good bass. crafty with the vocals and vocal one shots. maybe jut some level adjustments or a good mix down and it could be a nice track. quality for your first take on dubstepMax4Beats wrote:Soundcloud
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We Bang "I am Me" Free tune
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deadnoisesystem wrote:could i get a little more on these two,
much love to those who have done so previously
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first one sounds like the snare is just not hitting hard enough but and maybe that hats just a little higher and brighter. Both tunes though sounds real klever and dark. I dig man
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nice track and that part that starts around 1:56 is sickWe Bang wrote:I agree. I would ditch the soundboy vocal. It kinda just sticks out from rest of the track.deadnoisesystem wrote:i like the intro, but theres no need for the spoken science bit and the soundbwoy bit, pick onechristthetiger wrote:
I've been on a Loefah kick. I think his style off the hook.
Im still working on this track, but I think I'm just gonna let last bassline roll out and through some hats in the mix. checkit!
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Hey guys, first tune I have posted, need to give you my sob story tho! So all my stuff got nicked when I was in the US of A. (The land of dreams apparently) so I making tunes on 10 english pound headphones, I honestly do not know what this really sounds like in regards to the highs and lows !! Any Who any constructive feed back would be cool!!
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ok ive just edited this ive taken the send space link down think im going to get this on soundcloud , seems like the better option!
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ok ive just edited this ive taken the send space link down think im going to get this on soundcloud , seems like the better option!
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reaaaaly digging the second one loving the dark vibes man.. definatly a nice tune for laying back haha!
new work in progress here.. not sure if i've got my sub on the right octave though?
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reaaaaly digging the second one loving the dark vibes man.. definatly a nice tune for laying back haha!
new work in progress here.. not sure if i've got my sub on the right octave though?
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easy,
sorta new to producing dubstep for 16, been making this nice chilled out wobble with bare pads and that haha.. feedback or any tips on vsts or anything that would cool? the snare is a bit shabby, will finish soon
adzman x
sorta new to producing dubstep for 16, been making this nice chilled out wobble with bare pads and that haha.. feedback or any tips on vsts or anything that would cool? the snare is a bit shabby, will finish soon
adzman x
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easy,
sorta new to producing dubstep for 16, been making this nice chilled out wobble with bare pads and that haha.. feedback or any tips on vsts or anything that would cool? the snare is a bit shabby, will finish soon
http://soundcloud.com/adzman/adzman-mellow-intensity
also, could anybody tell me how to get the soundcloud player forum code thing? like, so i can put it on here and signatures etc..
cheers,
adzman x
sorta new to producing dubstep for 16, been making this nice chilled out wobble with bare pads and that haha.. feedback or any tips on vsts or anything that would cool? the snare is a bit shabby, will finish soon
http://soundcloud.com/adzman/adzman-mellow-intensity
also, could anybody tell me how to get the soundcloud player forum code thing? like, so i can put it on here and signatures etc..
cheers,
adzman x
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pretty sweet, needs a little space on the mix, lotta sound going all the time can make it hard on the earsSteezy wrote:easy,
sorta new to producing dubstep for 16, been making this nice chilled out wobble with bare pads and that haha.. feedback or any tips on vsts or anything that would cool? the snare is a bit shabby, will finish soon
http://soundcloud.com/adzman/adzman-mellow-intensity
also, could anybody tell me how to get the soundcloud player forum code thing? like, so i can put it on here and signatures etc..
cheers,
adzman x
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yeah yeah, i know what you mean, ive lowered some sounds etc. now, is there any way i can create, like, 'room' in the tune in any way haha? gonna try to keep it minimal in a way anyway
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keep it mininmal, pan things hard, nice reverb, these all give space, or the impression of spaceSteezy wrote:yeah yeah, i know what you mean, ive lowered some sounds etc. now, is there any way i can create, like, 'room' in the tune in any way haha? gonna try to keep it minimal in a way anyway
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nice synths and automation, beats need to be louder, and some fills too
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fwAueMOQj8o
this is a tune ive been working on today i feel like its missing something but im fresh out of ideas! i also recckon the drop doesnt come in very well. feedback would be awsome cheers!
this is a tune ive been working on today i feel like its missing something but im fresh out of ideas! i also recckon the drop doesnt come in very well. feedback would be awsome cheers!
Legend4ry wrote:Well I am still living in that haze that dubstep is about a dark room with a big system, peoples with their heads down and trigger fingers in the air.
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pretty sweet, nice dark vibesinglepoint wrote:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fwAueMOQj8o
this is a tune ive been working on today i feel like its missing something but im fresh out of ideas! i also recckon the drop doesnt come in very well. feedback would be awsome cheers!
try automating the lfo on the bassline to different speeds, keeps it intersting
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will have a crack at it cheers!
Legend4ry wrote:Well I am still living in that haze that dubstep is about a dark room with a big system, peoples with their heads down and trigger fingers in the air.
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man that is off the hookdedman wrote:@deadnoise
reaaaaly digging the second one loving the dark vibes man.. definatly a nice tune for laying back haha!
new work in progress here.. not sure if i've got my sub on the right octave though?
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the sub at that octave gives it mad drive, love it
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Here's a little something i've begun working on. Your thoughts on it would be most appreciated.
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theres is no real drop or distinctive bassline.Conc wrote:Here's a little something i've begun working on. Your thoughts on it would be most appreciated.
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the melody is good but repetative
make the drums clearer, more distinctive.
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Just an idea of sounds ive got going on.
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The structuring is shit, just threw it around to get my ideas on the timeline.
Will feedback others asap.
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The structuring is shit, just threw it around to get my ideas on the timeline.
Will feedback others asap.
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