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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 2:46 pm
by junior spesh
graftek wrote:junior spesh wrote:Soundcloud
WOI!!!!!! Send me feeedback baby.... i ALWAYS return it...

I really like the weird basline. Not sure about the strings in the back. I think that if you shuffle around with the drums and creating little pauses etc could be a nice touch.
yh man... anyting u want feedback on?
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 2:56 pm
by orialairo
si-anmc wrote:Kinda new to this site. I have a track i'm working on and wondered what people thought of it before i finished it. I'm not so hot on the whole production jargon so keeping replies simple would help

thanks in advance
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New to the site too man, nice work, liking the rasta samples and the bass line. I did find a bit tedious towards the end. Maybe you need change it up after the vocal breakdown or shorten it.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 3:07 pm
by metzz
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little project im doing, fruityloops.
need to build an intro up for it and add other things but its the basic idea
cheers
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 3:26 pm
by graftek
junior spesh wrote:graftek wrote:junior spesh wrote:
WOI!!!!!! Send me feeedback baby.... i ALWAYS return it...

I really like the weird basline. Not sure about the strings in the back. I think that if you shuffle around with the drums and creating little pauses etc could be a nice touch.
yh man... anyting u want feedback on?
A few posts back I posted some wip. But here's the link to make searching easier. Any feedback is much appreciated.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/7129167112486ebc/
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 4:30 pm
by tripwire22
junior spesh wrote:Soundcloud
WOI!!!!!! Send me feeedback baby.... i ALWAYS return it...

i agree with that other guy those strings or w.e synth line is somewhat cheesy i think it comes down to how it sounds. but the bass is crunk killer drums aint bad neither. i posted a new WIP b4 your original post plz check it
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 4:31 pm
by tripwire22
tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud
i was playing Final Fantasy 7 and just got to the part where u take Aerith home and i had to go make a song it doesnt really sound like final fantasy but idk
Waht is dis sawng? so filthy 320 plzzzzzzzzzzz. id lick my own mammas nutsack and puke durt for a thr33 20.... lol nvm i wouldnt do any of that.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 2:54 pm
by moogmonky
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hi guys i wanna hear some feedback whats up?
greetings
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 3:21 pm
by abakus
metzz wrote:Soundcloud
little project im doing, fruityloops.
need to build an intro up for it and add other things but its the basic idea
cheers
DUTTY AS FUCK!
Love the sample right at the beginning its from resident evil 1 right?
Yeah it's sick bro but add more to it it's a bit short.
All i can really say is that as it is it wont make an
incredible drop but only cos it lacks some sort of rise and buildup, and there's not enoguh time at the beginning for someone to get ready for a fat skanking tune. U could probably also do with a second bass doing some sort of constant tuney wobble underneath thats quieter but will thicken it up a bit and give it more of a tune. Its got some fuckin potential though.
The snare is smack. Just smack. I love it.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 4:29 pm
by Squalid
metzz wrote:Soundcloud
little project im doing, fruityloops.
need to build an intro up for it and add other things but its the basic idea
cheers
Really like it, its got that nicely shuffley feel to it.
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Would be great if I could get some feedback. Any tips or help with how to improve the drop or make it so the drums go a bit better with the wobble towards the end of the clip, cheers.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 6:15 pm
by DjTrainWreck
Heyy yall im lookin for some feedback on this track i just started thanks in advance
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 6:50 pm
by propellant
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made this track yesterday in a few hours. check it out yo
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 9:15 pm
by apfelsaft
Ok, I really need some help here. I saw the bug on saturday - wicked. The set wasn't much different to what I heard him do at glade a few years ago, but this time i listened a bit more intently to work out how he was creating such creepy vibes with his beats. I figure it's a strong sub-bass, cracking snares, 2-step kind of ragga pattern and lots of emptiness between the lows and highs for an MC to fill.
Here's my attempt.
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It didn't really work. There's definately something happening, I think it's ok, but it's not quite there. The sub was loud and decent for me, but a mate listened to it on his system and he said he had to crank the bass right up on full to hear it. Is it too low a frequency, or just not loud enough? He also said the mids in this were dead, it was ALL high and low. I need some tips!

Not just about ^ all that, but in general I'd like to get a bit better at this dubstep shennanigans, so any advice would be lovely. Ta dahlings.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 10:10 pm
by Kochari
been trying to make a decent mixdown, still not happy with it

any help would be appreciated...
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 8:47 am
by bradicle
apfelsaft wrote:Ok, I really need some help here. I saw the bug on saturday - wicked. The set wasn't much different to what I heard him do at glade a few years ago, but this time i listened a bit more intently to work out how he was creating such creepy vibes with his beats. I figure it's a strong sub-bass, cracking snares, 2-step kind of ragga pattern and lots of emptiness between the lows and highs for an MC to fill.
Here's my attempt.
Soundcloud
It didn't really work. There's definately something happening, I think it's ok, but it's not quite there. The sub was loud and decent for me, but a mate listened to it on his system and he said he had to crank the bass right up on full to hear it. Is it too low a frequency, or just not loud enough? He also said the mids in this were dead, it was ALL high and low. I need some tips!

Not just about ^ all that, but in general I'd like to get a bit better at this dubstep shennanigans, so any advice would be lovely. Ta dahlings.

Hrmm. I'm not liking the snare. I think it's too heavy and abrupt for your track. (In my eyes). Sub bass could be a bit louder, my sub wasnt even moving

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Drums sounds all good.
Main thing is that snare I think. Make it a bit more Whippy and not so going to break your face with a sledgehammer, want to get whip lashes from a whip

ahaha.
I've gone on a completely different approach than I usually do. Tried to make something with not your normal wobble, or anything. I'm quite happy with what it's come out thus far.
Feed back would be great. Will definitely give feedback if it's given. Bassline reminds me either extra terrestrial style or electric aha.
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 9:07 am
by DrBio
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 9:08 am
by JFK
Wrong thread. Shit.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 10:10 am
by Freshman
bradicle wrote:I've gone on a completely different approach than I usually do. Tried to make something with not your normal wobble, or anything. I'm quite happy with what it's come out thus far.
Feed back would be great. Will definitely give feedback if it's given. Bassline reminds me either extra terrestrial style or electric aha.
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I like it!
props;
+ nice drums, love the reverse hat/clap. great kick aswell
+ love the alterations on the oscillator later in the snippet.
ideas;
~ it might sound cool to LP or HP the bassline. but that could also completely destroy the idea of the track too, not sure.
~ create a bit more tension in the basslines by dropping a note at the end of the bassline 'loop'
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 9:22 pm
by cynical
GET TO DA CHOPPA!
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I wanted to see what kind of sounds I could get out of Reason and ended up with this.... and yes thats from Predator

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 10:52 pm
by smokestack
sup guys and gals,
ive just started producing, literally. been djing for a while but never got into the production side of things, so what youre about to hear is probably laughable. started using acid a few days ago and just been playing around to get used to it. ive started messing around with a dub tune and rather than flame id appreciate some feedback on the small clip ive made. i haven't mastered anything, simply because i don't know how.
prepare for laughter!
http://soundcloud.com/smokestack/gaycunt
edit: if soundcloud ever creates the waveform
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 2:35 am
by dirtmonkey
Check it! would love some feedback, since ma speakers are broke and I only got headphones to produce on right now.......
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