JemGrover wrote:@ soulshynchyld; Intro's pretty dark. Like it... Not a fan of ping pong delay much, but yeah, personal opinion blah blah blah
The snare's also pretty tasty and I'm not even saying this for a laugh, but MORE COWBELL. Or some other perc after the snare hit would be pretty nice, haha
Looped section of what I've been working on this evening. Bass needs changing up and I'm still looking for the right Asian-y string sample I have in mind. Had to keep the volume down as it's nearly 5am, so the levels might need tweaking, but anyone up for a critique? Soundcloud
really like this tune- has a kl feel to it (:
Ahh, the boards got so messy I'm confused, but on the off chance that was aimed at me? ..Cheers, dude Totaly 'effed the track up somehow though so it now sounds unbareably muddy and I've spent the best part of 3 hours trying to fix it. 'tis on the scrap pile now
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 11:15 pm
by aftee
Project_B wrote:Will be interesting to see what the production forum thinks of this.
Slightly changed things bit, have been told it sounds odd on different speakers but fine on mine so can't really do much about that.
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 3:04 am
by soulshynchyld
k i have cleaned up afew things & dropped the liks, now hopefully i can get some constructive criticism!
im thinking of making it alot heavier & upbeating. will just have to see what happens.
at the mo its just a mad mind trip!!
Mate you're posting a clip to audio in a thread titled "Works-in-progress for feedback" maybe it's me being stupid but I thought that the wanting feedback was implied?
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 11:47 am
by Drekbek
Hey guys and gals been working on a new number
Tell me what u think of it please
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 12:13 pm
by Mold Inpsektor
some track i made about llamas and alpacas. Soundcloud
Here is my current thing, wanna know your thoughts please, be as harsh or kind as you want with feedback I really don't care anymore,
peace
Nice tune in the intro. Don't know about the bitcrushy bass throughout, though. I'd add a different, less talky one in either another part with the same/similar line or combine the two in the mainline. The drums are awesome, though!
DubNemesis wrote:My ongoing work in progress Brain Transplant is in my signature. Feel near to completion with this but still think its lacking a little something. Feedback would be great.
Really liking it. Nice bass! Sounds completed to me, too. Don't really know what to improve, except tweaking the mixdown a little and getting it mastered...
lowpass wrote:@ Abstrym, I like it, Kinda want more kick's / different percussion to give it more of a double time feel, could just be me though
More kicks? It got, like, double bass drums the second half
Elaborate, please? Or are you talking about the huge gaps after the crash cymbals?
DubNemesis wrote:A lot of potential here i think. With a good mix and a bit more variation this could be a banger.
Thanks! Really need to get decent equipment for mixing, soon.
Thanks for the feedback so far, guys.
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 12:44 pm
by rah07
Hi,
Jimmy this side from Canada. Thanks for the giving valuable information. The things mentioned are unanimous and needs to be appreciated by everyone.
Drekbek wrote:Hey guys and gals been working on a new number
Tell me what u think of it please
I feel like this could really be made into something good. It has a really nice feel-good vibe to the whole thing, synths sound pretty cool.
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 6:14 pm
by DubNemesis
Abstrym wrote:
DubNemesis wrote:My ongoing work in progress Brain Transplant is in my signature. Feel near to completion with this but still think its lacking a little something. Feedback would be great.
Really liking it. Nice bass! Sounds completed to me, too. Don't really know what to improve, except tweaking the mixdown a little and getting it mastered...
DubNemesis wrote:A lot of potential here i think. With a good mix and a bit more variation this could be a banger.
Thanks! Really need to get decent equipment for mixing, soon.
Thanks for the feedback so far, guys.
No problem, thanks for your feedback
If you think mine sounds completed maybe thats all i needed to hear haha, just another honest opinion or two. Aye its not the absolute final mix as i usually do that in logic, will get on with that this week if i can find time!!! Damn job is like havin a moany wife who just wont bugger off lol. Except they pay me....Thanks dude much appreciated.
