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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 12:43 am
by JemGrover
CollisionCourse wrote:
thats pretty good, you got your own different sound going on i like it.
if i was you id lose the presets in future, kind of takes away from the track and makes it sound unprofessional. but thats completely IMO.

Gotta admit, when I used to use Fruity Loops, this was a beast of a preset!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 1:03 am
by JemGrover
Come back to this after 3 weeks, and not to sure if it's really happening...
It's leaning more so towards a certain producer who's name begins with "B", so it's not really Dubstep... But worth finishing? I'm in 2 minds.
( sorry for the repost, other link died )
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 2:47 am
by UnitedFruits
This is my first track ever so it got a lot of things that probably sound very shit.
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 9:18 am
by futurist
okay so i changed how this song starts, i had the drums come in first before.
nowhere near done of course but here is what i have as of now:
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How I had it start before:
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Using
Camel Audio's Alchemy
If anyone would like to collab with me on this song that would be awesome too!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 10:07 am
by crackf
futurist wrote:
How I had it start before:
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think i prefer this one dude
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 11:42 am
by morigami
futurist wrote:okay so i changed how this song starts, i had the drums come in first before.
nowhere near done of course but here is what i have as of now:
Soundcloud
How I had it start before:
Soundcloud
Using
Camel Audio's Alchemy
If anyone would like to collab with me on this song that would be awesome too!
I've heard that drum-loop countless times (have the loop pack myself too). If you have the rest of the loops in that pack then don't just use a plain one without changing it. Chop them up and blend 4+ loops together to make your own ones up.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 12:04 pm
by jaydot
Very rough first dubsteppy effort, criticism welcome.
http://soundcloud.com/jaydot/afraid-of-bees
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 12:14 pm
by WillP
tavravlavish wrote: comment on other peoples tracks first asshole

behave dick splash i will do

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 12:24 pm
by WillP
In my honest opinion, this is boarder line shocking. like you've only just started usin fl
futurist wrote:okay so i changed how this song starts, i had the drums come in first before.
nowhere near done of course but here is what i have as of now:
Soundcloud
How I had it start before:
Soundcloud
Using
Camel Audio's Alchemy
If anyone would like to collab with me on this song that would be awesome too!
This is quality. this is how it's done, nice one fella
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 12:31 pm
by 5k1LLz
crackf wrote:futurist wrote:
How I had it start before:
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think i prefer this one dude
very good sound and production, but it's boring

NHF
so after this minute and 30 sec you could put some main banging tune
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 2:17 pm
by polygonfiction
JemGrover wrote:Come back to this after 3 weeks, and not to sure if it's really happening...
It's leaning more so towards a certain producer who's name begins with "B", so it's not really Dubstep... But worth finishing? I'm in 2 minds.
( sorry for the repost, other link died )
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Its good man, maybe lower the drums in the mix /slightly/. I'd say keep going with it.
Edit: the main, present ones I mean, not so much the ghostly parts.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 2:26 pm
by polygonfiction
futurist wrote:okay so i changed how this song starts, i had the drums come in first before.
nowhere near done of course but here is what i have as of now:
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How I had it start before:
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The new version's sweet.. How about changing up the dynamics a little sooner? Its a good vibe, but I'm wanting to hear some progression.
It a preference thing I guess. Generally I aspire to the 'Toasty' style density, variation and complexity, (not that I've ever got there). But there's a place for the more Shackleton-esque, strung out, languid tracks as well, obviously.
UnitedFruits wrote:This is my first track ever so it got a lot of things that probably sound very shit.
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It's a lot better than my first! Try transposing your kick up or down whilst looking at the Spectrum for that and the sub - the kick isn't very clear. Transposing and eq might help better define it in the mix. Also don't assume its the LFO that makes dubstep, you'll find a lot of people got bored of grinding wobble a while ago. But yeah, great first attempt!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 4:37 pm
by futurist
thanks for the feedback everyone! i will definitely be taking everyones suggestion to my drawing board

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 6:22 pm
by polygonfiction
Been working on this since last night. What d'you reckon, peeps?
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 6:30 pm
by jaydot
Very first effort, messing around with some software. I have never produced anything before (it tells!) and it's a little repetitive but:
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 6:31 pm
by tripwire22
polygonfiction wrote:Been working on this since last night. What d'you reckon, peeps?
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im loving this one big time man the percussion lines are top rank PM me when u finish id love a copy
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 6:35 pm
by jaydot
JemGrover wrote:Come back to this after 3 weeks, and not to sure if it's really happening...
It's leaning more so towards a certain producer who's name begins with "B", so it's not really Dubstep... But worth finishing? I'm in 2 minds.
( sorry for the repost, other link died )
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It's not bad, I like the ambience of it...depends where you want to go with it but I'd carry on just in case

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 8:31 pm
by shredexx
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Working on these... feedback would be cool

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 11:11 pm
by JemGrover
polygonfiction wrote:JemGrover wrote:Come back to this after 3 weeks, and not to sure if it's really happening...
It's leaning more so towards a certain producer who's name begins with "B", so it's not really Dubstep... But worth finishing? I'm in 2 minds.
( sorry for the repost, other link died )
Soundcloud
Its good man, maybe lower the drums in the mix /slightly/. I'd say keep going with it.
Edit: the main, present ones I mean, not so much the ghostly parts.
Mm, that's what I was feeling... Good to get some new ears listening to it, y'know? so cheers. will work on it.
The drums on your track a sounding pretty damn good and that vocal sample works so well... I'm thinking an occasional louder snare for emphasis with the toms might go down a treat?
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 11:28 pm
by JemGrover
jaydot wrote:Very first effort, messing around with some software. I have never produced anything before (it tells!) and it's a little repetitive but:
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Got the general idea down... Just keep on playing with the LFO and you'll soon get an idea of how to change stuff up, along with beefing up the snare & kicks with EQ ( but that all comes down to experience and there's much better advice from other people elsewhere on here, haha )