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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 10:32 pm
by RatRaceProducing
daddy mchectic/ crack house funk is a tune. bass synth could do with being a bit wider but other than that pretty sweet. interesting melo, percussion is sick. tuneage

Sinisterbeats/ nice idea. nice and deep. lil bit repetitive. Few too many mid freqs in there. sub bass is nice. Not a big fan of the melody at first but it opens out quite nicely. good tune just fine tune the mix,

superginger/ mix is ok, synths are a piece plasticy. and its quite dry and central. the cheesey melody gets a bit borin. good go thou on the mixing. open up your synths a bit and ur on track

Circusjam/ proper nasty bass synth. melody is a little flat for me but the bass pattern is nice. percussion is simple but pretty crisp. The mid bass layer is too loud though i think. Pretty sick tune tho, tumps.

Depone/ shit, tune man. cuttin a few highs would make it a lil easier on the ears but shit nout else to say. Tunearrrrrge 320dl?


Top one in my sig is the new one, thoughts please

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 12:15 am
by rhek
@ RatRace - Love the synth pattern. All the synth flow around each other really well. Maybe split the channel on the stereo wobble, cut the bass freqs and put them in mono? Tight sounds.

@ Phoaxache - Nice Hook, good sounds - Work on the intro is all i'd say, bring some different sounds and a bit more modulation. Nice jump-up sound though!

@ Sinister Beats - Listened to casualty. Wicked vibe. Dark.

@ CircusJam - Sick sick sick. Synth is tight so are the drums. Would play it out.

@ Control - Love the vibe and rythm of the drop synth, just beef the drums up. Aggy.

@ Depone - Drums are nice and punchy with loads of space. Love the melody. Liquid but still really driving. Eurphoric - and pretty proggy too! Sick.

This track isn't actually finished :o started it a couple of days ago, its almost there but thought i'd look for some feedback n see whats what... :)

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Here's another if anyones feeling generous... The mixing/mastering is err not so pro atm..

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 12:22 am
by Depone
AL4228 wrote:@ depone, nice chill tune :) a little short though :(
personally i'd make the snare have abit more reverb, and maybe hit a tad harder
Hahaha i find it funny each time someone says something like this about one of my clips. its a cut version of the song mate. 8)

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 1:34 am
by tylerblue
@ RatRaceProducing - Unique idea. I like it! The only thing I might have done differently is give some movement to the synth stabs that run throughout the song. They get a bit repetitive. Nice one though!

@ Phoaxache - Great title for this tune and great bass sounds. This one has some swagger to it! Excellent job!

@ JuJu_Man - Great arrangement work. I love the way this evolves like it's telling a story. You can definitely tell you've put some time into this one.

@ daddy mchectic - Good idea. As far as mixing feedback is concerned (for crackhouse funk), if I may, your drums seem a little flat to me. Perhaps process them some more or layer them up to give them life.

@ Sinisterbeats - Your drums sound mint mate. Very nice beat structure and great use of percussion. Good job.

@ Circusjam - This is mental. Love it. I would rinse the hell out of this. Following you on SC now..

@ kaiori breathe - You nailed the minimal feel. Great use of space in your mix.

@ Depone - Professional stuff once again. It feels like your bass is singing or something. I don't even really know what I mean by that. It's just good.


Here's my new one. I'm really enjoying the violin sound right now for some reason. All feedback is welcome. Cheers guys.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 2:13 am
by AL4228
Depone wrote:
AL4228 wrote:@ depone, nice chill tune :) a little short though :(
personally i'd make the snare have abit more reverb, and maybe hit a tad harder
Hahaha i find it funny each time someone says something like this about one of my clips. its a cut version of the song mate. 8)
haha sorry :u:

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 10:40 am
by Depone
AL4228 wrote:
Depone wrote:
AL4228 wrote:@ depone, nice chill tune :) a little short though :(
personally i'd make the snare have abit more reverb, and maybe hit a tad harder
Hahaha i find it funny each time someone says something like this about one of my clips. its a cut version of the song mate. 8)
haha sorry :u:
Hah, no problem mate 8)

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 10:58 am
by chewie
Some nice tunes in here

@ Juju man - loving Iroshima some real fresh percussion in there and that middle breakdown is sick mate. Impulse is also a goodie you've definitely got your own vibe going on big ups!

@ Jaydot - you need locking up mate some bonkers shit. Foridden planets fuckin intense. Hats sound a little loud on Tokyo Dawn but loving the vibe.

@ Controldubstep - another person who needs a visit to the asylum. That switch up on Skankin on Dank is straight chill love it!

@ Depone - Nice tune man i was expecting something chilled from reading the comments but cellular structure is dutty big ups!

@ Dr Crunk - Liking the old school skank vibe to RRP could maybe do with some more cowbell (jokes) but yeah nice vibes man

Here's some new stuff from me ranging from deep to just plain stupid


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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 1:21 pm
by superginger
#RatRace nice production you going there! "Slinkin" was cool, though the perc didn't really fit in the song (imo).
"You are not alone" was better. First drop was ok, I dont think the melody match too well with the vocals, but the second drop made me jizz. cool vocalediting.

#rhek cool drums, hats and claps. epic drop and very nice wobble! sweet break, though the "house"-synth or w/e does'nt really fit. Don't change the song too much when you finish this!!! it was very good, keep it up.

#tylerblue I like the nice progressive house feeling in the song, something special indeed. song gets quite boring after a while... maybe cut it down a little or get some more variation? but nice work man.

#chewie nice different style on the intro (iridescence), quite chilled wobble, but not too calm... very good. :)
"hammerhead" takes it all. one of the major drops i've heard (atleast top 10). the wobble is so agressive but not exaggerated filthy... it gave me goosebumps. I'd kill for a 320 download! big up man :) (posting a comment on soundcloud too)

great producing all of you! would love some more feedback on my songs. preferably on soundcloud ;) (DL's avaible aswell.)

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 4:07 pm
by Pedro Sánchez
chewie wrote: Soundcloud
Fire! feeling this the most out of the three but they are all really well produced.

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 4:55 pm
by RatRaceProducing
thanks for your kind words n contructive crit. shall be doing some more listening and reviewing later. Bare haps atm, my new hercules mixer arrive today. wewt. should get the monitors next week. braparge!

!Peace!

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 6:36 pm
by wirez
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Enjoy! Will (of course) return all feedback that is given :)

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 7:47 pm
by Depone
wirez wrote:Soundcloud

Enjoy! Will (of course) return all feedback that is given :)
Nice one! Good to hear some original sounding future garage!

My only chrit is that that open hat is a bit too loud in the mix, and becomes a bit of a repetitive sore thumb. I know its garage and its ment to do that :P Just my opinion.

My track is a page back i believe.

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 8:07 pm
by daddy mchectic
Thanks for the feedback people. I'll do some more feedbacking tonight.

Could I get some feedback on this'n. I started it last night and nearly finished it off today, was just hoping for an ear on any mix issues as my lug holes are cream crackered. Cheers.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 8:17 pm
by tylerblue
wirez wrote:Soundcloud

Enjoy! Will (of course) return all feedback that is given :)

Loving this vibe wirez, nice deep feel to it. Good job!

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 8:48 pm
by knapkin
First real dubstep track I've worked on...

I dont have sound where I am, but I assure you I'll give some feedback on some other tunes when I get home.

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It's wobbly, it's nothing super creative, just a really fun time to produce.

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 9:06 pm
by JUJU_MAN
[quote="Depone"] @wirez
"My only chrit is that that open hat is a bit too loud in the mix" (maybe do a little eq on that hat and bring the highs down a few db)

other than that the track is well done mate..

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 10:00 pm
by universeofenergy
First dubstep Ive ever done tips ect thank you!Soundcloud So many ov these tunes are amazing on here!

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 10:35 pm
by unrelat8d
hi i'm new here, so:
man this track has a really vigorous atmosphere. nice.
love the intro. need some mastering, and some reverb i think. :) great tune.
perfect. this is why i "fckin love dubstep"!

great tunes in here.:)

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so here is mine. need some feedback, thanks:)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 11:52 pm
by Wikum
ok so i promised that next time i posted a track in here that i'd give some feedback. please bear in mind that i'm listening through macbook pro laptop speakers, aka tin cans. ok so:

@wirez - i pretty much agree with depone. hat is a tad loud. doesn't bother me though still sounds good. i personally would consider adding some sort of ghostly female vocal stab (or mess around with something similar). but i understand that good vocal stabs aren't that easy to come by.

@juju man - like the akai mpc feel to the tune. not too sure how good that snare is due to the speakers i'm on. possibly could do with some low end punch. from your production skills i'd like to bet you make a fair share of hip hop from what i can tell.

@universeofenergy - nice sounds all but it's more like background music on a horror tv programme right now. maybe that's what you're going for though. it hasn't really got a proper drum beat and i think it would sound better with one.

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:34 am
by wirez
Depone wrote:
wirez wrote:Soundcloud

Enjoy! Will (of course) return all feedback that is given :)
Nice one! Good to hear some original sounding future garage!

My only chrit is that that open hat is a bit too loud in the mix, and becomes a bit of a repetitive sore thumb. I know its garage and its ment to do that :P Just my opinion.

My track is a page back i believe.
Thanks mate, will leave some feedback on your Soundcloud (I thought I already had, usually don't miss a trick :wink:)