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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 10:01 am
by jaydot
Soundcloud
Made some MAJOR changes on this one, nearly finished but will act on your kind feedback.

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 2:51 pm
by Layzie18
Grime/dubstep sound.
feedback appreciated greatly.
thanks
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 3:51 pm
by Flipz
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 7:51 pm
by lushman
tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud
just tried my hand at working with a bpm of 150 so let me kno how that works for you
Yeah man, pretty cool - sounds a bit like something of u-ziq's 'Lunatic Harness', nice late 90's warp sound. Be cool to hear where you take it.
My contribution - Guess it's a WIP, had it lying around for a couple of weeks now, interested to see what people make of it. On a sort of Akufen house tip, well to my ears anyway haha
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See what you think..

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 8:53 pm
by Loud Flavor
Just changed up some things and made it more longer now
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 11:40 pm
by mickledan
Bad fooklin mood; soundcloud below
Tell me something other than its morbidly repetative plz, even if you tell me to find another outlet
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 11:42 pm
by mickledan
I've jsut realised something happened to the sample looping on this bounce that shouldn't have, everything after middle should be completely dismissed as is not correct
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 12:44 am
by a.paul
@jaydot
cheers on the feedback! much appreciated.
as for your tune, i would pay for a 320 when its done!
is that enough feedback

super eerie mister!
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 1:57 am
by aftee
Soundcloud
Appreciate any feedback. Will always give your tunes a listen in return if I haven't already.

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 8:05 am
by Loud Flavor
@ aftee, I'm feelin' the bass on that one

keep at it.
Here's the tune I started on two days ago, feedback would be appreciated
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 8:59 am
by aftee
@ loud - great buildup and instant-head nod, neck break action on the drop...personally I'd scratch those wobbles and try to take that high pitched lead somewhere...Really like that. But either way it all sounds spot on, just seems like the wobble business didn't quite fit in
EDIT: Fuck ok, I'd really consider throwing those wobbles to the side and taking the lead somewhere. I can't stop rewinding before the drop and letting it play out ahah...I think that'd be a dooope track if you'd focus more on the lead and keep the original melody you have.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 9:16 am
by Loud Flavor
aftee wrote:@ loud - great buildup and instant-head nod, neck break action on the drop...personally I'd scratch those wobbles and try to take that high pitched lead somewhere...Really like that. But either way it all sounds spot on, just seems like the wobble business didn't quite fit in
EDIT: Fuck ok, I'd really consider throwing those wobbles to the side and taking the lead somewhere. I can't stop rewinding before the drop and letting it play out ahah...I think that'd be a dooope track if you'd focus more on the lead and keep the original melody you have.
Haha thanks for the feedback man, and are you talking about removing the wobbles and work more on the high pitch lead right? I'll get back on this tomorrow after some sleep, I'm drained haha ez.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 10:23 am
by aftee
Loud Flavor wrote:aftee wrote:@ loud - great buildup and instant-head nod, neck break action on the drop...personally I'd scratch those wobbles and try to take that high pitched lead somewhere...Really like that. But either way it all sounds spot on, just seems like the wobble business didn't quite fit in
EDIT: Fuck ok, I'd really consider throwing those wobbles to the side and taking the lead somewhere. I can't stop rewinding before the drop and letting it play out ahah...I think that'd be a dooope track if you'd focus more on the lead and keep the original melody you have.
Haha thanks for the feedback man, and are you talking about removing the wobbles and work more on the high pitch lead right? I'll get back on this tomorrow after some sleep, I'm drained haha ez.
Yeah man..I'd take those wobbles out and just keep that lead in and instead of switching up to wobbles maybe switch the lead up...melody/sound etc. The part where that lead comes in is great but the wobbles just sorta throw the feel of the track off balance. If you could find a way to take em out and progress the track by building off the lead I think you could have something big!
Hit me up with any progress, I gotta have the finished! ahah, off to bed here
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 12:49 pm
by tripwire22
Soundcloud
ima just repost this but this is me working at 150
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 1:23 pm
by baaan
Soundcloud
Don't be too judgmental it's pretty much me just messin around and it's not even close to done but I listen to almost everyone's songs and I figured why not...
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 4:41 pm
by dustyspeakers
Baan - Who cares? i care! i really feel that i love minimal stuff keep up the good work boy
Loud flavor - definite head bopper, feeling the more hip hoppy pad sort of bass more than the im trying to chew my ear off sort of bass
also like the whistles, get rid of the siren tho.
j heart - like the tune, its a bit common tho, I like the bass sound, what program did you make it on?
DUSTY SPEAKERS - LET ME KNOW
this tune is relaxing dubstep if thats possible feedback would be loved
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cheers guys

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 6:42 pm
by Layzie18
@ dustyspeakers - yeah i like that vibe. i think the intros a bit long though. maybe shorten it. also i think the kick is a bit weak . but overall nice.
Grime/dubstep sound.
feedback appreciated greatly.
thanks
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 8:11 pm
by Bledbox
What do people think of this as an intro? not sure where to go with this one...
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Edit: oh yeh its gonna be a dubstep song, but I got bored trying to make a drop I liked so made it crackhouse but I'm gonna change that...
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 8:36 pm
by coyotepeyote
Soundcloud
i dont know what to call this but i took alot of the samples from the forum contest thing.
any criticism is appreciated, thanks
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 9:24 pm
by goose_step
hey guys
wondering about some feedback on the top tune in my player. havent spent much time on it but am open to suggestions.
cheers