Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010
Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 11:59 am
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Much better than the last one I heard from you man! The drums are tight most definitely, mix down is sounding pretty good but not perfect. Biggest gripe I have with it is that the main wobble for the bass sounds very basic and not that great which makes it really stand out from the rest of the track which is much higher quality. Pretty understandable seeings as your new to dubstep and it's something hard to get just right. I'd try splitting it into high mid and low mid, put more reverb on the high mid section and EQ both parts a bit harder. Add some attack on the amp on the synth too, maybe try different waveforms in it too, triangle and a square at different octaves would sound nice with the track I reckon but it's up to you lol XD Really like the noise that comes in about 2:40, that scratchy weirdness. Overall it's a nice tune, the drums, sub and high pitched synths are all sounding good dude.RatRaceProducing wrote:I snatched that 320 quick time chris mack lol sick tune!!
I finished one this morning, its softer tune remix of olive you not alone.
Its the top one in my sig, have a listen and let me know what your saying!!
!peace!
Just searched it on youtube, but they sound different enough to me :S. His sounds far better than mine lol. I'll slow mine down a bit later and compare the two to make sure for definite - I don't think they're the same, but you never know, thanks for the heads up. Japan actually reminds me of the melody lines from Sadness and Sorrow, a song in Naruto, except in sadness and sorrow it's played on a dizu (i think) and a piano.reignz wrote: @kaiori : very nice mate , although the eastern violin sequence reminds me alot of Plastician - Japan , abit too much to my liking. Percussion is immense man, loving your snare. Overall very tight production just these violins kinda bother me![]()
Not exacly the same but i think most of the notes are the same. it reminded me ALOT thats all im sayingkaiori breathe wrote:Just searched it on youtube, but they sound different enough to me :S. His sounds far better than mine lol. I'll slow mine down a bit later and compare the two to make sure for definite - I don't think they're the same, but you never know, thanks for the heads up. Japan actually reminds me of the melody lines from Sadness and Sorrow, a song in Naruto, except in sadness and sorrow it's played on a dizu (i think) and a piano.reignz wrote: @kaiori : very nice mate , although the eastern violin sequence reminds me alot of Plastician - Japan , abit too much to my liking. Percussion is immense man, loving your snare. Overall very tight production just these violins kinda bother me![]()
The melody is totally different, it just sounds similar because they are both the same instrument, that chinese stringed thing I dunno the naame of, fyi plastician didn't write his melody, it's a full sample rip jobby from house of the flying daggers XDreignz wrote:Not exacly the same but i think most of the notes are the same. it reminded me ALOT thats all im sayingkaiori breathe wrote:Just searched it on youtube, but they sound different enough to me :S. His sounds far better than mine lol. I'll slow mine down a bit later and compare the two to make sure for definite - I don't think they're the same, but you never know, thanks for the heads up. Japan actually reminds me of the melody lines from Sadness and Sorrow, a song in Naruto, except in sadness and sorrow it's played on a dizu (i think) and a piano.reignz wrote: @kaiori : very nice mate , although the eastern violin sequence reminds me alot of Plastician - Japan , abit too much to my liking. Percussion is immense man, loving your snare. Overall very tight production just these violins kinda bother me![]()
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Nah some of the notes are defo the sameparavrais wrote:The melody is totally different, it just sounds similar because they are both the same instrument, that chinese stringed thing I dunno the naame of, fyi plastician didn't write his melody, it's a full sample rip jobby from house of the flying daggers XDreignz wrote:Not exacly the same but i think most of the notes are the same. it reminded me ALOT thats all im sayingkaiori breathe wrote:Just searched it on youtube, but they sound different enough to me :S. His sounds far better than mine lol. I'll slow mine down a bit later and compare the two to make sure for definite - I don't think they're the same, but you never know, thanks for the heads up. Japan actually reminds me of the melody lines from Sadness and Sorrow, a song in Naruto, except in sadness and sorrow it's played on a dizu (i think) and a piano.reignz wrote: @kaiori : very nice mate , although the eastern violin sequence reminds me alot of Plastician - Japan , abit too much to my liking. Percussion is immense man, loving your snare. Overall very tight production just these violins kinda bother me![]()
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Double edit: Listened back and forth and they might be the same samples XD but the melody does sound really different :s
little bit slow, maybe you were aiming for this though?? nice atmospheric pad, like the drum work as mention above, overall mix is good!Project EX wrote:Like the plucking synth, also not very keen on the bass, it doesn't really fit the tune imo. Might wanna try to switch it up a bit.710 wrote:Sup dudes (and the occasional female)
Thoughts on the song in my sig? It's kind of a slow, lumbering track--but that's what I was going for haha.
Drum work is good, nice variations. Mix is pretty good too.
really nice percussion work crisp sound, as are the vocal hits, the mix his tight all in all, good workkaiori breathe wrote:Just searched it on youtube, but they sound different enough to me :S. His sounds far better than mine lol. I'll slow mine down a bit later and compare the two to make sure for definite - I don't think they're the same, but you never know, thanks for the heads up. Japan actually reminds me of the melody lines from Sadness and Sorrow, a song in Naruto, except in sadness and sorrow it's played on a dizu (i think) and a piano.reignz wrote: @kaiori : very nice mate , although the eastern violin sequence reminds me alot of Plastician - Japan , abit too much to my liking. Percussion is immense man, loving your snare. Overall very tight production just these violins kinda bother me![]()
luving this one, great drum work, liking the delayed electric piano as well, mix is greatChris mack wrote:@Paravrais I like intro. Cool noise, but to me the high pitched synth sort of killed it. Just a personal opion. Good work with the drums, although they could be brought slightly foward in the mix.
@Iron ears I love the vibe of the track and was really intrigued at the start. I liked the way you developed it but there seemed to be no immediate pay off interms of the drums. Cool vocal and great vibe.
@Craggle I liked it! Very Joker esqe. Nice work with the synth melody and arpegiation. It all seems to sit very nicely. Good track
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absolute bliss, mix is clean as a whistle. im not much for minimal music but this touches me in a sweet spot. my balls.JUJU_MAN wrote:luving this one, great drum work, liking the delayed electric piano as well, mix is greatChris mack wrote:@Paravrais I like intro. Cool noise, but to me the high pitched synth sort of killed it. Just a personal opion. Good work with the drums, although they could be brought slightly foward in the mix.
@Iron ears I love the vibe of the track and was really intrigued at the start. I liked the way you developed it but there seemed to be no immediate pay off interms of the drums. Cool vocal and great vibe.
@Craggle I liked it! Very Joker esqe. Nice work with the synth melody and arpegiation. It all seems to sit very nicely. Good track
Heres my second post on these forums as my first got locked as i didn't know about this thread. Here is my latest choon
A deep dubstep track
CHEERS!
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