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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 1:33 am
by FSTZ
Depone wrote:Here is a new one from me (work in progress)
Any feedback welcome
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good one man!!
love the percs
perfect summer vibe on this
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 1:37 am
by FSTZ
tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud
would love to hear something about this and will offer feedback to who ever has my back
wicked tune man!
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 2:09 am
by tripwire22
FSTZ wrote:hey guys...
any advice on this???
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well this is different i cant really tell u waht to change cuz nothing sounds wrong but i really cant tell u what u can add either cuz it sounds done lol
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 2:51 am
by tripwire22
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just tried my hand at working with a bpm of 150 so let me kno how that works for you
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 3:14 am
by CBK81
Can't figure out which of these I want to work on and flesh out.
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 12:21 pm
by jaydot
Definitely the first one imo. The second is filthy but not as good as the first.
@FTSZ: Well that is diffferent indeed as someone has said....interesting
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 1:15 pm
by Imperial
jaydot wrote:
Definitely the first one imo. The second is filthy but not as good as the first.
@FTSZ: Well that is diffferent indeed as someone has said....interesting
both of these have a lot of potential i feel; with a lot of work i reckon at least one of these could be a good track, my only critism is that its the same sort of sound everyone uses, u should try and find your own style and make your tunes more original
other than that good job, im looking forward to see wat u can do with these
in contrast heres a little tune ive been working on, it could be better in places but i think its alrite overall
feedback is much apprieciated and constructive critism too
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BIG UP!
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 1:51 pm
by jaydot
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Little clip of a track I'm working on at the minute, I'll give some more feedback in a second.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 3:52 pm
by bizmusic
@ jaydot: I like the concept, sounds spooky but coool! I would like to hear bit more clarity in the drums but quite cool and different!! big up!
@ Imperial: I really like the idea and does sound good, everything is all there like the bass's the vocal sample etc. Think it needs all gelling together though, some decent EQing and mixing to everything to give it together will make a huge track!
@ CBK: Both sound sick! really like them both, finish them!
@Zarban: Really feeling that old school kinda vibe, like the samples as well. nice tune! again finish it!
Heres my track...all sorts of Feedback is welcome! just a minor sample...
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 4:41 pm
by tobo
my first track ever;
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would love any feedback or tips of how to make it better from more experienced producers.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 5:49 pm
by jaydot
tobo wrote:my first track ever;
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would love any feedback or tips of how to make it better from more experienced producers.
Like the harp, it's different for a dubstep track, and a good try for first time.
bizmusic wrote:@ jaydot: I like the concept, sounds spooky but coool! I would like to hear bit more clarity in the drums but quite cool and different!! big up!
@ Imperial: I really like the idea and does sound good, everything is all there like the bass's the vocal sample etc. Think it needs all gelling together though, some decent EQing and mixing to everything to give it together will make a huge track!
@ CBK: Both sound sick! really like them both, finish them!
@Zarban: Really feeling that old school kinda vibe, like the samples as well. nice tune! again finish it!
Heres my track...all sorts of Feedback is welcome! just a minor sample...
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Deffo could go somewhere this track, maybe a slightly stronger kick is needed, but it's one of songs that will get into you head after a few plays.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 7:05 pm
by The Phantom Banger
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 8:35 pm
by The Phantom Banger
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 10:11 pm
by BastionMusic
The Phantom Banger wrote:Soundcloud
cause i didnt get any feedback on my previous one.

Not sure i'm feelin this one, the simple melody is fine but the double claps are kinda off putting. It just feels like the track needs more cohesion and a unifying element.
@bizmusic
Definitely a good jumping off point, what about throwing a melody lead or a vocal track on it?
@tobo
I wish the first track I made was this good haha, the final section after 3:27 could be introduced earlier
Here is a tune that I made in various airports a while back...
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 10:15 pm
by zarbanderzot
@bizmusic
definitely beef up that kick. the bassline is great; nice pattern and dope sound. get some samples in there and go primal. create buildup.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 10:31 pm
by antipode
Haven't posted anything in here for a while, here's a couple of tunes I've been working on lately.
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I know the mixdowns are shit. Finally realised that I actually need monitors. feedback appreciated
my soundcard is kapoot on this computer, I'll post some feedback on some stuff later on my other comp

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 11:07 pm
by Loud Flavor
Ez guys, just getting into this genre and I guess I'm still lame at producing but I'll keep going at it til my neighbors call the law for all the noise lol
Here's something I started earlier today,
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 1:17 am
by jheart
initial layout done, need some harmonies and drum variations, other than that feedback?
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 2:59 am
by a.paul
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Any feedback would be great!
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 5:45 am
by jaydot
@jheart:
Like the track, some nice wobbles etc, but that kick pattern, it's almost like a dance beat. I think if you sort the drums out like you say it would be a good track, maybe have 8 bars of an intro to build tension or something as it kicks in quite suddenly (but maybe you went for that?)
@apaul
Yeah man feeling the flute on this, gives it a good atmosphere, nice build up before the main part too, promising starts by both.
My latest is in my sig btw.

Posted it already just looking for additional feedback.