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vulvavibration wrote:finished up that track... now, what confuses me is, that on my monitors and the club rig the sub sounds really great , heavy and gives pressure to the chest.
but on almost any other system it has no pressure and the rythm of the sub can't be heard (it should actually accentuate the main beat)

would love to hear some feedback! (and yes, will give back )

big up and thank you

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Mate you have a nice track there, but maybe some of the elements could do with a touch of compression.. mainly the drums, and i would perhaps layer a few more sounds into the top half of the track.. nice tune tho, good vibes.

Couple of new tracks.

House of the Rising Dub
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Baker Street
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http://soundcloud.com/akoma/farewell-ma ... -tinfoiled

Nice tune man - sweet orchestra sounds, maybe a bit more weight in the snare and a little more variation in the latter half of the tune.

Sweet sound

Two new tunes up!

1. Rihanna - Russian Roulette Dubstep Remix
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2. Taking Shape (dubstep, experimental)
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Feedback please

noizy parka wrote:http://soundcloud.com/akoma/farewell-ma ... -tinfoiled

Nice tune man - sweet orchestra sounds, maybe a bit more weight in the snare and a little more variation in the latter half of the tune.

Sweet sound

Thanks for listening dude, totally agree with your comments myself, I was really struggling to find a way to switch up the last section, might go back to it in a few weeks and switch up the bassline, seems like i´ve heard the tune a zillion times now, need a break from it!!!!

With regards to your House of the rising DUB track -

I like the concept, and being a big fan of piano sounds I´m into what you have done with. I think there is scope for a much bigger bassline and the piano does get a tad repetitive, after a few minutes. Good track though keep at it.

Baker St -

Again I like the concept (big up the original!!! saxophones ftw) like the drums on this and the bass, I think the synth you used to recreate the baker st sax is abit too wild and kinda throws me off at times, maybe work on that a little.

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Pretty strange reggae vibe on this one, let me know what you think

Akoma wrote:

noizy parka wrote:http://soundcloud.com/akoma/farewell-ma ... -tinfoiled

Nice tune man - sweet orchestra sounds, maybe a bit more weight in the snare and a little more variation in the latter half of the tune.

Sweet sound

Thanks for listening dude, totally agree with your comments myself, I was really struggling to find a way to switch up the last section, might go back to it in a few weeks and switch up the bassline, seems like i´ve heard the tune a zillion times now, need a break from it!!!!

With regards to your House of the rising DUB track -

I like the concept, and being a big fan of piano sounds I´m into what you have done with. I think there is scope for a much bigger bassline and the piano does get a tad repetitive, after a few minutes. Good track though keep at it.

Baker St -

Again I like the concept (big up the original!!! saxophones ftw) like the drums on this and the bass, I think the synth you used to recreate the baker st sax is abit too wild and kinda throws me off at times, maybe work on that a little.

Thanks for listening mate, been trying to learn sax so hopefully can pull a freestyle on Baker street sometime soon... Thanks again Respect

@jfk

I listened to 1000 yard stare and once again as Ive said before it one of them tracks I wouldnt really like but I do

It just grabbed me from start to finish just a very chilled out ambient tune, id say one of them tunes you wanna listen to whislt you have a hangova, just to chill you out.

I agree with an earlier review stating the lack of bass but then again i think that may be the whole point of the tune and it works especially with the whispering sounds it just grabs you and is very refreshing.

The production levels are very good from what im hearing, but again as ive stated before im very much an amateur on this type of thing so I cant go into depth, but yeah i like it

I'll take a listen to the other bits you have on myspace but for this tune thumbs up!!

@burgle - buzzkill
the build up is tasty but i reckon a little too long for impatient club fillers these days, i love it though!
and the bassline is facemelting
overall i love the variation of it considering how present and how much the bassline carries the song, in most cases like this the song just gets samey and boring, but not in your case
very good, not what i was expecting ill be honest

@geeza - regiment
FUCK ME THAT IS LOUD
dno whether you done it deliberately but it scared the living shit out of me. drop is sound, the reverd on the bassline is a little too obvious in my opinion but it flows sick.
good stuff

@miniweapon - 5th of novermber
the intro is sick, spesh natalie portmans sexy voice!
maybe its just me but on the teaser drop it sounds a bit too compressed, cant really hear the bassline the first time round, the proper drop however is sick and sounds fine. second drop is fucking mean aswell!
big track

@dj loki - mdma
cool intro, i like the 2 step drums and the synths are sick. cant really fault this track besides there doesnt seem to be much going on for what it is, maybe throw in a pad or another melody to carry it for abit longer, that just me though, sick track.

@JFK - 1000 yard stare
that is some heavy shit, drums are BADASS. the ambience and the use of pads scares the shit out of me, in a good way!
deep tune, but fucking heavy. your other tune are sick but i cant be longed with writing up for them sorry

@vulavibration
thanks for listening, glad you like it. i was gonna have those drum changes your on about for a bit longer but i didnt think it really fitted the style of the song, your not the first person thats mentioned it though so i think ill have a look into it lol.

any one wanna have a go at this one?
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ill return it, honest

@collision course

FrostBite
very nice tune, i like the vibe to it it made me imagine space for some reason like exploring new planets and stuff haha

I liked the bass it suited the feel of the track very well also i liked the sorta bottle sample (sorry my brain is dead i cant think of a better description)

Also liked the breaks in there. The ambient vibe was a big plus for me i really enjoyed this tune and give it a thumbs up

Although maybe a soft vocal sample here and there would of added a bit more ummmm ambience but then again i feel this would make the tune obvious.

Great stuff as i dont really enjoy ambient dubstep atall but i do realy like this tune.

Also thanks for reviewing my tune much appreciated

CollisionCourse wrote:@burgle - buzzkill

@miniweapon - 5th of novermber
the intro is sick, spesh natalie portmans sexy voice!
maybe its just me but on the teaser drop it sounds a bit too compressed, cant really hear the bassline the first time round, the proper drop however is sick and sounds fine. second drop is fucking mean aswell!
big track

- i feel like the teaser drop is pretty solid. but what speakers are you using? its a really low bass sounds killer with epic subs!



any one wanna have a go at this one?
Soundcloud
ill return it, honest

i like the vibe of the track. i feel like the church bell could use some Eq and more reverb. Bells always sound good when they have a nice ring

the shadow wrote:

New track!! this ones inspired by the movie V for Vendetta.
really dark feel. This ones goin in Grime Labs new EP

@miniweapon- thats a pretty cool tune, the bass you got in there from the main drop sounds real crisp and full which is great. Lovin that sub bass in the intro as well but Im not a massive fan of the wobbles that come in and out in the intro. Altogether though a very good tune!!!

thx man there will be more comin. Follow me on soundcloud

Could you give mine a listen and feedback, tune called nuclear winter on the soundcloud.
!:

Nuclear winter.
you have a good start here. But it is a really basic track. take your time and make some other bass noises, i usually have 20-30 bass tracks. keep workin at it

the shadow wrote:

New track!! this ones inspired by the movie V for Vendetta.
really dark feel. This ones goin in Grime Labs new EP

@miniweapon- thats a pretty cool tune, the bass you got in there from the main drop sounds real crisp and full which is great. Lovin that sub bass in the intro as well but Im not a massive fan of the wobbles that come in and out in the intro. Altogether though a very good tune!!!

thx man there will be more comin. Follow me on soundcloud

Could you give mine a listen and feedback, tune called nuclear winter on the soundcloud.
!:

Nuclear winter.
you have a good start here. But it is a really basic track. take your time and make some other bass noises, i usually have 20-30 bass tracks. keep workin at it

what up DSF peeps!?!
got some new tracks up on the myspace player.

http://www.myspace.com/deadpostcard

if you like what you hear just shoot me a message and i'll be more than happy to send them to you.

BIG UPS!!
BUKKHA

Hello

First time on this forum, BTW happy new year to everybody !

Here you can listen my dubstep tune : http://www.myspace.com/adrienunik second track on the player called "GIMME SOME"

Feedback are welcome

cheers

Adrien.

noizy parka wrote:

vulvavibration wrote:finished up that track... now, what confuses me is, that on my monitors and the club rig the sub sounds really great , heavy and gives pressure to the chest.
but on almost any other system it has no pressure and the rythm of the sub can't be heard (it should actually accentuate the main beat)

would love to hear some feedback! (and yes, will give back )

big up and thank you

Soundcloud

Mate you have a nice track there, but maybe some of the elements could do with a touch of compression.. mainly the drums, and i would perhaps layer a few more sounds into the top half of the track.. nice tune tho, good vibes.

which elements are you talking about? i guess not the percussion nor the vocals... maybe the little wobble that pops in here and there? i'm curious, tell me more, thank you!

CollisionCourse wrote: any one wanna have a go at this one?
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ill return it, honest

as i wrote in soundcloud.. lovely intro... all in all nice sounds. feels right!
just the hihats that drop at 1:35 are somehow a bit too loud maybe? for my ears at least, it sounds too loud. it's not in the right proportion to the rest. what do others think on that one?
the track may also need a melody, or melodic elements?! not necessary though... but there is def nuff space for more.

big up, i like it!

deadpostcard wrote:what up DSF peeps!?!
got some new tracks up on the myspace player.

if you like what you hear just shoot me a message and i'll be more than happy to send them to you.

BIG UPS!!
BUKKHA

Wheres the link bruv?

Cheers to everyone who left me feedback. Glad your all feeling my stuff

Will do some more feedback tomorrow. Too mashed now

Peace

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i would :LOVE some feedback on this tune i just finished idk if its anything good yet

tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud

i would :LOVE some feedback on this tune i just finished idk if its anything good yet

THE VIBE IS KILLLERRRR!!!!!

some bongos may sound nice in that one