I DONT GIVE FEEDBACK MUCH SO IM REALLY NOT EXPECTING ANY ....PEEP IT YOU MIGHT BE INTO IT.
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 6:35 am
by DrBio
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:39 am
by bradicle
Freshman wrote:
I like it!
props;
+ nice drums, love the reverse hat/clap. great kick aswell
+ love the alterations on the oscillator later in the snippet.
ideas;
~ it might sound cool to LP or HP the bassline. but that could also completely destroy the idea of the track too, not sure.
~ create a bit more tension in the basslines by dropping a note at the end of the bassline 'loop'
Thanks mate . I've updated it. Got a wee breakdown and a 2nd drop which is pretty fkn warpy !! Anymore feed back welcome, thx
I like this, would like to hear it finished... Im on my laptop speakers im afraid so cant go into detail about the sound/mixdown... but its in progress anyway so...
do some more!!! then post the new version...
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:48 am
by _v_
Kochari wrote:been trying to make a decent mixdown, still not happy with it any help would be appreciated... Soundcloud
this I liked man.... nice chilled vibes, real atmospheric, nice beats and percussion. expected it to gradually breakdown and end, then this nasty wobble comes in and sounds great, took me by surprise that bass, well done.... on the laptop speakers im afraid so cant really comment on the mixdown, but im digging the tune....finish it!!!
I wanted to see what kind of sounds I could get out of Reason and ended up with this.... and yes thats from Predator
definately some promise there somwhere... not really into the sample tho
... you need to think of another section to put in and mix it up a bit/make it longer....
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 9:03 am
by _v_
apfelsaft wrote:Ok, I really need some help here. I saw the bug on saturday - wicked. The set wasn't much different to what I heard him do at glade a few years ago, but this time i listened a bit more intently to work out how he was creating such creepy vibes with his beats. I figure it's a strong sub-bass, cracking snares, 2-step kind of ragga pattern and lots of emptiness between the lows and highs for an MC to fill.
It didn't really work. There's definately something happening, I think it's ok, but it's not quite there. The sub was loud and decent for me, but a mate listened to it on his system and he said he had to crank the bass right up on full to hear it. Is it too low a frequency, or just not loud enough? He also said the mids in this were dead, it was ALL high and low. I need some tips! Not just about ^ all that, but in general I'd like to get a bit better at this dubstep shennanigans, so any advice would be lovely. Ta dahlings.
listened to this the other day and was quite impressed, listening again now... definately vibes I like in this... good drums and atmospheres.. cant really comment on the low end, im on laptop speakers... but ill have another listen on my headphones ( which aint 2 bad) later... keep going man!!!
i'm a noob so don't grill me, i don't know how to put 2 tracks on? hmm
i've put my actual soundcloud address because i've got 2 tracks so yeah
my sweep stupidly fades early, which is strange because i know i didn't mix it like that
but on a serious note, someone check my tracks? i've tried to mix it as best i can, tell me what i should do to improve them? cheers
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 11:44 am
by gadders
Listening through my laptop speakers i like that charlie, perhaps it's a little drawn out but like the melodic quality of it
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 11:48 am
by DrBio
_v_ wrote:
man get a soundcloud. people here will barely listen to tunes even if you do have one, if you dont have one you havnt much chance.....
I have an account, but unable to login, even when reseting password. Im gonna give it a third shot trying to get in now...
i'm a noob so don't grill me, i don't know how to put 2 tracks on? hmm
i've put my actual soundcloud address because i've got 2 tracks so yeah
my sweep stupidly fades early, which is strange because i know i didn't mix it like that
but on a serious note, someone check my tracks? i've tried to mix it as best i can, tell me what i should do to improve them? cheers
not my thing man but its not bad... has a this euphoric ravey feel to it, which I can see others getting into...... keep going man!!! and be nice and return the favor!
need to build an intro up for it and add other things but its the basic idea
cheers
DUTTY AS FUCK!
Love the sample right at the beginning its from resident evil 1 right?
Yeah it's sick bro but add more to it it's a bit short.
All i can really say is that as it is it wont make an incredible drop but only cos it lacks some sort of rise and buildup, and there's not enoguh time at the beginning for someone to get ready for a fat skanking tune. U could probably also do with a second bass doing some sort of constant tuney wobble underneath thats quieter but will thicken it up a bit and give it more of a tune. Its got some fuckin potential though.
The snare is smack. Just smack. I love it.
thanks mate, i need to do some more eq'ing and make another bass pattern now and add some little synths onthe drop or something
anyway, i made the build up using the safe room song off resident 2 (the game)
Would be great if I could get some feedback. Any tips or help with how to improve the drop or make it so the drums go a bit better with the wobble towards the end of the clip, cheers.
and with your song, i like it.. id sayy use a better kick with the drums, and make them floww abit more or make them more glitchy so they dont make sense and put abit more into your build up