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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 8:19 pm
by djchainz
@bengreen comments on the soundcloud...


Guys check out this dirty one i made today:



Whilst it says "remix" i see it more as a "re-imagining".

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 8:30 pm
by bengreen
cheers chainz mate :)

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 10:04 pm
by jaydot
bengreen wrote:Updated my prev one :D

Soundcloud

Crit please lads :D

xx
Not bad at all, I notice the bassline stops momentarily though? Or maybe that's me?

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 10:38 pm
by CollisionCourse
bengreen wrote:Updated my prev one :D

Soundcloud

Crit please lads :D

xx
i noticed the bassline drops momentarily aswell, but some producers do it deliberately to catch you off guard :wink:
nice intro aswell.the kick is very quiet when it drops n the bassline gets alot louder at 1:40 but i dont know you might of done this deliberately aswell.
otherwise nice track, big upeth thy chest :D

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 10:43 pm
by CollisionCourse
johney wrote:
CollisionCourse wrote:HAISUP

this is wot ive been working on have a listen ploys!
http://soundcloud.com/jcollision/real-talk
feedback etc
i´d let the hi-hats join a little earlier (4 bars earlier i think...?) cca at 2:06, it´d give it more rhytmic feeling imo
safe for the feedback, i was doubting anyone would give any since i didnt lol.
yeah i think youre right, should have them come in after the first bar, but i made the full drums first as appose to making each gradual pattern of drum and introduced it after 1 or 2 bars, so i wasnt thinking about what order to put the instruments in first.
any one else care to listen? :D

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 11:01 pm
by bengreen
CollisionCourse wrote:
bengreen wrote:Updated my prev one :D

Soundcloud

Crit please lads :D

xx
i noticed the bassline drops momentarily aswell, but some producers do it deliberately to catch you off guard :wink:
nice intro aswell.the kick is very quiet when it drops n the bassline gets alot louder at 1:40 but i dont know you might of done this deliberately aswell.
otherwise nice track, big upeth thy chest :D
the baseline is on purpose but the 1:40 is an error on my side haha

thanks!

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 11:16 pm
by masm

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 11:28 pm
by tomm
NB: this isn't dubstep but i know a lot of you listen to other shit so it's worth hearing some opinions over here too. track is as of yet just composition with a little bit of leveling. no mixing or shit done after that. just workin with ideas.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/507983/Music/ne ... sion-5.mp3

let me know what you're thinking. i'm planning to add a minute or so of chaotic glitch/braindance lark to the intro with a bit of noise then into the ambient section this track starts with. then i plan to finish it off with a big crescendo of noise and shit. well, thanks for listening anyway. lemme hear your opinions.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 12:33 am
by JemGrover
Downtempo Dubstep.. Unfinished.
Dont really want to ruin the vibe, so kind of unsure about what to do with the bassline. Maybe a deep sine?


Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 1:00 am
by bradicle
Liking this alot eh!! Good work.

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Feedback from anyone be great thx.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 1:35 am
by j_one
JemGrover wrote:Downtempo Dubstep.. Unfinished.
Dont really want to ruin the vibe, so kind of unsure about what to do with the bassline. Maybe a deep sine?

This is sick mate. Lovely vibes. I'd agree with you on the bass, deeeeep sine will compliment this perfectly.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 1:37 am
by j_one
Got a couple new ones in progress... these are 2 step/garage or whatever but have a gander:

Soundcloud

Soundcloud

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 2:00 am
by JemGrover
j-one wrote:Got a couple new ones in progress... these are 2 step/garage or whatever but have a gander:

Soundcloud

Soundcloud
Thanks for the kind words...
Love them both, mate... Especialy the second one. The synths are near perfect. Can't say anything else, other than I reaaally like the atmosphere of it all.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 2:13 am
by aspect-dubz
j-one wrote:Got a couple new ones in progress... these are 2 step/garage or what
ever but have a gander:

Soundcloud

Soundcloud
yeh man, loving these two, i'd definitely rate them as 2step imo. the top one does it for me personally :mrgreen:

here's a little 2stepp'y, garage and dub infusion i just upped.
Soundcloud

its actually in the sig.....ahh fuck it 8)

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 2:21 am
by bass hertz
just a snippit of something wierd.. haven't added changes or the bass...

unknown genre... it's different :D


http://soundcloud.com/basshertz/bass-he ... ve-up-here
Soundcloud

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 2:43 am
by j_one
aspect-dubz wrote:here's a little 2stepp'y, garage and dub infusion i just upped.
Soundcloud

its actually in the sig.....ahh fuck it 8)
I like it man, sick sounds in there, would be curious to hear it with a snappier (more 2 steppy) snare.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 3:09 am
by aspect-dubz
j-one wrote:
aspect-dubz wrote:here's a little 2stepp'y, garage and dub infusion i just upped.
Soundcloud

its actually in the sig.....ahh fuck it 8)
I like it man, sick sounds in there, would be curious to hear it with a snappier (more 2 steppy) snare.
right, nothing a bit of eq'ing couldn't sort out. safe :wink:

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 3:55 am
by gadders
Alreet, fresh from the mixing/mastering thread I've been working on trying to properly structure the mix, getting things theyre own space and stereo positioning and whatnot. Heres a short clip ive been working on, its very simple but any feedback would be greatly appreciated. The final mix was about -6db ish but im not sure whether i've boosted with limiter too much or too little. In hindsight may have overdone the reverb on the snare a touch too.

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Cheers!
Phil

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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 4:30 am
by christthetiger
ez!!!

Soundcloud

think i finished it.

:z:

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 10:36 am
by jaydot
Anyone got feedback for me? Track is in the sig.