ÆIUM wrote:New song in my signature. Check it out.
I think that you possibly could have incorporated the vocal cut at the start into the intro a bit more. As a DJ i can tell this would be a frustrating way to opena track. Even just simple hat pattern to set the tempo and give the DJ something to latch onto would have been good. I also thought there were far too many effects - particularly delay - put onto that part. It makes it quite distracting and loses any mood that you were trying to set in this opening.
I like the beat. Particularly the snare which is incredibly snappy. I think this could have done with a bit more reverb on it however as it sounds a bit flat and you can very much hear that it has been done in a step sequencer. Careful use of reverb eliminates this in most cases.
Some fo the synth effects you use are very cool. I particularly like the filtered sweep noise in the intro.
One mor epoint i'd raise is that the bass doesn't come through enough. I realise this track has a more laid back vibe to it but it would have still been nice to hear a nice warm sub poking thorugh the mix.
Good track all in all but i think it would be made far better with some gentle tweaks made to the final mixdown.
Welcome any feedback, i'm new to dubstep, this was my first proper attempt at a dubstep track.
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Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:59 pm
by christthetiger
sup dub bruddas. im working on this tracl now. its not even close to being done and everything is all over the place towsards the end, but i was just wondering if anyone was feeeeeeelin it. i think its nasty. and it has potential to rip it, just trying to figure out structure aznd trying to listen rather than look. BIG UP!
Hey,
Been making rap/grime beats for about 2 years and really feeling dubstep so i thought I'd give it a go! (http://A1Beats.bebo.com)
Just want to know what people think of this track
Tune is good, It just needs a bit more of a hook or some sort of lead?
Thats just my opninon
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Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 9:00 am
by Max4Beats
Hey,
Been making rap/grime beats for about 2 years and really feeling dubstep so i thought I'd give it a go! (http://A1Beats.bebo.com)
Just want to know what people think of this track
its was pretty cool dude. to tell you the truth, your other beat before this one wasnt good at all, and im not being a dick. i just dont understand the approach you were taking. i think if you applied your effort to making dubsteo with the style of hiphop beats like this one, that you would be better off. what programs do you use?
