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My version of J Kamata & 2000F's "You Don't Know What Love Is"

jaydot wrote:

vulvavibration wrote:yeah the beginning is indeed a bit wierd. tho it was meant to be a little wierd and haunting... probably it's too much of that wierdness?

It's a little too long, I like it but when the beat kicks in is when the track really gets good.

yeah... took me quite a time untill i had this rythm together
i'll work on the intro..!

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Subside wrote:Here is my first track ever I have no musical background at all but I think it is sounding good so far I would love some constructive criticism on how to make the track more enjoyable I know its missing something but I can't quite figure it out also ignore the vocal sample I'm looking for a new one at the moment. I use FL 9/Sonar 8 and a PCR-300 midi controller for my production. Is it a good starting point?

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Pretty good for a first effort. I dunno about the bongos I personally am not a fan opf them, but yeah, decent first effor, and keep at it.

Thanks, I'm probably just going to throw this track aside and start something new I think I have the basics down to make something better anyways.

vulvavibration wrote:heya, i very kindly ask for some feedback.
hope the tracks fine.

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will feedback some later this evening.

much respect

Very creepy, sir. nice sub bass! I do think the track needs a bit of a pause here and there. it flows well together but i think it would be even creepier if u played a bit more with a silence break before a drop here and there. i dunno, just a suggestion, try it out if u like

Hey everyone. Here's something I've been working on. What do u guys think?


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Cheers!
I'll give more feedback as well in a bit.

junior spesh wrote:YET AGAIN, FUCKALL FEEDBACK SO ILL POST AGAIN... Soundcloud

My version of J Kamata & 2000F's "You Don't Know What Love Is"

I really liked the original, and i liked your track up to 1.08. Personally i think the bass killed the mood of the track. Thats just my oppinion though

mars wrote:

vulvavibration wrote:heya, i very kindly ask for some feedback.
hope the tracks fine.

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will feedback some later this evening.

much respect

Very creepy, sir. nice sub bass! I do think the track needs a bit of a pause here and there. it flows well together but i think it would be even creepier if u played a bit more with a silence break before a drop here and there. i dunno, just a suggestion, try it out if u like

humm.. yeah. you might be right, tho i made a break, didn't I? will check it out anyway!


what I wonder is, if you can hear/feel the lowest of all subs. it's around 25hz. headphones bring it, monitor doesnt (tho the membrane shakes as hell ). it drops at 1:57!
will be able to test it on a rig in few weeks, and then it's too late cause it will be at a show.

My first dubstep track

http://soundcloud.com/hctnfrd/heart-attack-2

The Phantom Banger wrote:

junior spesh wrote:YET AGAIN, FUCKALL FEEDBACK SO ILL POST AGAIN... Soundcloud

My version of J Kamata & 2000F's "You Don't Know What Love Is"

I really liked the original, and i liked your track up to 1.08. Personally i think the bass killed the mood of the track. Thats just my oppinion though

he he he... thanz 4 feedback mate..

yh tbh i was goin 4 sumting different frm original cuz dats just 2 soulful and amazing as it is...

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ywah... that's the stuff i need. good one. sounds interesting. would love to hear the endproduct! can't really give feedback tho i'm at home, headphones forgotten in the studio where my monitro are

hold on...

ez

this ones kinda fruity, lol.
but i love it.!!!!!!
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ez

this ones kinda fruity, lol.
but i love it.!!!!!!
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sick deadly

HALO DUBSTEP. completely unfinished, probably won't sound like this, but feedback on what works and what doesn't is helpful. drums need to be louder, and probably different.

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Here's my latest. Would love to get reactions / first impressions to this.

Anyone who provides feedback, I'll provide commentary on 2 tracks of your choosing...

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^ Sounds very springy, but I like it... Maybe another part or 2 thrown in between the main part for variation. The "ay-yi-yi" it's cool, and I like using something like that there, but maybe not that. Also perhaps it's a bit derivative of like Doctor P / Funtcase but I still like it. Cool track.

thanks. never heard of doctor P / funtcase...

what do you mean by springy?

in any case, name your two tracks!

zapruderpedro wrote:Here's my latest. Would love to get reactions / first impressions to this.

Anyone who provides feedback, I'll provide commentary on 2 tracks of your choosing...

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YO! that's HOTTTT!
the ONLY thing i'd have to say is maybe turn up the samples you're using in your breakdowns by a LITTLE bit. see how that works.

otherwise, the tune really does it for me. i'd love to get a copy if it's possible

what daw r u using?

Something really new from me. Took a different approach. More slow and dark like, with a quote.

Feedback would be great thanks, will return the favour

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Actually just listened with a better pair of head phones and I really like this track a lot! I think the main synth just has a lot of reverb on it, but I do like how it goes from a pretty "wide" sound to a tight on some beats. Really nice job.

Um. I don't have much online, I put the sketchy-frame work of a song up a few posts ago, but it needs bass and probably a new drum part.

This one I haven't worked on in awhile so I'm calling it "done", but it could use something. Still a catchy little song for me for some reason..
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