Nice tracks guys! yeah I'm new to this whole forum thing so i found this and decided to post my newest track so i could get some true feedback from people who will actually take the time to listen to my track:) So, here it is. It's a Dubstep remix of YC's "Racks"! Let me know what you think! Soundcloud
Re: Feedback Thread
Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 10:04 am
by Tenebriated
bkwsk wrote:
JimmaJamJamie wrote:
Tenebriated wrote:Here's a new one from me: Soundcloud
This is sooo nice. Loving the percussion and subtle use of vocals.
320 of this would be appreciated.
I agree, very cool track.
Thankyou =) JJJ I can send you a 320 of this version. No label is gonna touch it cos of the Billie Jean drums haha, but I've since replaced them.
Re: Feedback Thread
Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 10:09 am
by Tenebriated
for now though, i must rest my hungover head =(
Re: Feedback Thread
Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 4:41 pm
by JimmaJamJamie
Tenebriated wrote:Thankyou =) JJJ I can send you a 320 of this version. No label is gonna touch it cos of the Billie Jean drums haha, but I've since replaced them.
Ah fair, yeah please. Cheers man.
Re: Feedback Thread
Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 10:11 pm
by RAZISTA-ELECTRO
would love feed back on my new track its 128bpm house
@razista your name means "racist" in poorly spelled italian
Re: Feedback Thread
Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 3:02 am
by dickman69
tenebriated - great tune, makes me want to buy serato so i could mix it lol
razista - nice female voice, i feel like ive heard this b4 tho
JJJ - that called "household" b/c u used samples from in ur house? anyway, tune is big, love that snare
i got tired of playing w/ this one so just stopped working on it sort of
might finish it
Re: Feedback Thread
Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 12:20 pm
by bkwsk
Ayatollah wrote:@razista your name means "racist" in poorly spelled italian
and spanish
Re: Feedback Thread
Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 12:35 pm
by ezza
rayman612 wrote:lol
razista - nice female voice, i feel like ive heard this b4 tho
Re: Feedback Thread
Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 7:02 pm
by JimmaJamJamie
rayman612 wrote:JJJ - that called "household" b/c u used samples from in ur house? anyway, tune is big, love that snare
Cheers man. Yeah the kick is me knocking on the window, the knocking all the way through is me knocking on a door and the sound of my door locking every so often.
The production on all your tunes is really crisp and well done, feeling them.
Tenebriated: really nice vibe in that baby tune! love the deep bassline that comes in, really nails it! would maybe change the snare, or make it a bit more punchy - think that would be the finishing touch - would love a 320
variete wrote:Tenebriated: really nice vibe in that baby tune! love the deep bassline that comes in, really nails it! would maybe change the snare, or make it a bit more punchy - think that would be the finishing touch - would love a 320
Thankyou for the kind words and feedback / where have you been hiding? This tune is amazing. How did you do the chords?
Re: Feedback Thread
Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2012 4:12 pm
by variete
really appreciate it! the chords consists of 3-4 different synths, most of them were i sampled one note and just put it into abletons sampler and played it out
Re: Feedback Thread
Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 12:04 am
by Tenebriated
Did you build them in Ableton? I'm clueless with synths, anyway here's a new techno one from me:
Yep all of it in ableton - mostly use Sampler for synths, and then layer it with additional synths - some phasing, chorus and EQ to fit with each other and optimize
Great hihat rhythm in that track - would EQ both the closed a bit more - perhaps take some overall top highs off (but thats just me). The synth is what really makes it though - love the timbre of it, even though i would take out a few lows from it (especially when it hits the lowest notes of the melody, there seems to be some weird dissonances or what you would call it! Some pads would really help the track i think - especially connect the rougher drums and the milder synth together a bit more i think.
Re: Feedback Thread
Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 7:53 am
by Tenebriated
Cheers man. I'm listening this morning with fresh ears and what you're saying makes a lot of sense. Should be able to post an amended version later today.
Did a bit more mixing... I rolled off some treble, and the hats and the whole top end still ended up sounding fairly harsh, but I realised that's actually what I wanted in the first place. (I wanted this to sound pretty raw, hence why there are no pads / other instruments at all). I've also cleaned up the synth a little bit. I had a slap back delay which was causing that bit of distortion / dissonance on the bottom end of the chords. Anyway I think it sounds a fair bit tidier after your advice, cheers!