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[junior spesh]

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My version of J Kamata & 2000F's "You Don't Know What Love Is"

[phrex]

yeah the beginning is indeed a bit wierd. tho it was meant to be a little wierd and haunting... probably it's too much of that wierdness?

It's a little too long, I like it but when the beat kicks in is when the track really gets good.

yeah... took me quite a time untill i had this rythm together
i'll work on the intro..!

[Subside]

Here is my first track ever I have no musical background at all but I think it is sounding good so far I would love some constructive criticism on how to make the track more enjoyable I know its missing something but I can't quite figure it out also ignore the vocal sample I'm looking for a new one at the moment. I use FL 9/Sonar 8 and a PCR-300 midi controller for my production. Is it a good starting point?

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Pretty good for a first effort. I dunno about the bongos I personally am not a fan opf them, but yeah, decent first effor, and keep at it.

Thanks, I'm probably just going to throw this track aside and start something new I think I have the basics down to make something better anyways.

[mars]

heya, i very kindly ask for some feedback.
hope the tracks fine.

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will feedback some later this evening.

much respect

Very creepy, sir. nice sub bass! I do think the track needs a bit of a pause here and there. it flows well together but i think it would be even creepier if u played a bit more with a silence break before a drop here and there. i dunno, just a suggestion, try it out if u like

[mars]

Hey everyone. Here's something I've been working on. What do u guys think?


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Cheers!
I'll give more feedback as well in a bit.

[The Phantom Banger]

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My version of J Kamata & 2000F's "You Don't Know What Love Is"

I really liked the original, and i liked your track up to 1.08. Personally i think the bass killed the mood of the track. Thats just my oppinion though

[phrex]

heya, i very kindly ask for some feedback.
hope the tracks fine.

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will feedback some later this evening.

much respect

Very creepy, sir. nice sub bass! I do think the track needs a bit of a pause here and there. it flows well together but i think it would be even creepier if u played a bit more with a silence break before a drop here and there. i dunno, just a suggestion, try it out if u like

humm.. yeah. you might be right, tho i made a break, didn't I? will check it out anyway!


what I wonder is, if you can hear/feel the lowest of all subs. it's around 25hz. headphones bring it, monitor doesnt (tho the membrane shakes as hell ). it drops at 1:57!
will be able to test it on a rig in few weeks, and then it's too late cause it will be at a show.

[hcstnfrd]

My first dubstep track

http://soundcloud.com/hctnfrd/heart-attack-2

[junior spesh]

YET AGAIN, FUCKALL FEEDBACK SO ILL POST AGAIN... Soundcloud

My version of J Kamata & 2000F's "You Don't Know What Love Is"

I really liked the original, and i liked your track up to 1.08. Personally i think the bass killed the mood of the track. Thats just my oppinion though

he he he... thanz 4 feedback mate..

yh tbh i was goin 4 sumting different frm original cuz dats just 2 soulful and amazing as it is...

[phrex]

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ywah... that's the stuff i need. good one. sounds interesting. would love to hear the endproduct! can't really give feedback tho i'm at home, headphones forgotten in the studio where my monitro are

hold on...

[christthetiger]

ez

this ones kinda fruity, lol.
but i love it.!!!!!!
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[christthetiger]

ez

this ones kinda fruity, lol.
but i love it.!!!!!!
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[christthetiger]

[quote="deadly habit"]Soundcloud


sick deadly

[WAG]

HALO DUBSTEP. completely unfinished, probably won't sound like this, but feedback on what works and what doesn't is helpful. drums need to be louder, and probably different.

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[zapruderpedro]

Here's my latest. Would love to get reactions / first impressions to this.

Anyone who provides feedback, I'll provide commentary on 2 tracks of your choosing...

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[WAG]

^ Sounds very springy, but I like it... Maybe another part or 2 thrown in between the main part for variation. The "ay-yi-yi" it's cool, and I like using something like that there, but maybe not that. Also perhaps it's a bit derivative of like Doctor P / Funtcase but I still like it. Cool track.

[zapruderpedro]

thanks. never heard of doctor P / funtcase...

what do you mean by springy?

in any case, name your two tracks!

[mars]

Here's my latest. Would love to get reactions / first impressions to this.

Anyone who provides feedback, I'll provide commentary on 2 tracks of your choosing...

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YO! that's HOTTTT!
the ONLY thing i'd have to say is maybe turn up the samples you're using in your breakdowns by a LITTLE bit. see how that works.

otherwise, the tune really does it for me. i'd love to get a copy if it's possible

what daw r u using?

[bradicle]

Something really new from me. Took a different approach. More slow and dark like, with a quote.

Feedback would be great thanks, will return the favour

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[WAG]

Actually just listened with a better pair of head phones and I really like this track a lot! I think the main synth just has a lot of reverb on it, but I do like how it goes from a pretty "wide" sound to a tight on some beats. Really nice job.

Um. I don't have much online, I put the sketchy-frame work of a song up a few posts ago, but it needs bass and probably a new drum part.

This one I haven't worked on in awhile so I'm calling it "done", but it could use something. Still a catchy little song for me for some reason..
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