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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 8:26 am
by bradicle
Myself & Brutaldubber have started something together around the simpsons/flinstones. Bit of a funny track.

Chuck us some feedback would be great :D.

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 2:36 pm
by unglory
2 edgar_pr - I liked it, can add aggressive keys

2 bradicle - Something not understandable with the rhythm of the sample, can be more carefully to work on this? Possible to add the reverse)

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 4:18 pm
by Astral
bradicle wrote:Myself & Brutaldubber have started something together around the simpsons/flinstones. Bit of a funny track.

Chuck us some feedback would be great :D.

Soundcloud

Sounds a little muddy to me, its hard to distinguish certain sounds, perhaps refine your sounds a little, give things a bit more room to breathe.

Your build up before the second drop is really nice, really diggin that.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 4:19 pm
by Astral
edgar_pr wrote:Me and a friend of mine are doing a small collaboration based around Half Life. Ive started off experimenting with a few raw bass sounds, and pretty much making it sound as rugged as possible without clipping the sound. Not uploaded much of it, but i would love to here opinions on the the bass sound and drum work so far. Expect it to be all wrapped up in the next month. Enjoy :evil:

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Feeling it, really nice depth in the drums, bass isn't to in your face, end product should be promising.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 6:01 pm
by metzz
New thing

SOUNDCLOUD WAS BEING A SHITHEAD

so i uped it on youtube (not the best)

anyways constructive feedback please?

Thankyou :)



Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 6:27 pm
by miscend
Hi Guys
This is my first go at Dubstep. I've done a few bars of it so far. The track is meant to be quit chilled. Would appreciate some feedback.


http://beatcreatives.com/save_me_WIP.mp3

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 6:45 pm
by The Phantom Banger
Soundcloud

blap

feel free to review

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 7:47 pm
by bradicle
Astral wrote:
Sounds a little muddy to me, its hard to distinguish certain sounds, perhaps refine your sounds a little, give things a bit more room to breathe.

Your build up before the second drop is really nice, really diggin that.
Great. Thx for the feedback man. Will take it on board :)

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 8:01 pm
by Astral
Uploaded a updated version of what I was working on earlier, come kind souls, give me your feeds xD.

Seriously though, giving feedback straight back.

It is a bit hype I apologies, but not overly so I feel.

http://soundcloud.com/astraldubstep/updatedwip

Soundcloud

Enjoy

Lol, I realised I left a few channels on that wernt meant to be, that weak riser before the first "drop for example" xD Ah well.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 8:12 pm
by metzz
Astral wrote:Uploaded a updated version of what I was working on earlier, come kind souls, give me your feeds xD.

Seriously though, giving feedback straight back.

It is a bit hype I apologies, but not overly so I feel.

http://soundcloud.com/astraldubstep/updatedwip

Soundcloud

Enjoy

Lol, I realised I left a few channels on that wernt meant to be, that weak riser before the first "drop for example" xD Ah well.
I like it, nothing wrong with making a hypeish tune it is nice
The wobbles pretty sick tbh. not really feeling the clap roll thing seems to be abit extra.

anyways overall its pretty good tbh

check my song see if you like it :D

Peace

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 8:20 pm
by Astral
metzz wrote:
Astral wrote: I like it, nothing wrong with making a hypeish tune it is nice
The wobbles pretty sick tbh. not really feeling the clap roll thing seems to be abit extra.

anyways overall its pretty good tbh

check my song see if you like it :D

Peace

That wobble was included in a free massive preset pack I upped on here somewhere ^^, I'd be happy to check your song out, give link.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 8:22 pm
by mr_ooze
Can someone please hook it up with some feedback?!

I'll do the same right back :D


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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 8:26 pm
by Astral
mr_ooze wrote:Can someone please hook it up with some feedback?!

I'll do the same right back :D


Soundcloud

Sounds good, personally Id cut out that 00:41 > 01:06 part, but thats just me.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 8:31 pm
by metzz
Astral wrote:
metzz wrote:
Astral wrote: I like it, nothing wrong with making a hypeish tune it is nice
The wobbles pretty sick tbh. not really feeling the clap roll thing seems to be abit extra.

anyways overall its pretty good tbh

check my song see if you like it :D

Peace

That wobble was included in a free massive preset pack I upped on here somewhere ^^, I'd be happy to check your song out, give link.
its on this page. up abit the youtube video :D

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 8:33 pm
by The Phantom Banger
mr_ooze wrote:Can someone please hook it up with some feedback?!

I'll do the same right back :D


Soundcloud
really like the pacman samples and the use of percussion to fill it out, i reckon the bass at 1.14 should be used a bit more though it really does add alot of grit to the song

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 8:34 pm
by Astral
metzz wrote:
Astral wrote:
metzz wrote:
Astral wrote: I like it, nothing wrong with making a hypeish tune it is nice
The wobbles pretty sick tbh. not really feeling the clap roll thing seems to be abit extra.

anyways overall its pretty good tbh

check my song see if you like it :D

Peace

That wobble was included in a free massive preset pack I upped on here somewhere ^^, I'd be happy to check your song out, give link.
its on this page. up abit the youtube video :D
So it was, nice tune so far, good build up, really gets you in the dark mindset for when it drops

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 8:38 pm
by metzz
Astral wrote:
metzz wrote:
Astral wrote:
metzz wrote:
Astral wrote: I like it, nothing wrong with making a hypeish tune it is nice
The wobbles pretty sick tbh. not really feeling the clap roll thing seems to be abit extra.

anyways overall its pretty good tbh

check my song see if you like it :D

Peace

That wobble was included in a free massive preset pack I upped on here somewhere ^^, I'd be happy to check your song out, give link.
its on this page. up abit the youtube video :D
So it was, nice tune so far, good build up, really gets you in the dark mindset for when it drops
what you think on the bass/wobble side of it?

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 8:46 pm
by The Phantom Banger
Astral wrote:Uploaded a updated version of what I was working on earlier, come kind souls, give me your feeds xD.

Seriously though, giving feedback straight back.

It is a bit hype I apologies, but not overly so I feel.

http://soundcloud.com/astraldubstep/updatedwip

Soundcloud

Enjoy

Lol, I realised I left a few channels on that wernt meant to be, that weak riser before the first "drop for example" xD Ah well.
very nice but personally i think the snare needs a bit more punch, like the variations in the bassline though. Feel free to check the track in my sig

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 9:48 pm
by edgar_pr
bunny on acid wrote:Soundcloud
This is awesome!! Really digging that tuned out synth! And the drum patterns make it flow so well. Great work, pretty much finished though no?

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 11:17 pm
by coyotepeyote
The Phantom Banger wrote:Soundcloud

blap

feel free to review
I actually really like this. at first i was like eh its kinda outa tune but around half way my head was noddin