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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 2:59 pm
by acid2
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Went for an even moodier sound, what do you think? Have I gone too far with this?
Afraid the mix down is pretty terrible. I'm on holiday atm, and only have an onboard soundcard and headphones to work with

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 3:02 pm
by acid2
bengreen wrote:Hey my newest beat my first proper try at dubstep, im using fruity loops
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Can you give me some tips on how to improve that? its not finished yet so thats why its short.
cheers
Samples are terrible imo, lose the FOOKIN ARD MATE look, dubstep doesn't need anymore of that.
In terms of possible more useful feedback - the drums have no prescence in this mix at all. I'd try and work at getting that kick to punch through a bit deeper, along with the snare. The bassline isn't bad, but maybe try and bring out a bit more in it. At the moment it's quite stale with not much movement - perhaps some light distortion and some modulation like a very dry flanger or phaser?
Food for thought I hope anyway

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 3:11 pm
by bengreen
ya alright, i put the vocals in because it was just bare without it, i thought it felt empty, and im gonna work on the drums like you said maybe redo them, my mate said that aswell. For the bassline yea ill try adding some distortion etc, also is the drop noticeable? or not?
A way to make my bass move would be making the notes different in piano roll? (higher/lower in octaves)
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 4:16 pm
by tdsdubs
LTUK wrote:CollisionCourse wrote:heres something ive started, feedback please!
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I really like the track, really atmospheric and the drop is awesome - loving the sub-bass. Rather short but I presume you're working on that now

Would love to hear the finished product... The only criticism I have is that the intro is rather long, but that may just me being impatient...
My effort:
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Any feedback would be appreciated - apologies for the awful mixing things always sound much worse on soundcloud.
likin this alot, like the mood, unfortunately can't cmment on the sounds that much as ive had to resort to some swag speakers but i like the jazzy sounds alot, i personally would be down for some kind of reverb or something to spice up the sax a bit, but im likin it alot any feedback on this tune would be appreciated.
http://soundcloud.com/tdsdubs/no-joke
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 5:32 pm
by chrish
Haven't worked on a tune in months & months, but knocked this out early this morning. It's still a WIP, unmixed, but feedback would be dope.....good/bad/ugly
http://virb.com/2410464737369413
TIA
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 10:44 pm
by Pitchdownplease
Always time for a first post, only recently started producing, would just like some feedback on my first project
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 12:12 am
by drenster
Hey a track i would like you to listen to before i finish it up. let me know what you think anything is appreciated. thanks and peace!
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 12:52 am
by Kochari
Pitchdownplease wrote:Always time for a first post, only recently started producing, would just like some feedback on my first project
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mate this is fuckin' sick for a first project, hell its sick full stop!! Don't really know what i can add, maybe vary the velocity in the high hats a bit more? Seriously man, nice job.
I just got logic, here's the first thing i've done with it, feedback greatly appreciated!!
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 1:15 am
by Pitchdownplease
Kochari wrote:Pitchdownplease wrote:Always time for a first post, only recently started producing, would just like some feedback on my first project
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mate this is fuckin' sick for a first project, hell its sick full stop!! Don't really know what i can add, maybe vary the velocity in the high hats a bit more? Seriously man, nice job.
I just got logic, here's the first thing i've done with it, feedback greatly appreciated!!
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Cheers man, Ill take it onboard, you linked my tune btw

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 1:20 am
by Kochari
...oh yeah...
i've edited it now, cheers

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 10:03 am
by bengreen
I decided to stop on my other one, as i felt it didnt feel right to myself so i have started on a new one, one that i feel is achievable by myself at this stage im at
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that's just my intro and a bit of the main, it doesnt have a wobble yet so i was wondering if someone could help me with it.
For the wobble, what speed would suit this best, i pretty much know its going to be a slow tempo one, what sort of sound should it have? effects or just bass
btw - the last bar is where im going to put in the wobble, so it goes quiet then the wobble starts with the drums again
ty
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 11:18 am
by bakedclouds
http://soundcloud.com/baked-clouds/im-n ... ts-tell-me
feedback would be appreciated
happy new year DSF
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 2:50 pm
by ketamine
Tune in sig.
Only 50% finished. (Not going to, I'm bored with it).
Gaps in the song were to be filled in with SFX, there are no sweeps, rises, or bits & bops. Just posting to see what you think of what I "DO" have. Thoughts? Arrangement? Structure? Any feedback is appreciated...
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 2:55 pm
by ketamine
acid2 wrote:Soundcloud
Went for an even moodier sound, what do you think? Have I gone too far with this?
Afraid the mix down is pretty terrible. I'm on holiday atm, and only have an onboard soundcard and headphones to work with

Nice drums. Needs some wicked pads/ synths over this.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 5:41 pm
by bengreen
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Without the bass
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With the bass + some removing of unwanted clipping.
Is the bass good? im gonna change it more later
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 6:18 pm
by tripwire22
ben i like everything but the bass maybe if it sat a bit lower in the scale and wasnt so slow compared to the piano line it would sound better
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 6:23 pm
by bengreen
can you explain what you mean by 'bit lower in the scale' because ive only been doing this for 2 weeks, so im unsure about how to do i

And are you suggesting i speed up the bass?
And thanks alot for the tips!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 6:31 pm
by tripwire22
like lower the bass an octave on the note scale maybe and yeah dont just have simple lines for the bass get it jumpin around a little bit
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 6:33 pm
by bengreen
ahh right yea man ill give that a shot now
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 10:00 pm
by bifta