Haha big, wasn't expecting that.
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New track, Sampled and cut up vocals from a song by Lazard.
Check it out - I'm kinda proud of the part at 1:35 - 1:49
cheers guys!
New track, Sampled and cut up vocals from a song by Lazard.
Check it out - I'm kinda proud of the part at 1:35 - 1:49
cheers guys!
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can i post hip hop beats on here, you guys are best on feedback so id like you guys to review it 
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kotku wrote:if something sounds like shit and is not pop then it's techno, or is this definition flawed aswell?
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Finished! Thanks guys

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oh my god that is fucking rough!princess_raul wrote:Haha big, wasn't expecting that.

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second drop theres that weird noise that could do with being turned downcloak and dagger wrote:music for nerds & heads, preferable if you're both. would love some feedback.
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but quite a cool track, had me boppin with my subs turned up



kotku wrote:if something sounds like shit and is not pop then it's techno, or is this definition flawed aswell?
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Nice mate.. sounding heavy
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thats great, the vocals are a bit gimmicky for dubstep in my opinion, but yeah its good. bassline variation works very well in progression with the song, and the part @ 1:35 id be proud of too.jstick wrote:Soundcloud
New track, Sampled and cut up vocals from a song by Lazard.
Check it out - I'm kinda proud of the part at 1:35 - 1:49
cheers guys!

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Yes Boys!!!
Havent posted in here for a while. Gonna get some reviews done when I get back home.
Sounds like some good stuff is being posted!!!!!
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Havent posted in here for a while. Gonna get some reviews done when I get back home.
Sounds like some good stuff is being posted!!!!!
Peace
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literally just made this a few mins ago. its kinda for this girl. im feeling it but i need some more ears. im gonna be here for a while so ill offer feed back to anyone with something bout this one.
literally just made this a few mins ago. its kinda for this girl. im feeling it but i need some more ears. im gonna be here for a while so ill offer feed back to anyone with something bout this one.
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CollisionCourse wrote:updated version, let me know what you think!
http://soundcloud.com/jcollision/real-talk
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interesting drop no lies. great grooves. only thing not cool is the snare is a bit weak or quiet maybe bring it up just a tad yeah? is that a reverse cymbal? I added you on soundcloud as well
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Glitchy and smooth kinda hip hop ish im loving this so muchcloak and dagger wrote:music for nerds & heads, preferable if you're both. would love some feedback.
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big and relaxing vocal reminds me of a Rusko song that had some autotune. wouldnt change anything really manjackdixon wrote:
Finished! Thanks guys
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Be VERY proud this song is the shit because of the vocals, its different for dubstep but im loving it so much. Reminds me of this leona lewis remix by pure or w.e his name is on youtube but much betterjstick wrote:Soundcloud
New track, Sampled and cut up vocals from a song by Lazard.
Check it out - I'm kinda proud of the part at 1:35 - 1:49
cheers guys!
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Link not working dude. Repost and we will give it a listen

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^ free 320s just click download on soundcloud
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^ free 320s just click download on soundcloud
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This is a seriously cool track. I'll expand a bit on that:cloak and dagger wrote:music for nerds & heads, preferable if you're both. would love some feedback.
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Props:
-Cool glitchy sound. Will bring obvious comparisons to Flylo (not a bad thing

- Organ sounds are nice and full. Sounds very organic to my ears too.
- When the synth and organ combine they compliment each other well and dont clash/sound muddy. Some good eqing coupled with some good musicianship here.
-Nice choice of FX. The rises and falls throughout give it a nice phasing quality which sits well with the glitchy drums.
-@2:20 nice section with no drums. Drops the track down a gear but still keeps the track grooving along.
-@3:40 nice drop into a "stuttery" synth. Sounds cool layered with the other synth and drums. The layering throughout the whole thing is class tbh. One of those "hear something different each time you hear it" tracks.
Advice:
-Maybe have the kick ever so slightly higher in the mix.
-Adding a vocal sample to the first part of the section starting @2:30 would help break it up a little and add even more contrast between this section and the ones its proceeded and preceeded by.
-@2:30 there is a strange synth sound that comes in that is too high in the mix and sounds too "edgy". Doesnt add anything to the whole thing tbh. The track is solid without it bruv

- Im listening on headphone so this might be bollocks, but I couldnt hear much bass. So maybe having the bass higher in the mix would be an idea.
Overall:
Fucking loved it. The advice ive given, except maybe for the synth part, is nit picking in the extreme. I had to struggle to find anything negative to say. Good work. Cant wait to hear some more!

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