SesG wrote:Hmm, think I maybe joined up all those little bits andd decided it was a pad lol - just felt as if your kick was getting drowned out a little. Would agree that hook writing is probably my weakest point, but yeah it was defo meant to be a super chilled out song so cheers for feedback B)
Yeah i've definitely taken your advice on board in some areas, the piano is staying XD but i've slightly modified the 'squelch' and i'm looking for a way to bring my kick out a bit more, think i might have eq'd it a bit too harsh.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 4:41 pm
by ObsidiaMusic
SesG wrote:
ObsidiaMusic wrote:
Any feedback would be appreciated!
Cheers
Give some to get some man
Check a few pages back...
I always give feedback and rarely get any back. I didn't get any comments on my track even when I gave feedback last time. It's not the first time that has happened either...
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 4:49 pm
by reignstep
ObsidiaMusic wrote:
SesG wrote:
ObsidiaMusic wrote:
Any feedback would be appreciated!
Cheers
Give some to get some man
Check a few pages back...
I always give feedback and rarely get any back. I didn't get any comments on my track even when I gave feedback last time. It's not the first time that has happened either...
Yep that pretty much is a guilt-free pass to posting a next track without giving feedback!
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 4:52 pm
by paravrais
ObsidiaMusic wrote:
SesG wrote:
ObsidiaMusic wrote:
Any feedback would be appreciated!
Cheers
Give some to get some man
Check a few pages back...
I always give feedback and rarely get any back. I didn't get any comments on my track even when I gave feedback last time. It's not the first time that has happened either...
Happens to everyone i'm afraid, doesn't make you above the rules. Even when you *do* get feedback you'll be lucky to get more than one sentence from two seperate people. Just the way it works. There are a LOT of producers on this forum and they all want the same things. Your not as unique as you think
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 4:52 pm
by SesG
Oh bummer :/ Thats why I do mine all in one go, no confusion.
Your track, intro drums and synth sounds are cool but the scream thing isnt to my taste at all... But if your going for a sort of evil clown vibe I guess you've got it.Bass sound is pretty nice when it wells up. Bit crushed yoi-yois a pretty standard now so would leave them out personally. Drums are tight, nothing too fancy but dont think that they need it tbh. Song isnt to my taste but the production is pretty tight so keep at it
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 5:06 pm
by ObsidiaMusic
Anyway, I have posted feedback when I haven't even posted a track of my own before ... I am sure that should make up for the ONE time I posted a track without giving feedback.
Thanks for the feedback SesG.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 5:37 pm
by ENNO
@Rolaz: Love the first track dude, gread old school feel to it, id probably switch it up with a different midi or a different synth after the break. But other than its soundin pretty solid!!
@reignz: Love it dude, has a great vibe to and that lead bassline is KILLER!!! wouldnt say no to a 320 if it came my way
@ObsidiaMusic: Whered ya get those drums
Heres one i posted a while back but ive changed some things about it....let me know what you guys think
So i just got into trying to make dubstep, been making trance, house, euro for a while but could never get the proper motivation to take on the best genre there is in music. This is the percussion of a track ive been working on, for some reason when i approach a dub track I always make the drums/percussion/fx first because my biggest problem is getting a good bass sound/wobble that I like
not entirely mixed/leveled but would love to hear some opinions and criticism (good and bad ) any help with this track would be greatly appreciated
Rubadub13 wrote:So i just got into trying to make dubstep, been making trance, house, euro for a while but could never get the proper motivation to take on the best genre there is in music. This is the percussion of a track ive been working on, for some reason when i approach a dub track I always make the drums/percussion/fx first because my biggest problem is getting a good bass sound/wobble that I like
not entirely mixed/leveled but would love to hear some opinions and criticism (good and bad ) any help with this track would be greatly appreciated
@ObsidiaMusic; Reminds on Nero - Act like ya know, nothing wrong with that. Just a bit more velocity on the strings for me. BIG remix either way!!
@DUb Movement; Reminds of early dubstep like it a lot. Drums could be a bit more in the forefront, and maybe the piano stab could be turned down slightly maybe use more reverb on the stab in parts, jus an idea.
[quote="ObsidiaMusic"][quote="SesG"][quote="ObsidiaMusic"]
Any feedback would be appreciated!
@ObsidiaMusic; Requiem for a Dream.
I'm writing this has I listen: I have heard this track so many times it's a crime BUT!! you have really tried to work around the track, adding the triplets amongst other lil tricks I heard to make it your own. That I appreciate so big ups from me!!
New track I done today; Hope you like I'm trying to push the boundaries of dubstep, by adding more dynamics to dubstep. Does it work tho? only a vocalist can really test this track!!
Obsidia - awsome cut up sample useage. the drop was a little on the low end but i'm only listenin with my tokidoki's so ill listen to it ona better system. Other than that... ill work bro.
@orialairo - try to leave feedback maybe and you will get answered.
@enno - great work, sweet intro, but i go with saef, a little more sub, just my preference though... only thing i saw... (but im on headphones so i'll make a better judgement later)
@ Sesg - awosme drums man... great ambient tune... The vocals don't really fit at like 130 btu that's just me... thought it was a tad bit repetative too...
Saef wrote:Dude, Kaza, that sounds really similar to
Even the drums, man...
Yea in the video i said zed inspired me ^^
But the studder drum pattern is pretty common, used it in other tracks of mine before aswell.
But if it makes ya feel better i can change the title to zed's title and put kaza dubstep remix at the end (I think it looks ultra fucked up tho that way lmao)
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 10:28 pm
by paravrais
Too many people in this thread need a slap so to save time i'm gonna just get out my shlong and smack you all in the face at once. PLEASE LEAVE FEEDBACK BEFORE POSTING YOUR SODDING TUNES, nobody cares about your tunes or how long you spent on them or how good you think you are. We are all producers here and if you don't give you don't deserve to get
paravrais ATTACK!!!!11
Word. I don't even know why it annoys me so much, it just does XD
While i'm here, props to kaza for playing by the rules (obv there are a few more of you here that have done but kaza made a scene about it and I respond well to that :p) - Liking your track, everythings pretty tight and well produced. Not sure i'm feeling your drums *that* much, they do the job but could be a bit more snappy and the snares more wet that I would have had it but thats personal preference I guess. Imo it sound like 'proper' dubstep which you don't hear round these parts too often anymore!
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 10:52 pm
by Siderealdb
@orialairo & Rubadub13-- In addition to what paravrais said, both of you apologized for it not being mixed/leveled. It's one thing if you post it and aren't aware of any mixing fuckups, but a whole other thing if you're aware of it and post it in FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK anyway. So basically you were too lazy to read the rules, to lazy to follow the rules, and too lazy to mix your own songs to the point of not apologizing.
