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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 11:50 pm
by Novelty
hehehe... so I just opened up Reason thru Ableton, made a sound on my SH201, sampled it, worked a lil bit of mgic and came up with this in about 20 minutes... I don't plan on doing anything with this, itss just another experiment of mine as I try and figure out how all of my equipment and software work.. I'M NEW!!!
anyways.. its titled "made this in 20 minutes" and can be found here:
http://www.myspace.com/kickassbadassthereckoning
its just somethin for you guys to check out if you'd like... my computer music, projects in electronic music, piano, and world music classes start MONDAY!!! I promise I'll get well soon

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 12:09 am
by mashmash
guys, can you leave the people feedback before you post your own tracks? otherwise no one will actually get any feedback
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 12:58 am
by Novelty
cynical wrote:Can someone help me with a song name I'm stuck. Its not a full song yet before anyone tells me to make it longer
I dunno man.. this is a heavy one.
I kinda like "End of the Night" as a potential title.. I feel like something triumphant is goin down listenin to this beat.. something like doggy style sex...
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 2:27 am
by Sidestepuk
im 15 and this is a New tune i did with a friend. I was thinking of maybe adding some vocal samples in somewhere. And any ideas/ feedback would be appreciated.
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 2:41 am
by futurist
This isn't Dubstep but i would love feedback on this, this is only a clip and its a House style track
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 10:50 am
by cynical
Novelty wrote:hehehe... so I just opened up Reason thru Ableton, made a sound on my SH201, sampled it, worked a lil bit of mgic and came up with this in about 20 minutes... I don't plan on doing anything with this, itss just another experiment of mine as I try and figure out how all of my equipment and software work.. I'M NEW!!!
anyways.. its titled "made this in 20 minutes" and can be found here:
http://www.myspace.com/kickassbadassthereckoning
its just somethin for you guys to check out if you'd like... my computer music, projects in electronic music, piano, and world music classes start MONDAY!!! I promise I'll get well soon

Not bad at all for 20mins work but how come you've got madhouse on your page lol. Good luck with the lessons dude.
Your comment "I feel like something triumphant is goin down listenin to this beat.. something like doggy style sex..." made me fucking lol
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 11:07 am
by cynical
Sidestepuk wrote:im 15 and this is a New tune i did with a friend. I was thinking of maybe adding some vocal samples in somewhere. And any ideas/ feedback would be appreciated.
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Some filthy sounds in that and you could easily turn it into a big tune! Im not to sure on the kick and snare, as everything else is distorted it just doesnt sound right to me. One of your sounds must be really loud as it kinda kills the compression and making the track sound off at (1min and 1.40min ish). keep it up dude
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 11:12 am
by cynical
futurist wrote:This isn't Dubstep but i would love feedback on this, this is only a clip and its a House style track
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Really like this tune, sounds kinda like old style prodigy stuff

My only thing would be to add some kind of variation to the main lead to mix it up a bit
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 11:33 am
by jaydot
Sidestepuk wrote:im 15 and this is a New tune i did with a friend. I was thinking of maybe adding some vocal samples in somewhere. And any ideas/ feedback would be appreciated.
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Too aggro even for me, love the chinese style bass, not bad man!
Tell me what you think of this rough clip, ,not heard it on my sub yet so don't know if it's right:
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 11:37 am
by jaydot
cynical wrote:Can someone help me with a song name I'm stuck. Its not a full song yet before anyone tells me to make it longer
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I don't know what you could call it but I rate it a hell of a lot, nice work.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 11:40 am
by alexwright
Sidestepuk wrote:im 15 and this is a New tune i did with a friend. I was thinking of maybe adding some vocal samples in somewhere. And any ideas/ feedback would be appreciated.
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Hey, I'm 15 too and I make Dubstep, I tell you you're lucky you've got a mate who's in to producing, because I'm all by myself!

For your track, I like how agressive your bass sounds are, (were they made from scratch?) Although, bit too noisy for my liking but that's just me []^_^[]
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 11:44 am
by jaydot
alexwright wrote:Sidestepuk wrote:im 15 and this is a New tune i did with a friend. I was thinking of maybe adding some vocal samples in somewhere. And any ideas/ feedback would be appreciated.
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Hey, I'm 15 too and I make Dubstep, I tell you you're lucky you've got a mate who's in to producing, because I'm all by myself!

For your track, I like how agressive your bass sounds are, (were they made from scratch?) Although, bit too noisy for my liking but that's just me []^_^[]
I wish I had started producin at 15, keep it up lads.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 12:02 pm
by mashmash
hey, i'm also 15, i would really appreciate any feedback on this tune i've been trying to make. ignore the crap vocal samples, i only just realised how bad they sound
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 12:23 pm
by k00sh
could anyone just listen to "the beginning" (coz its the beginning of a track

) and tell me what they think?
obviously its no where near finished,
just for a starting point
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 12:59 pm
by emm
Cheers everyone!
I would love som feedback/comments on this one, its a semiatmospheric tune about staying up late alone, sort of...
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/The Emm
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 1:03 pm
by rallz
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sorry 4 bad quality, still in progress
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 1:06 pm
by miklos
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Need some feedback on the sound!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 1:10 pm
by emm
k00sh wrote:could anyone just listen to "the beginning" (coz its the beginning of a track

) and tell me what they think?
obviously its no where near finished,
just for a starting point
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Well, its a nice beginning, I would want to hear how it goes on after thath. The synthmelody is, to me, a little bit to highpitched, like a tinnitustone (hows that spelled? And no, I'm not disrespecting you, I just cant find a better word to describe it)... Could it be filtered a little bit or transposed a little lower? If I were doing this tune (wich I am obviously not) I would layer the melody with som strings or a pad with lots of reverb with the intention of making a little bit more ambient feeling about the melody with the first synthsound as a kind of nastyish backbone to it, just as a contrast to the wobble. That my 5 pence...
/The Emm
http://soundcloud.com/theemm
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 1:31 pm
by k00sh
emm wrote:k00sh wrote:could anyone just listen to "the beginning" (coz its the beginning of a track

) and tell me what they think?
obviously its no where near finished,
just for a starting point
Soundcloud
Well, its a nice beginning, I would want to hear how it goes on after thath. The synthmelody is, to me, a little bit to highpitched, like a tinnitustone (hows that spelled? And no, I'm not disrespecting you, I just cant find a better word to describe it)... Could it be filtered a little bit or transposed a little lower? If I were doing this tune (wich I am obviously not) I would layer the melody with som strings or a pad with lots of reverb with the intention of making a little bit more ambient feeling about the melody with the first synthsound as a kind of nastyish backbone to it, just as a contrast to the wobble. That my 5 pence...
/The Emm
http://soundcloud.com/theemm
sweet, cheers bro, yeah that was my thoughts tbh, why i posted it here, i wasn't sure if the synth was a contrast or whether it went, like i couldn't tell!
i was thinking of a pad, which ima check out now to swap it with. been tryin to find some synth strings too
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 2:05 pm
by jpoovey
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nice, just figured out how to post the wav file.