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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 12:08 am
by toecutter
www.myspace.com/toestep
tune on there, need to sort out the accapella for the intro and its not mixed down propperly cus im waiting on some new mmonitor headphones
(neibours hate bass :@)
anyways tell me what you think
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 12:19 am
by shredexx
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 1:40 am
by junior spesh
Oi! im liking, build ups on both are sik...
The second 1 in particular has one nice bassline, kep up the gud work...
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While ur here, could any1 check out & drop feedback on this ^^^^
Will be returned people
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 1:52 am
by shredexx
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While ur here, could any1 check out & drop feedback on this ^^^^
Will be returned people
yeah man i like it... it sounds a bit strange because it feels like none of the parts are in key with one another... maybe its just my ears being stupid... but thats what im gathering...
also what would sound cool is if you switched up the hihat pattern to mimic the LFO speed of your bassline... its a pretty simple trick and cleans up your beats 10 fold.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 1:59 am
by junior spesh
shredexx wrote:Soundcloud
While ur here, could any1 check out & drop feedback on this ^^^^
Will be returned people
yeah man i like it... it sounds a bit strange because it feels like none of the parts are in key with one another... maybe its just my ears being stupid... but thats what im gathering...
also what would sound cool is if you switched up the hihat pattern to mimic the LFO speed of your bassline... its a pretty simple trick and cleans up your beats 10 fold.
safe 4 the feedback man, will try do dat..
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:24 am
by polygonfiction
shredexx wrote:Soundcloud
While ur here, could any1 check out & drop feedback on this ^^^^
Will be returned people
yeah man i like it... it sounds a bit strange because it feels like none of the parts are in key with one another... maybe its just my ears being stupid... but thats what im gathering...
also what would sound cool is if you switched up the hihat pattern to mimic the LFO speed of your bassline... its a pretty simple trick and cleans up your beats 10 fold.
I agree about the melody.
Maybe also find some percussion samples with more variation in timbre - I feel like I've heard this measure in plenty of stuff before. Cowbells, shakers, even just snare rims can easily raise your beats to something more personal/inventive.
tripwire22 wrote:polygonfiction wrote:Been working on this since last night. What d'you reckon, peeps?
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im loving this one big time man the percussion lines are top rank PM me when u finish id love a copy
Thanks man will do.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 3:07 pm
by stealthtactics
Hey, This is a track I'm putting together right now. Still gonna edit the structure and add a 2nd bassline to switch it up etc...
Feedback is much appreciated
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Peace & love
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 4:08 pm
by CollisionCourse
stealthtactics wrote:Hey, This is a track I'm putting together right now. Still gonna edit the structure and add a 2nd bassline to switch it up etc...
Feedback is much appreciated
Soundcloud
Peace & love
thats sick mate, the sample sounds familiar
is it from rza ft mf doom - biochemical equation?
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 4:48 pm
by stealthtactics
CollisionCourse wrote:stealthtactics wrote:Hey, This is a track I'm putting together right now. Still gonna edit the structure and add a 2nd bassline to switch it up etc...
Feedback is much appreciated
Soundcloud
Peace & love
thats sick mate, the sample sounds familiar
is it from rza ft mf doom - biochemical equation?
Cheers dude! Spot on, yeah thats the tune I sampled..
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 8:21 pm
by miniweapon
i really like this tune i made but the sounds not Crisp enough. How can i fix this?????
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 8:57 pm
by toecutter
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not mixed down, and doesnt have an accapella atm.
waiting on new headphones
feedback pleaseee
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 9:06 pm
by polygonfiction
miniweapon wrote:i really like this tune i made but the sounds not Crisp enough. How can i fix this?????
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I had this problem until recently, although to be fair yours doesn't sound all that lacking treble. I found that getting the right samples was key. In terms of drums, as the production bible rightly instructs - spend the time to layer up elements of your percussion. Like the punch of that snare? Keep the attack, but combine it with the bassy reverb of that other snare you've found somewhere else. Export that as its own sample, then for the kick, and so on.
TBH, the killer in most production is copy/paste. Ypu can hear straight off when someone's duplicating elements to stretch out across the minutes. I do it all the time but I'm trying to stop myself. Its like the difference between a Photoshop filter and a handdrawn sketch - we can feel when time's gone in to every second and every detail of a tune. Try spending a day putting breaks and alternate patterns for your drums, it'll work wonders.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 9:53 pm
by junior spesh
polygonfiction wrote:miniweapon wrote:i really like this tune i made but the sounds not Crisp enough. How can i fix this?????
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I had this problem until recently, although to be fair yours doesn't sound all that lacking treble. I found that getting the right samples was key. In terms of drums, as the production bible rightly instructs - spend the time to layer up elements of your percussion. Like the punch of that snare? Keep the attack, but combine it with the bassy reverb of that other snare you've found somewhere else. Export that as its own sample, then for the kick, and so on.
TBH, the killer in most production is copy/paste. Ypu can hear straight off when someone's duplicating elements to stretch out across the minutes. I do it all the time but I'm trying to stop myself. Its like the difference between a Photoshop filter and a handdrawn sketch - we can feel when time's gone in to every second and every detail of a tune. Try spending a day putting breaks and alternate patterns for your drums, it'll work wonders.
Rah, proper in depth feedback...
I agree wid him doe...
Check this>>>
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:01 pm
by dj_yeoku
JemGrover wrote:jaydot wrote:Very first effort, messing around with some software. I have never produced anything before (it tells!) and it's a little repetitive but:
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Got the general idea down... Just keep on playing with the LFO and you'll soon get an idea of how to change stuff up, along with beefing up the snare & kicks with EQ ( but that all comes down to experience and there's much better advice from other people elsewhere on here, haha )
layer the snare a little more, in dubstep its really gotta smack you in the face, also a lead line every now and again would be good
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:07 pm
by toecutter
junior spesh wrote:
Oi! im liking, build ups on both are sik...
The second 1 in particular has one nice bassline, kep up the gud work...
Soundcloud
While ur here, could any1 check out & drop feedback on this ^^^^
Will be returned people
Love it man, both evil.. build ups are amazing.
check my tune out give me some feedback back, no one seems to be giving it to me
bad times
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 12:53 am
by miniweapon
polygonfiction wrote:miniweapon wrote:i really like this tune i made but the sounds not Crisp enough. How can i fix this?????
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I had this problem until recently, although to be fair yours doesn't sound all that lacking treble. I found that getting the right samples was key. In terms of drums, as the production bible rightly instructs - spend the time to layer up elements of your percussion. Like the punch of that snare? Keep the attack, but combine it with the bassy reverb of that other snare you've found somewhere else. Export that as its own sample, then for the kick, and so on.
TBH, the killer in most production is copy/paste. Ypu can hear straight off when someone's duplicating elements to stretch out across the minutes. I do it all the time but I'm trying to stop myself. Its like the difference between a Photoshop filter and a handdrawn sketch - we can feel when time's gone in to every second and every detail of a tune. Try spending a day putting breaks and alternate patterns for your drums, it'll work wonders.
thanks man i will work on it and update
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 2:41 am
by JemGrover
miniweapon wrote:polygonfiction wrote:miniweapon wrote:i really like this tune i made but the sounds not Crisp enough. How can i fix this?????
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I had this problem until recently, although to be fair yours doesn't sound all that lacking treble. I found that getting the right samples was key. In terms of drums, as the production bible rightly instructs - spend the time to layer up elements of your percussion. Like the punch of that snare? Keep the attack, but combine it with the bassy reverb of that other snare you've found somewhere else. Export that as its own sample, then for the kick, and so on.
TBH, the killer in most production is copy/paste. Ypu can hear straight off when someone's duplicating elements to stretch out across the minutes. I do it all the time but I'm trying to stop myself. Its like the difference between a Photoshop filter and a handdrawn sketch - we can feel when time's gone in to every second and every detail of a tune. Try spending a day putting breaks and alternate patterns for your drums, it'll work wonders.
thanks man i will work on it and update
Mm, I'm no expert mind, but the snare could do with some layering, although mainly wanted to say it was nice to here something a little different to a transformer-esque sound. Really nice vibe to it, I like it!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 6:39 am
by rdub
Here's some drums and a pad I put together today for a track I am new to dubstep production so positive crits would be nice.
http://www14.zippyshare.com/v/22205275/file.html
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:31 am
by MUD DUX
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 3:16 pm
by jaydot
miniweapon wrote:i really like this tune i made but the sounds not Crisp enough. How can i fix this?????
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Really good effort. Nice one