latest work in progress, what do you think? Soundcloud
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Posted: Mon Jan 25, 2010 3:20 pm
by reignstep
deadnoisesystem wrote:latest work in progress, what do you think? Soundcloud
Its a good start, you got alot of work tho
-lead melody , you know , a catchy tune
-song's too empty, looks like you only have drums and a bassline, where you should be having alot more effects and background atmosphere
-drums are way to monotone, try to add some variation and also add some percussion, kick snare and high hats aint the limit
-variation off bass, i like the melody but its just way to plain to let it play for 2 whole minutes
-solid subbass, it might be my headphone, but im not hearing any real subtones in your track
good luck with it, looks like a nice start
been mastering this one out, after that im gonna arrange a full length:
Then I added some tempo change and phaser: Soundcloud
Still didnt sound right so I changed the tempo once again, layer the sample twice and made one layer more bassy and i came out with this: Soundcloud
Here is Daft Punk's Song to compare:
I like the idea behind this, and can always appreciate a dubstep remix of some funky house. With tracks like this less is more usually wobblewise. Hit me up when you've got more, I definitely want to hear this!
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Posted: Mon Jan 25, 2010 3:44 pm
by machination
cynical wrote:An updated version of the name less song I'm currently working on. Hope you enjoy
I'm digging the direction the song is going and especially feeling the synths. You may want to add a bit of variation to the drum loop, maybe even a couple more drum hits. Even something thats subtle and barely noticeable can make all the difference.
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Posted: Mon Jan 25, 2010 3:49 pm
by dddemain
deadnoisesystem wrote:latest work in progress, what do you think? Soundcloud
This is sounding really good dude. Few kinks need to be ironed out like the drop, which doesn't feel quite right to me. The bass drums are sounding specially good and the amount of variation is just right.
very atmospheric and deep deep bass. fantastic
edit: thanks for the feedback, your points have been taken and im pressing on with the tune
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Posted: Mon Jan 25, 2010 7:39 pm
by deadnoisesystem
LTUK wrote:
deadnoisesystem wrote:latest work in progress, what do you think? Soundcloud
This is sounding really good dude. Few kinks need to be ironed out like the drop, which doesn't feel quite right to me. The bass drums are sounding specially good and the amount of variation is just right.
Something I've been working on. Pretty rough atm. Any comments/criticism appreciated
thanks for the feedback, it really helps.
your tune, the beats are great, synths are tight and the bass is good
just a bit of variation to keep it busy and youll be laughing
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 25, 2010 8:41 pm
by cynical
machination wrote:
cynical wrote:An updated version of the name less song I'm currently working on. Hope you enjoy
I'm digging the direction the song is going and especially feeling the synths. You may want to add a bit of variation to the drum loop, maybe even a couple more drum hits. Even something thats subtle and barely noticeable can make all the difference.
Thanks man. I will defo shuffle up the drums a bit
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 2:53 am
by mr_ooze
been mastering this one out, after that im gonna arrange a full length: