Page 114 of 189

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 5:32 pm
by junior spesh
jaydot wrote:
miniweapon wrote:i really like this tune i made but the sounds not Crisp enough. How can i fix this?????

Soundcloud
Really good effort. Nice one
@ Miniweapon, yh sounds sick so far.. dunno how 2 crispen tho lol

check this 1 out please while ur here ppl.. its a weird 1 Soundcloud :D

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 5:51 pm
by dblth1nk
Soundcloud

Finished this last night. Let me know what you guys think. Mixing tips PLEASE!!!

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 7:54 pm
by DrBio
Im a new user, I see some big producers around here :)

Heres a few samples of what ive been doing first days in december:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6OgyFJ_ifPM

The beats need more work i guess, desigining the sounds has a tedency to take all my attention in this genre.

Comments appriciated

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:21 pm
by jsaxton
Soundcloud

pretty chilled :D

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:25 pm
by stealthtactics
polygonfiction wrote:
miniweapon wrote:i really like this tune i made but the sounds not Crisp enough. How can i fix this?????

Soundcloud

I had this problem until recently, although to be fair yours doesn't sound all that lacking treble. I found that getting the right samples was key. In terms of drums, as the production bible rightly instructs - spend the time to layer up elements of your percussion. Like the punch of that snare? Keep the attack, but combine it with the bassy reverb of that other snare you've found somewhere else. Export that as its own sample, then for the kick, and so on.

TBH, the killer in most production is copy/paste. Ypu can hear straight off when someone's duplicating elements to stretch out across the minutes. I do it all the time but I'm trying to stop myself. Its like the difference between a Photoshop filter and a handdrawn sketch - we can feel when time's gone in to every second and every detail of a tune. Try spending a day putting breaks and alternate patterns for your drums, it'll work wonders.
Good tune you've got going there son, like the feel.

Yeah, I would say add more percussion to keep the vibe more uptempo ish.... I just had a listen on my crappy pc speakers at work so can't hear all the detail but to get it crispy, use some compression on your drum tracks, different types of percussion ie; a few different kinds of hats, some off beat some on, maybe throw in some white noise zaps here and there....

Still, good track so far mate

:e:

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:27 pm
by DrBio
lol , link fixed. check it out!

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 11:59 pm
by the-devo
stealthtactics wrote:Hey, This is a track I'm putting together right now. Still gonna edit the structure and add a 2nd bassline to switch it up etc...
Feedback is much appreciated ;)

Soundcloud

Peace & love
Nice nice! Yeah it does need that 2nd bassline, and maybe some percussions.
Probably it's because my ears got used to being raped by Widdler, but to funken things up, you could add some delayed (maybe 8bit) beeps..maybeh?
I dunno.. Sounds nice though. I like it.
shredexx wrote:Soundcloud
Soundcloud
Working on these... feedback would be cool :)
Both are sick. I like them very much.
I like the basslines in both especially in the second one.
The first one (probably because of the glitch sample) reminds me of Skream - The Shining.
You (and everyone who does as you do too) has my respect, because this is dubstep, not the disgusting rave shit Rusko and his followers produce.
//////////////////////////////////////////////

Hi guys, I'd like to receive some critique/feedback on a song I'm trying to finish.
The drums (kick1, kick2, hihat) will be replaced no matter what because they don't sound good & aren't punchy enough.
So here:

Firstly, if you do not know this video, you will not understand the point of the "joke" or "purpose" of the song.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yavx9yxTrsw (didn't embed because then my post would have taken up the whole page.)

So here's the song:
Soundcloud

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 1:04 am
by blip
Here's my little beast, just the parts and a microarrangement to test it.

Soundcloud

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 5:16 am
by antics dub
so im pretty new to producing and any feedback at all would be very appreciated!

Soundcloud


[/quote="the-devo"] So here's the song:
Soundcloud[/quote]

this is big! i'm really liking the bassline

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 5:22 am
by antics dub
jsaxton wrote:Soundcloud

pretty chilled :D

the drums sound real nice. i'm diggin the abstract vibe

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 8:07 am
by JTRA256
%3Cimg%20style=%22visibility:hidden;width:0px;height:0px;%22%20border=0%20width=0%20height=0%20src=%22http%3A//counters.gigya.com/wildfire/IMP/CXNID=2000002.0NXC/bT*xJmx*PTEyNjAyNTk1OTEyNTcmcHQ9MTI2MDI1OTY*ODA4OSZwPTEwMjI2MSZkPSZnPTEmbz*4MzNhNjIzZGFiNmQ*NmQyYmMwZTk2ZTQ4YmYyNDVkMCZvZj*w.gif%22%20/%3E%3Ca%20href=%22http://www.supload.com/listen?s=hZxJMN%22%3EDownload%20JTRA%20-%20Captain%20Archibald%27s%20Psychedelic%20Circus%3C/a%3E

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 8:24 am
by JTRA256
http://plunder.com/08b5ffdb84
Hopefully this works.....

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 8:52 am
by djaccel
the-devo wrote: So here's the song:
Soundcloud
This is MASSIVE! Big ups mate!

JTRA256 wrote:http://plunder.com/08b5ffdb84
Hopefully this works.....
It won't load I'm afraid...
If you get it up I'll give it a listen.


Here's the latest. What you guys think?
Feedback for those who post.

Soundcloud

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 9:31 am
by m4ng

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 10:53 am
by stealthtactics
djaccel wrote:
the-devo wrote: So here's the song:
Soundcloud
This is MASSIVE! Big ups mate!

JTRA256 wrote:http://plunder.com/08b5ffdb84
Hopefully this works.....
It won't load I'm afraid...
If you get it up I'll give it a listen.


Here's the latest. What you guys think?
Feedback for those who post.

Soundcloud

thats a big tune bro! i like ;)

:e:

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 2:12 pm
by DrBio
Here we go again, im new to this forum and would like some feedback on this fresh WIPs made by me.


Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 3:30 pm
by Dub_Fiend
I just finished this track, I'm not exactly sure whether the basslines are suited, and whether the song actually fits very well...

It's a remix of Muse - Knights of Cydonia :D

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=CBMCKDUK


Dub Fiend

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 4:06 pm
by arktrix45hz
Soundcloud

Newest instrumental I've worked on. Sweet.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 4:10 pm
by jbird22
Yo People,

http://soundcloud.com/the-j-man/goofy-boots


Made this track last night and would like 2 hear your thoughts

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 6:28 pm
by notch
Soundcloud
I start out at the drop..
Ideas are welcome. :D