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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:39 pm
by conclude
Thx Squalid!
I tried changing the wobble instead, making it more solid, or whatever. The old one was too disted I think.
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 4:47 pm
by dignan
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can I get some construcitve feedback on this one? I'll return the favor!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 4:59 pm
by Squalid
dignan wrote:Soundcloud
can I get some construcitve feedback on this one? I'll return the favor!
I like the drums, pretty unique. The only thing I don't like about it is that kind of siren sound that comes and goes, panned to the right. Doesn't seem to fit with the mood of the track, other than that, pretty chill!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 12:31 am
by dj_yeoku
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 2:31 am
by polygonfiction
Just put the straight url between the soundcloud tags.
So like, [sound cloud]
http://soundcloud.com/user5491060/dub22-2[/sound cloud]
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 9:45 am
by crackf
whatup guys, added a lil more to my hellfire track
i tried added a little break in the song but i took it out, didnt think it fitted, but now it feels a little to short, anny suggestions?
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 9:54 am
by futurist
crackf wrote:whatup guys, added a lil more to my hellfire track
i tried added a little break in the song but i took it out, didnt think it fitted, but now it feels a little to short, anny suggestions?
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it does seem a bit short, not too sure about the drum roll thing tho, i did like the track tho and would like to hear the final version of it when you are done!
Here is something I just started working on:
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Obviously its no where done as it is pretty much just the beginning but I want to know if i should keep going with the feel i started going with on it.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 12:51 pm
by Squalid
futurist wrote:
Here is something I just started working on:
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Obviously its no where done as it is pretty much just the beginning but I want to know if i should keep going with the feel i started going with on it.
Really like the atmosphere of the track and all the random sounds that accompany the drumloop. Kinda makes me think of a safari haha.
The only input I can really think of is that I don't like the intro, just seems a bit boring? But because of the bass and stringy type sample you've got I think it kinda has to be. Not very helpful I know!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 3:15 pm
by dj_yeoku
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 4:32 pm
by Dwaggy
I'm quite entry level in all regards but you gotta start somewhere i guess. Here's 2 loops that aren't finished at all! Hell yeah!
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Reason 4.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 6:52 pm
by Squalid
Dwaggy wrote:I'm quite entry level in all regards but you gotta start somewhere i guess. Here's 2 loops that aren't finished at all! Hell yeah!
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Reason 4.
I like it, but could do with adjusting the vocals volume, can't hear it all that well
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 7:15 pm
by WillP
Here's two of some work-in-progress Dubstep (:
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Share thoughts (:
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 8:51 pm
by tavravlavish
comment on other peoples tracks first asshole
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 8:52 pm
by tavravlavish
Dwaggy wrote:I'm quite entry level in all regards but you gotta start somewhere i guess. Here's 2 loops that aren't finished at all! Hell yeah!
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Reason 4.
comment on other peoples tracks before posting your own
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 8:56 pm
by tavravlavish
think if everyone just posted tunes with out giving other people helpful input, we would just have a bunch of half finished tunes in this thread, everybody do your part.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 9:15 pm
by Dwaggy
tavravlavish wrote:Dwaggy wrote:I'm quite entry level in all regards but you gotta start somewhere i guess. Here's 2 loops that aren't finished at all! Hell yeah!
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Reason 4.
comment on other peoples tracks before posting your own
Sorry! will do :] I thought it'd be rude of me to comment on someone's production when i'm literally just starting. :-/
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 9:28 pm
by cynical
WillP wrote:Here's two of some work-in-progress Dubstep (:
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Share thoughts (:
It sounds nice but I think this needs some random edits to liven things up
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 12:17 am
by JemGrover
Dwaggy wrote:I'm quite entry level in all regards but you gotta start somewhere i guess. Here's 2 loops that aren't finished at all! Hell yeah!
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Reason 4.
Interesting hi-hats in places ( the shuffly bits? ) Not amazingly sure they fit with the mood of the track, as they kind of... throw off the rhythm of the track & loses the drive? If that makes sense? Other then that, sounding pretty spot on.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 12:31 am
by JemGrover
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Come back to this after 3 weeks, and not to sure if it's really happening...
It's leaning more so towards a certain producer who's name begins with "B", so it's not really Dubstep... But worth finishing? I'm in 2 minds.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 12:39 am
by CollisionCourse
thats pretty good, you got your own different sound going on i like it.
if i was you id lose the presets in future, kind of takes away from the track and makes it sound unprofessional. but thats completely IMO.
