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Post by Visitor » Fri Jan 22, 2010 2:33 pm

whats up DSF check it, link in sig

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Post by shanekenton » Fri Jan 22, 2010 4:08 pm

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OW3O0r0Zmy4


Work in progress. Let me know how you think its turning out and or any tips for improving it you might want to send me way.

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Post by nruen » Fri Jan 22, 2010 6:15 pm

WAG wrote:FIRST POST - FIRST DUB. Seriously, just learned Ableton in this past week, tried to bang something substantial out for a few hours tonight. This is the result. After testing it in my car I noticed some kind of weird sub-bass/synth dissonance, but I can't be sure. Let me know. It's supposed to be a head-nodder. 8)

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Sounds fuckin nice, a few production tweaks would sort it out. Try and bring the drums up a little bit, a hard hitting snare would really compliment the bass line. Sounds like there's a bit of bass clipping as well.

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Post by WAG » Fri Jan 22, 2010 7:33 pm

Thanks, yeah I just sorted out my mixing issues... Everything was just way too fucking high in the mix and arbitrarily distributed. Bring it down but pumping the system volume sounds much better than just a blasted out mix. I'm gonna experiment with another snare layer, as I kind of put this kit together real fast just to start messing around.

Will upload a V2 at some point, but any other comments would be appreciated :)

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Post by Novelty » Fri Jan 22, 2010 8:30 pm

I'm new here. I started producing dubstep/dnb/jungle a couple months ago and it has changed my life dramatically...

I'm now a music major.. and my dream is to become a professor at a university teaching in an electronic music studio.

anyways, I got a new computer because my old one died... but before it did, I made something with my daughter and posted it on myspace.

its the last song on the page titled "a work still in progress".. its not the best thing anyone has heard, but you get where I'm coming from. I have only shown this to a few people, but I feel like you guys would be able to give me honest answers as well as some helpful constructive criticism.

HERE IS THE LINK: http://www.myspace.com/kickassbadassthereckoning .... its at the bottom of the music player. the other tracks are TIGHT. Westcoast dub and Mad House are some hard vocal dubstep bangers.. check em too if you'd like.

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Post by nruen » Fri Jan 22, 2010 8:52 pm

WAG wrote:Thanks, yeah I just sorted out my mixing issues... Everything was just way too fucking high in the mix and arbitrarily distributed. Bring it down but pumping the system volume sounds much better than just a blasted out mix. I'm gonna experiment with another snare layer, as I kind of put this kit together real fast just to start messing around.

Will upload a V2 at some point, but any other comments would be appreciated :)
Yea cutting frequencies whilst boosting volume is always a good idea. Stops things from getting too convoluted.

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Post by machination » Fri Jan 22, 2010 10:13 pm

nruen wrote:Hi there, I'm new to dubstep and would like some feedback on a WIP.

:evil: fuckin soundcloud is being a whiny tnuc, not uploading my tracks properly.

This is a remix of Dj Shadow's Blood On The Motorway.

http://img.420chan.org/m/src/bloodub.mp3

I'd agree with previous comments that you may way to add a little bit more variation and energy to the song. I'd concentrate on your lead synth to bring that into the song. I do like where the rmx is heading!
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Post by WAG » Fri Jan 22, 2010 10:20 pm

WAG wrote:FIRST POST - FIRST DUB. Seriously, just learned Ableton in this past week, tried to bang something substantial out for a few hours tonight. This is the result. After testing it in my car I noticed some kind of weird sub-bass/synth dissonance, but I can't be sure. Let me know. It's supposed to be a head-nodder. 8)

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This song has been updated a bit... Fixed the levels and some of the drum parts. Let me know what you think. :D

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Post by shortinos » Fri Jan 22, 2010 10:52 pm

Just a loop i made. I make a loop, polish it up, listen to it for a week, then start something new. That's how it goes with me, i never finish anything...

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Post by WAG » Fri Jan 22, 2010 11:12 pm

It needs some more variation... It seems mostly like atmosphere for me. Of course if you're going for a chilled out vibe, it might not need much else, save for some drum and bass...

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Post by xtchad420 » Sat Jan 23, 2010 6:27 am

hhere's what i got so far, what should i do next? i don't have an intro, this is my first dubstep track


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Og87IpqxF8

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Post by junior spesh » Sat Jan 23, 2010 11:49 am

I made this when i was supposed 2 be revising...

But in a nutshell its CLASSICAL VIOLINZ vs. DUBSTEP!

DROP FEEDBACK AND TELL ME WOT IT IS YOU WANT FEEDBACK ON ASWELL!!

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Post by the wiggle baron » Sat Jan 23, 2010 2:54 pm

Blimey, well I have no idea whats going on here. Started out as something completely different, then I kind of got intrigued by this like...I dunno, weird lounge piano vibe. Fuck knows, but I swear theres something sick possible! Anyhoo, stoked with the percussion, just cant quite figure one thing. Spent hours today trying to sort out the tuning on the bass and the piano, but just cant seem to get some of the chords to gel. I might have over listened it, but anyone got any thoughts? Would be well appreciado

To be fair, I think its more a collection of ideas than a tune at the moment, but i whacked it into some kind of frameworky thing...

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Post by marshy » Sat Jan 23, 2010 4:17 pm

WAG wrote:FIRST POST - FIRST DUB. Seriously, just learned Ableton in this past week, tried to bang something substantial out for a few hours tonight. This is the result. After testing it in my car I noticed some kind of weird sub-bass/synth dissonance, but I can't be sure. Let me know. It's supposed to be a head-nodder. 8)

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Love that little harmonic pinch at 00:31!

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Post by WAG » Sat Jan 23, 2010 6:46 pm

thanks! that's one of those ideas that kind of descends upon you after you've smoked a bit. :o

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Post by mashmash » Sat Jan 23, 2010 7:45 pm

jpoovey wrote:http://soundcloud.com/joshpoovey/chemically-balanced

dubstep track, hits at 3 mins.
wow, nice 8) . my internet connection's really slow for some reason today, so couldn't hear past like 2 minutes.
here's my tune i've been working on. it's not finished yet and ignore the crap vocal samples, i just realised how bad they sound but i can't be bothered to upload another version lol.
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Post by alexwright » Sat Jan 23, 2010 9:37 pm

Hi again everyone,

Made something a little different, have a listen..

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Post by cynical » Sat Jan 23, 2010 10:00 pm

Can someone help me with a song name I'm stuck. Its not a full song yet before anyone tells me to make it longer :P

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