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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 11:27 pm
by coyotepeyote
http://soundcloud.com/peyotecoyote/moonface
a lil somethin somethin im workin on
its some chillstep
ffeedback appreciated.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 11:50 pm
by LordBid
So this is my latest experiment its very dubby tell me what ya think so far!
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 12:00 am
by The Phantom Banger
cheers for the feedback its nice so far hoping you gonna add more variations as you get further into the track, my only production critisism would be that the kick may be clashing with the sub slightly. Id recommend soloing just the kick and sub for a bit and going at them with some high pass and lowpass filters, or try sidchaing the kick and sub.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 9:43 am
by futurist
@coyotepeyote: Sounding Pretty good!
My Latest work in progress:
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Also a remix:
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 1:47 pm
by faisal
Soundcloud
hi, here's the main hook of a track i'm working on.
Only starting out with dubstep but i hope it's worth a listen..
any comments would be well appreciated

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 2:30 pm
by phrex
it's just the intro... and i wonder if this works out well....
tell me your opinion.
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 3:07 pm
by phrex
faisal wrote:Soundcloud
hi, here's the main hook of a track i'm working on.
Only starting out with dubstep but i hope it's worth a listen..
any comments would be well appreciated

not my type of dubstep. but to keep objective: i think you sidecahined too many alements. at least it sounds like that.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 3:10 pm
by phrex
futurist wrote:@coyotepeyote: Sounding Pretty good!
My Latest work in progress:
Soundcloud
like the vibe on that one... and when the bass drops it's quite heavy... but there is somehow something missing... maybe a bit more variation?
lovely rythm! nice drums! sounds like you have used the reverb of reason for the beat. though i'm probably talking bollocks

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 5:43 pm
by Plasmic aka Hanlo
Soundcloud
Alright just looking for abit of feedback on my latest tune, its kind of on a garage tip, don't reaaally want to say Future Garage yet! Also I have noticed that the main synth may be abit too loud, cheeers!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 8:05 pm
by rhek
Plasmic aka Hanlo wrote:Soundcloud
Alright just looking for abit of feedback on my latest tune, its kind of on a garage tip, don't reaaally want to say Future Garage yet! Also I have noticed that the main synth may be abit too loud, cheeers!
Really like the vibe of this one and lovin the 2-step feel. Only thing i'd say is take the delay off the low end when it kicks in cos it muddies the sound up a bit and maybe come in with a new melody on the later drop but wicked atmos and cool production man

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 10:42 pm
by edgar_pr
Soundcloud
Would be syyyked to get this to a professional standard and worth releasing

But yeah this is my first ever Dubstep track. Been working on the basics for a few hours in total, have adjusted it like crazy a thousand times and this is a snippet of version 2. Went for a futuristic type sound to match the half life theme.
Would be great to hear some opinions and constructive criticism.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 11:25 pm
by rhek
http://soundcloud.com/stlesber/deft-draft-4-full-mp3
Just finished a basic version of this tune. Any feedback much appreciated.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 1:52 am
by deadnoisesystem
edgar_pr wrote:Soundcloud
Would be syyyked to get this to a professional standard and worth releasing
But yeah this is my first ever Dubstep track. Been working on the basics for a few hours in total and this is a snippet of version 2.
Would be great to hear opinions. According to a friend of mine it sounds very basic?
if this is your first ever your doing alright mate
just keep putting the hours and youll be fine
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 1:55 am
by deadnoisesystem
Plasmic aka Hanlo wrote:Soundcloud
Alright just looking for abit of feedback on my latest tune, its kind of on a garage tip, don't reaaally want to say Future Garage yet! Also I have noticed that the main synth may be abit too loud, cheeers!
yeah mate, thats very nice, like the vibes
personly id chuck a bit of delay on the main synth and sit it back a bit in the mix
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 1:56 am
by deadnoisesystem
vulvavibration wrote:it's just the intro... and i wonder if this works out well....
tell me your opinion.
Soundcloud
very atmosperic, nice build up
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 2:00 am
by deadnoisesystem
futurist wrote:@coyotepeyote: Sounding Pretty good!
My Latest work in progress:
Soundcloud
Also a remix:
Soundcloud
with the remix id cut down the vocals from an accapella to a sample of the chorus, and maybe cut it up a bit
tight production on both tunes
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 2:22 am
by deadnoisesystem
this is the latest version of my newest tune
please feedback thank you
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 2:56 am
by flownLess
at deadnoisesystem,
i like the melody but the bass is too distorted and not enough variated.
what kind of filters do you use?
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 4:03 am
by dddemain
this is something i started this morning. idk i know the intro needs a deal of work. Any criticism/advice would be cool
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 12:05 pm
by darronatkinson
Soundcloud
This is my first attempt at dubstep.
It is a remix project for college
any suggestions for improvements would be great