Feedback Thread

[Sparky]

Nice tracks guys! yeah I'm new to this whole forum thing so i found this and decided to post my newest track so i could get some true feedback from people who will actually take the time to listen to my track:) So, here it is. It's a Dubstep remix of YC's "Racks"! Let me know what you think! Soundcloud

[Tenebriated]

Here's a new one from me: Soundcloud

This is sooo nice. Loving the percussion and subtle use of vocals.
320 of this would be appreciated.

I agree, very cool track.

Thankyou =) JJJ I can send you a 320 of this version. No label is gonna touch it cos of the Billie Jean drums haha, but I've since replaced them.

[Tenebriated]

for now though, i must rest my hungover head =(

[JimmaJamJamie]

Thankyou =) JJJ I can send you a 320 of this version. No label is gonna touch it cos of the Billie Jean drums haha, but I've since replaced them.

Ah fair, yeah please. Cheers man.

[RAZISTA-ELECTRO]

would love feed back on my new track its 128bpm house

cheers Soundcloud

[JimmaJamJamie]

Just uploaded a new one that is still being worked on but here is the basics of it:

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[Ayatollah]

@razista your name means "racist" in poorly spelled italian

[dickman69]

tenebriated - great tune, makes me want to buy serato so i could mix it lol
razista - nice female voice, i feel like ive heard this b4 tho
JJJ - that called "household" b/c u used samples from in ur house? anyway, tune is big, love that snare

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i got tired of playing w/ this one so just stopped working on it sort of

might finish it

[bkwsk]

@razista your name means "racist" in poorly spelled italian

and spanish

[ezza]

lol
razista - nice female voice, i feel like ive heard this b4 tho

[JimmaJamJamie]

JJJ - that called "household" b/c u used samples from in ur house? anyway, tune is big, love that snare

Cheers man. Yeah the kick is me knocking on the window, the knocking all the way through is me knocking on a door and the sound of my door locking every so often.

The production on all your tunes is really crisp and well done, feeling them.

[Tenebriated]

New techno one:

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[ezza]

^^ Big ups! feelin this one man got a nice gritty roll to it & the hi hat fits real nice too.

[Tenebriated]

Thankyou sir. And a garage one I made today:

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[variete]

Tenebriated: really nice vibe in that baby tune! love the deep bassline that comes in, really nails it! would maybe change the snare, or make it a bit more punchy - think that would be the finishing touch - would love a 320

the newest one from me right here:
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[Tenebriated]

Tenebriated: really nice vibe in that baby tune! love the deep bassline that comes in, really nails it! would maybe change the snare, or make it a bit more punchy - think that would be the finishing touch - would love a 320

the newest one from me right here:
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Thankyou for the kind words and feedback / where have you been hiding? This tune is amazing. How did you do the chords?

[variete]

really appreciate it! the chords consists of 3-4 different synths, most of them were i sampled one note and just put it into abletons sampler and played it out

[Tenebriated]

Did you build them in Ableton? I'm clueless with synths, anyway here's a new techno one from me:

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[variete]

Yep all of it in ableton - mostly use Sampler for synths, and then layer it with additional synths - some phasing, chorus and EQ to fit with each other and optimize

Great hihat rhythm in that track - would EQ both the closed a bit more - perhaps take some overall top highs off (but thats just me). The synth is what really makes it though - love the timbre of it, even though i would take out a few lows from it (especially when it hits the lowest notes of the melody, there seems to be some weird dissonances or what you would call it! Some pads would really help the track i think - especially connect the rougher drums and the milder synth together a bit more i think.

[Tenebriated]

Cheers man. I'm listening this morning with fresh ears and what you're saying makes a lot of sense. Should be able to post an amended version later today.

Edit:

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Did a bit more mixing... I rolled off some treble, and the hats and the whole top end still ended up sounding fairly harsh, but I realised that's actually what I wanted in the first place. (I wanted this to sound pretty raw, hence why there are no pads / other instruments at all). I've also cleaned up the synth a little bit. I had a slap back delay which was causing that bit of distortion / dissonance on the bottom end of the chords. Anyway I think it sounds a fair bit tidier after your advice, cheers!