanks for the feedback man, I'll hit you back with some when you post a tune...

dignan wrote:

marshy wrote:Working very very slowly on this one, it's the same track as the one i posted yesterday but with a few slight difference.

Slightly different bass tone, more FX, guitar slide (too loud in the mix right now), a cool little delayed double clap midway through.

Still stuck on how to keep this from getting repetitive though, and i'm having no luck at all working an intro in.

Any ideas?
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I'm not sure how helpful my feedback will be since I don't make tunes like this, but I love goin' nuts to a nice, aggressive dubstep tune... one thing I noticed was that the high frequencies in the snare were hurting my ears lol, maybe maybe roll them off around 13-15k. I was diggin your synths and bass sounds though man.

Thanks for giving me some feedback on my tune man, big up!

Thanks for that, will get on it!

BTW it was your delayed claps that got me to whack in that little shuffly delayed double snare at 36 seconds and i really like how it turned out! Cheers!

marshy wrote:

dignan wrote:

marshy wrote:Working very very slowly on this one, it's the same track as the one i posted yesterday but with a few slight difference.

Slightly different bass tone, more FX, guitar slide (too loud in the mix right now), a cool little delayed double clap midway through.

Still stuck on how to keep this from getting repetitive though, and i'm having no luck at all working an intro in.

Any ideas?
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I'm not sure how helpful my feedback will be since I don't make tunes like this, but I love goin' nuts to a nice, aggressive dubstep tune... one thing I noticed was that the high frequencies in the snare were hurting my ears lol, maybe maybe roll them off around 13-15k. I was diggin your synths and bass sounds though man.

Thanks for giving me some feedback on my tune man, big up!

Thanks for that, will get on it!

BTW it was your delayed claps that got me to whack in that little shuffly delayed double snare at 36 seconds and i really like how it turned out! Cheers!

shit, don't be bitin my style fool! lol

If i call you an 'inspiration', is that better?

Hey guys! Check out my new in-progress tune! It's called "When you walked throught" and you can listen here: www.myspace.com/vokkal
Feedback is very welcome.

Peace out
Vokkal

here is a reworked and beefed up version of the song i posted a couple of days ago, let me know what you guys think:

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