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djaccel wrote:This track is pure hate. Wait for the bass at :55.

Leave feedback/comments and I'll do the same

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Real nice man, fuckin love the bass sound and the drums

looking forward to hearing a finished version of this

@thesarge - thanks man, i actually posted that song in my sig for some feedback just a page before so thats cool anyway boss :-]

I'll see what I can do about that part at 57 secs

drakewho wrote:I've revised this track a few times and could really use some critical feedback, I am new to production so anything helps.

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good start, really bouncy tune

my advice would be to add more variation to the drums, make the bass louder/more noticable, and maybe faster tempo? I dunno keep at it tho!

cyberneticghost wrote:I've never posted my work in this thread, but there's a first time for everything, right? So here goes:

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werd I really like the keys, I'd make the drums crisper though

Anakinwasvader wrote:Hai, still putting ideas into this, just trying to get it all down somewhere before I lose motivation to build it up.

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Every kind of feedback is appreciated. Danke.

for some reason I think you need to add djimbe/tabla/any fast hand drum right after the synth intro and scattered through the song, I like the basslines

and for my ditty started yesterday, feedback loved, cheers
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Wabberjocky wrote:and for my ditty started yesterday, feedback loved, cheers
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Man im really feeling this track, if i were you i would add a couple percussive breakdowns or just make more variation on the percussion in general, but i definitely like the variety with the lfo and the general vibe of the track.


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Advice anyone? After a day of trippin out on it i feel quite stuck

Wabberjocky wrote:and for my ditty started yesterday, feedback loved, cheers
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First of all that chanting monk sample is way dope brilliant idea, only advice is make your percussion more powerful and maybe try to fine tune your lfo's a bit a few times they sounded too sporadic.

Hey everybody,

I'm 15 and I've been making Dubstep for a few months with FL Studio, and I've made this little track right here. Unfortunately, the project file got corrupted so I can't go back and work on it anymore Although, I did manage to keep this mp3 clip, so check it out and tell me what you think please!

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Thanks []^_^[]

juntistik wrote:

Wabberjocky wrote:and for my ditty started yesterday, feedback loved, cheers
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Man im really feeling this track, if i were you i would add a couple percussive breakdowns or just make more variation on the percussion in general, but i definitely like the variety with the lfo and the general vibe of the track.


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Advice anyone? After a day of trippin out on it i feel quite stuck

@drake @juntistik thanks! yea I agree n think I just need to go back and take another stab at the percussion for the whole song, and tidy up the muddy bass

@juntistik I think you need to add more textures or variations to the song, like in those breaks like around 0:30 use a sample or something to mix it up, but it's a catchy groove just incomplete!

alexwright wrote:Hey everybody,

I'm 15 and I've been making Dubstep for a few months with FL Studio, and I've made this little track right here. Unfortunately, the project file got corrupted so I can't go back and work on it anymore Although, I did manage to keep this mp3 clip, so check it out and tell me what you think please!

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Thanks []^_^[]

Man at 15 your getting a helluva early start, it sounds good just kind of repetitive, although i lean towards more melodic tracks than most i guess. That family guy clip is fackin hilarious though

cool whip

cool hwhip

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Just messing around with some samples

taken from babylon zoo's spaceman

any tips would hugely appreciated! thanks guys. :-]

could really use some feedback,

still trying to figure out which direction im trying to go in
any input would be nice
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honestly: too much sub?

juntistik wrote:

alexwright wrote:Hey everybody,

I'm 15 and I've been making Dubstep for a few months with FL Studio, and I've made this little track right here. Unfortunately, the project file got corrupted so I can't go back and work on it anymore Although, I did manage to keep this mp3 clip, so check it out and tell me what you think please!

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Thanks []^_^[]

Man at 15 your getting a helluva early start, it sounds good just kind of repetitive, although i lean towards more melodic tracks than most i guess. That family guy clip is fackin hilarious though

cool whip

cool hwhip

This kid's got production on lock, would like to see an official Soundcloud and more tunez of course.

Unmastered, work in progress. Critique is most appreciated, are levels ok more or less? etc.


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This kid's got production on lock, would like to see an official Soundcloud and more tunez of course.[/quote]

defenitly agree with Haack

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I should probably let this track die as its taken so long to get going, but meh, started working a little on the structure side of things, intros/buildups etc have never been my good point but, feedback would be greatly appreciated.

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Anakinwasvader wrote:I should probably let this track die as its taken so long to get going, but meh, started working a little on the structure side of things, intros/buildups etc have never been my good point but, feedback would be greatly appreciated.

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sounding good...the build/intro is actually the best bit imo

keep at it

Anakinwasvader wrote:I should probably let this track die as its taken so long to get going, but meh, started working a little on the structure side of things, intros/buildups etc have never been my good point but, feedback would be greatly appreciated.

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yeah sounds good, theres not much sub or im just being deaf lol
build up is a bit long imo, id take out that laser rise sound from about 0.29 to 0.31 and just have the drop and 0.29. that just me though