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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 2:38 am
by ldfd
IanMassoth wrote:Well its like a crunk / party rap lyric. Like lil john or whatever, but the beat has a more intellectual feel, have you heard any gang starr stuff? Check it out on youtube if you haven't. Above the clouds has a similiar style beat.
yeah im actually real familiar with gangstarr, i just really liked this sample cause its more sexy/directed at girls dancing, and i feel it works great with the subbass in the beat
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 7:13 am
by tripwire22
Soundcloud
sorta stuck on this one i feel like it could be big so plz offer some words
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 9:44 am
by fuzionmuse
Soundcloud
Working on this tonight...
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 9:46 am
by deadnoisesystem
tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud
sorta stuck on this one i feel like it could be big so plz offer some words
nice, garage vibe
that lead synth provides a lot of the momentum, but its not easy on the ears, maybe eq it a little
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 9:49 am
by deadnoisesystem
fuzionmuse wrote:Soundcloud
Working on this tonight...
nice beats, that first synth sound is a little cheesy, track needs a little variation but all said thats nearly done and its a banger
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 9:53 am
by deadnoisesystem
AntlionUK wrote:IanMassoth wrote:AntlionUK wrote:these are the first tunes i've made, been mxing for almost 2 years now but so thought i'd have a go at producing.
first is a dubstep tune that is really quote rough at the mo.
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second is a drum 'n' bass tune that just needs a little bit of polish.
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feedback would be awesome. also check out my mixes on soundcloud if you got the time
The high hat in the dnb song kind of takes over the whole thing, try chopping it up and lowering the volume. I noticed taht your layout is good but i felt that the synths were a bit cheesy. Maybe filter them a little and bring in some distortion to give it more interest.
Btw that dnb intro was sick.
cheers man, yeah i haven't mastered it yet so it's kinda all over the place but thanks man!
the dub tune has a good solid foundation, you know what you need to do.
everything he said about the dnb tune i agree with
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 10:01 am
by fuzionmuse
deadnoisesystem wrote:fuzionmuse wrote:Soundcloud
Working on this tonight...
nice beats, that first synth sound is a little cheesy, track needs a little variation but all said thats nearly done and its a banger
Ya, I think I might just put a LP filter on the top synth... the crazyness was just to give it some motion... I need to either shorten it or add some more samples and a bridge... shorten the drop... Hmmmmmm.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 2:12 pm
by mashmash
Soundcloud
hey, this isn't finished yet but i dunno what other people think so feedback is appreciated
the intro is slow at first but soon speeds up
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 2:12 pm
by mashmash
Soundcloud
hey, this isn't finished yet but i dunno what other people think so feedback is appreciated
the intro is slow at first but soon speeds up
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 4:01 pm
by eldon
Soundcloud
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3 Tracks I've been working on recently
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 4:21 pm
by crackf
deadnoisesystem wrote:deadnoisesystem wrote:latest version of this one
few tweaks and new layers
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anyone out there?
yo man, songs getting better for sure, the melody you added is still pretty subtle however, but yeah getting some headway i look forward to hearing more (Y)
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 4:27 pm
by crackf
Geeza wrote:crackf wrote:Geeza wrote:Here's my latest project Regimant
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Been working on this for bout an hour and a half would love a bit of feedback
im aware also the lack of a drop and that but as it says work in progress
nice one man, would be sweet if the drop was a bit more hefty
Thanks heres 1 with a drop tell what you think Im not really that good on drops to be honest
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dude the drops not bad, perhaps on the second one you could loose the wobble before it though, still nice work.
its not that i meant make the build up more heafty, but the drop itself, like its all ready to hit you but then it seems more distant then the intro if you get me?
im not so good with the technical side of it sorry lol
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 4:32 pm
by crackf
well ive worked into my track a little more, i still think the break before the second drop is a little bare, but yeah what d'yall think?
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 5:05 pm
by mashmash
sounds good
but i would take a bit of weight off the snare, personally
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 6:41 pm
by deadnoisesystem
crackf wrote:deadnoisesystem wrote:deadnoisesystem wrote:latest version of this one
few tweaks and new layers
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anyone out there?
yo man, songs getting better for sure, the melody you added is still pretty subtle however, but yeah getting some headway i look forward to hearing more (Y)
cheers mate, next layer is gonna be workin the vocal sample about the mix a bit, and i gotta sort an issue with a kick drum and bass bleed through
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 6:43 pm
by deadnoisesystem
crackf wrote:well ive worked into my track a little more, i still think the break before the second drop is a little bare, but yeah what d'yall think?
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nothing a little sample wouldnt fix
track is sounding good
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 6:47 pm
by twobeans
Soundcloud
Here's another WIP of mine I'd like to hear folk's opinions on.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 6:48 pm
by deadnoisesystem
all sounding good, firtst one bass is sick
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 6:50 pm
by deadnoisesystem
two beans wrote:Soundcloud
Here's another WIP of mine I'd like to hear folk's opinions on.
sounds ruthless mate, needs a bit of poke in the mids that bass is deep
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 6:55 pm
by deadnoisesystem
fuzionmuse wrote:Soundcloud
Working on this tonight...
nice work mate, i like the sounds, production is good
just needs that bit of variation