Thanks to everyone for all the feedback on my last tune, as promised, here's crit for the entire of page 16:
@dubsax outlaw love the sample use and all the cymbal work, very slick tune, has a great sheen of professional production value to it, and it's very well written and arranged too. Some strange sounds too, in a good way, that I would never have been able to make work together but you've made them gel very well. Lots of nice variation and ideas to keep it all fresh too. Well done, this is a very good track.
@BadBoyBastian3B
it's not really my style but it's well produced, sounds good man
@creeptown
Love it, and I love that you did something you felt was a bit different, it's all about experimentation, the build up is very well done, and the drop is great too, very well put together man, it's a really big tune.
@ vdbproductions I usually don't give crit on tunes I'm not keen on but I did say I'd do all of page 16 so, I mean, it's a good tune, it's well produced, but I've kinda heard it before, although that isn't a fair criticism in my books - if you're making music you like you shouldn't give a flying fuck whether people think it's been done before. Hell most of what I've done has been done a million times before. So yea, it's a good tune, just to me personally I don't think it stands out from a lot of dubstep I hear each day :/ - really sorry to say that, hope you're not offended or anything. It's just maybe personal taste I guess.
@projekt At first I thought it was good, then I thought it was great. Love those big deep hits. Well done man
@ jimlincoln solid tune man, feels a little repetitive to me, mostly due to the sections feeling a little ill defined, it feels like one long section, I don't know if that was intended or a stylistic thing and if it was i apologies for my ignorance. If you're using vocals in a track there's nothing wrong with a bit of silence here and there to help define the structure a little better. It's well produced though and there are some nice drum patterns going on.
@secretpandasociety Its alright. Not really my thing. Kinda sounds like a chaotic palet filled to the brim with as many noises as you could fit in :/
@krave solid work man, enjoyable tune, big.
@ wobbafet, solid work on this one man, it feels a little repetitive to be honest, but I think you just about get away with it, there's some good rhythms the only thing I'd really complain about is that you've used one chord the whole way through :S maybe spice it up a bit next tune?
@indodubstep, cool tune, reminds me of the synth used in bodyrox or bodyrocks whatever it was by the yeah yeah yeahs or whoever they were lol. Jesus that's so vague

anyway, cool sounds.
@ citcuitdnb tune sounds good for a first stab at dubstep, i think you have all the ideas down, sounds are good, production value is pretty strong too. Maybe a little more variation in the hi-hats would be nice next time :/
@dj2slo this is weird as fuck but strangely I like it.
@ alexwright some great sounds in this one man, seriously good tune, very inventive, well to my ears anyway, love the broken feel in the rhythm - great grooves and synths and there's lots of variation too which is good you got that balance between variation and structure just right, not so much going on that I get lost and can't figure out where I am nor so little that it gets boring and predictable. Well done.
... fuck this is tiring lol, who'd have thought there were so many tunes on a page of this thing...
@ spectrum1 badass not my style but still pretty awesome
@ Depone so, just how much crack did you take before making that tune?

pretty sick, again not my style, it's very strange, maybe it's just me who thinks that, but it's pretty cool all the same, propz
@_FaKoHm_ well produced, good sounds, nice ideas, all round good tune.
@swansong :S i don't know what I just listened to but it was pretty cool
@dj seizure pretty sick tune, very nice work all round, nice to see some asian influence especcially on a tune as nice as this, should stick it on vinyl
@Njamimars is that a fucking cat? dear lord, how odd. Sounds pretty ...something... lol. I don't really know what I'm listening to. Why is dubstep going bat shit insane lately lol. It's cool all the same man.
@helium101 not bad at all for somebody your age, keep it up man, some cool sounds going on and it's not an amusical wank fest which is always nice to see, love the videogame sounds.
@ bradicle - good sounds all round, good themes too, I think maybe a little more variation would be good. Feels a tad repetitive, to be honest I had a little difficulty sitting through this one, not because it's bad, but just because it gets a little stale :/ Don't get me wrong though, it's a good tune and the production is ace, just needs a little more variety imo.
@ ogunslinger cool ch000000n, nice sounds and solid production broseph. well done. Again only crit would be maybe a little more variation? love the ending mind you.
@ CBK i lawl'd the white noise on that snare makes me fucking cringe lol, epic.
@ nonXero an all round great tune man, nothing bad to say at all
Soundcloud My latest tune, made it in like 4 hours lol. But I think it's pretty awesome hopefully you guys will like it.