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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by princess_raul » Thu Jan 14, 2010 12:15 pm

jsaxton wrote:Soundcloud

feedback please, updated second drop and added samples :D
Haha big, wasn't expecting that.
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Post by jstick » Thu Jan 14, 2010 12:40 pm

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New track, Sampled and cut up vocals from a song by Lazard.

Check it out - I'm kinda proud of the part at 1:35 - 1:49

cheers guys!

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Post by jsaxton » Thu Jan 14, 2010 1:05 pm

can i post hip hop beats on here, you guys are best on feedback so id like you guys to review it :D
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kotku wrote:if something sounds like shit and is not pop then it's techno, or is this definition flawed aswell?

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Post by jackdixon » Thu Jan 14, 2010 1:15 pm




Finished! Thanks guys :mrgreen:

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Post by cloak and dagger » Thu Jan 14, 2010 1:29 pm

music for nerds & heads, preferable if you're both. would love some feedback.


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Post by CollisionCourse » Thu Jan 14, 2010 3:33 pm

princess_raul wrote:
jsaxton wrote:Soundcloud

feedback please, updated second drop and added samples :D
Haha big, wasn't expecting that.
oh my god that is fucking rough! :twisted:

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Post by jsaxton » Thu Jan 14, 2010 3:46 pm

cloak and dagger wrote:music for nerds & heads, preferable if you're both. would love some feedback.


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second drop theres that weird noise that could do with being turned down
but quite a cool track, had me boppin with my subs turned up :P
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kotku wrote:if something sounds like shit and is not pop then it's techno, or is this definition flawed aswell?

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Post by noizy parka » Thu Jan 14, 2010 3:46 pm

jsaxton wrote:Soundcloud

feedback please, updated second drop and added samples :D
Nice mate.. sounding heavy

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Post by CollisionCourse » Thu Jan 14, 2010 3:46 pm

jstick wrote:Soundcloud

New track, Sampled and cut up vocals from a song by Lazard.

Check it out - I'm kinda proud of the part at 1:35 - 1:49

cheers guys!
thats great, the vocals are a bit gimmicky for dubstep in my opinion, but yeah its good. bassline variation works very well in progression with the song, and the part @ 1:35 id be proud of too. :)

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Post by JFK » Thu Jan 14, 2010 3:48 pm

Yes Boys!!!

Havent posted in here for a while. Gonna get some reviews done when I get back home.

Sounds like some good stuff is being posted!!!!!

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Post by tripwire22 » Thu Jan 14, 2010 4:06 pm

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literally just made this a few mins ago. its kinda for this girl. im feeling it but i need some more ears. im gonna be here for a while so ill offer feed back to anyone with something bout this one.

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Post by tripwire22 » Thu Jan 14, 2010 4:08 pm

CollisionCourse wrote:updated version, let me know what you think!
http://soundcloud.com/jcollision/real-talk
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interesting drop no lies. great grooves. only thing not cool is the snare is a bit weak or quiet maybe bring it up just a tad yeah? is that a reverse cymbal? I added you on soundcloud as well

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Post by tripwire22 » Thu Jan 14, 2010 4:10 pm

cloak and dagger wrote:music for nerds & heads, preferable if you're both. would love some feedback.


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Glitchy and smooth kinda hip hop ish im loving this so much

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Post by tripwire22 » Thu Jan 14, 2010 4:11 pm

jackdixon wrote:


Finished! Thanks guys :mrgreen:
big and relaxing vocal reminds me of a Rusko song that had some autotune. wouldnt change anything really man

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Post by tripwire22 » Thu Jan 14, 2010 4:13 pm

jstick wrote:Soundcloud

New track, Sampled and cut up vocals from a song by Lazard.

Check it out - I'm kinda proud of the part at 1:35 - 1:49

cheers guys!
Be VERY proud this song is the shit because of the vocals, its different for dubstep but im loving it so much. Reminds me of this leona lewis remix by pure or w.e his name is on youtube but much better

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Post by 1 ohm » Thu Jan 14, 2010 4:37 pm

need some help please.

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thanks
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Post by JFK » Thu Jan 14, 2010 5:05 pm

1 ohm wrote:need some help please.Soundcloud

thanks
Link not working dude. Repost and we will give it a listen :wink:

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Post by djchainz » Thu Jan 14, 2010 5:14 pm

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^ free 320s just click download on soundcloud

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Post by JFK » Thu Jan 14, 2010 5:35 pm

cloak and dagger wrote:music for nerds & heads, preferable if you're both. would love some feedback.


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This is a seriously cool track. I'll expand a bit on that:

Props:
-Cool glitchy sound. Will bring obvious comparisons to Flylo (not a bad thing :) )
- Organ sounds are nice and full. Sounds very organic to my ears too.
- When the synth and organ combine they compliment each other well and dont clash/sound muddy. Some good eqing coupled with some good musicianship here.
-Nice choice of FX. The rises and falls throughout give it a nice phasing quality which sits well with the glitchy drums.
-@2:20 nice section with no drums. Drops the track down a gear but still keeps the track grooving along.
-@3:40 nice drop into a "stuttery" synth. Sounds cool layered with the other synth and drums. The layering throughout the whole thing is class tbh. One of those "hear something different each time you hear it" tracks.

Advice:
-Maybe have the kick ever so slightly higher in the mix.
-Adding a vocal sample to the first part of the section starting @2:30 would help break it up a little and add even more contrast between this section and the ones its proceeded and preceeded by.
-@2:30 there is a strange synth sound that comes in that is too high in the mix and sounds too "edgy". Doesnt add anything to the whole thing tbh. The track is solid without it bruv :)
- Im listening on headphone so this might be bollocks, but I couldnt hear much bass. So maybe having the bass higher in the mix would be an idea.

Overall:
Fucking loved it. The advice ive given, except maybe for the synth part, is nit picking in the extreme. I had to struggle to find anything negative to say. Good work. Cant wait to hear some more! :w:

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