i have 3 new trax i would love some feed back please!
(Safari Dub,Mon-Dazed and Feeling It) i have been working on these trax a few months now http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj
thanks
Thierry
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 11:52 pm
by legend4ry
fhsueh wrote:
legend4ry wrote:
Easy man, I absolutely love the progression of the synths - I feel the drums are a little boring and could do with a lot more space, with the minimalness of the synth progression - If the drums were more spaced out and less harsh it would give a lot more character and would make the track a lot more beautiful and very very epic - I'm thinking lots of spacey - slightly reverbed hats and nice big delayed crashes, the kick on 1 and snare on 3 beat would suit this a lot better too
Overall I think its a great track but the drums spoil it from being a instant persy!
Thanks legend4ry! Appreciate the feedback.
legend4ry wrote:
the kick on 1 and snare on 3 beat would suit this a lot better too
Haha. Essentially: "make it sound like dubstep" Point taken
Not at all ! I am the last person to say "follow formulars" I just feel it would give the tune a bit more space and pace if the drums wasn't so busy
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Nov 14, 2009 12:56 am
by dansu
sry for not feedbacking anyones shit, i will do it tomorrow
would be nice if someone could have a look at this meanwhile
nice tune, theres a few things that could use some work.
The big thing that stuck out like a sore thumb is the kick drum.. it sounds....cheap...and it's hitting too high like a rock and roll kick or something. Either replace it entirely or EQ it. You should lower some of the mid and high frequencies and Raise the frequences ranging from 90-120 hz.\
The open hi-hat needs to be EQ-ed as well, this time take out the low to mid frequences and only keep the high ones.
The snare could also use some reverb. as well as possible layering 2 snares on top of each other.
The sub bass sounds good overall.
The track as a whole is a tad repetitive. I would either aim for a more prominent counter melody, or some synth strings playing chords, possible after the break or before it.
After you make these fixes, I'm sure the track will be a banger, Good luck man!
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Nov 14, 2009 4:47 am
by Reflection
legend4ry wrote:
fhsueh wrote:
legend4ry wrote:
Easy man, I absolutely love the progression of the synths - I feel the drums are a little boring and could do with a lot more space, with the minimalness of the synth progression - If the drums were more spaced out and less harsh it would give a lot more character and would make the track a lot more beautiful and very very epic - I'm thinking lots of spacey - slightly reverbed hats and nice big delayed crashes, the kick on 1 and snare on 3 beat would suit this a lot better too
Overall I think its a great track but the drums spoil it from being a instant persy!
Thanks legend4ry! Appreciate the feedback.
legend4ry wrote:
the kick on 1 and snare on 3 beat would suit this a lot better too
Haha. Essentially: "make it sound like dubstep" Point taken
Not at all ! I am the last person to say "follow formulars" I just feel it would give the tune a bit more space and pace if the drums wasn't so busy
I Think the main problem is the kick drum hits too frequently. If you don't like the 1-3 formula, that's fine, I think it's a bit boring myself. In my opinion, keep the snare how it is, add more variation to the kick, and use it less frequently (ie sometimes hits on 1--2.5---3.75--1--1.75-----1----1 something like, kinda hard to desbribe, but I hope you get my point.
The one section which has a lot of snare would sound fine IF you lowered the volume on the snare hits that are on the offbeats, it will allow it to grove more naturally, try it out.
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Nov 14, 2009 4:51 am
by Reflection
marsonebeatz wrote:new tune i jammed out last night. havent had any feedback yet, any thoughts?
jesus, looking at your block wave shape, you squashed the shit out of your sound, lower the volume on all your shit and take the limiter off. (or if u did this with your limiter, turn your gain down).
Also turn the high kick down a bit
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Nov 14, 2009 10:40 am
by sebastien
Hi, this is my new tune, made a few days ago. Dont had any feedback yet.
Thats sick man. How do you make that kind of intro, Its the same kinds intro to Gamma ray burst by Downlink Ive tried many methods but cant seem to get it.
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 12:47 pm
by dash b2009
its from 1 of my vst's i use with a few effects over the top
drums sound lovley n tight! The tune does progress but its seems slightly thin imo, mayb the
lack of sub bass?! Where it at?
I think with a nice sub sitting under it, it'll sound fat