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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 2:06 pm
by MattS
Here my first attepmt of writing a Dubstep track,
I use logic and don't have any plugins yet.
hopefully I'll get massive soon!!

Please could you give me some feedback on this track,
also I'm not very sure how to make a nice lead sound so if you could help me that would be amazing!!

Thanks,

Matthew


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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 3:10 pm
by The Phantom Banger
double post :(

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 3:11 pm
by The Phantom Banger
BananaBomber wrote:Soundcloud


Cheers In Advance :)
really like this one feeling the sounds you got going on after the second drop, really picks up the pace. After the first drop it seems to drag on slightly so maybe you can add a bit more variation in there but i really liked this one!

big ups

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 4:22 pm
by lodestone
first post and first mostly done track. pretty chilled out sounding. needs eqing. any comments or advice is appreciated!

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 6:11 pm
by WeBang
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A Little piece I am working on. Should I toss the vocals or keep them. If I keep them they will get Varied up alot more.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 6:16 pm
by WeBang
BananaBomber wrote:Soundcloud


Cheers In Advance :)
second drop!! Enjoy that mix up of the bass

Diggin the drums wish I could get my snare to hit that hard.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 6:24 pm
by DubNemesis
Here is a link to my Channel on youtube. Ive got 3 of my own tracks on there so have a listen and let me know what you think.

http://www.youtube.com/user/DubNemesis

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 7:27 pm
by Astral
BananaBomber wrote:Soundcloud


Cheers In Advance :)

Nice tune, maybe something a little more to emphasise the drop, a subtle noise build or reverse crash then hit would be nice, but thats just me and my pov.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 7:30 pm
by Astral
Just been working on this a little more, drying to get the bass sounding organic and always moving, to sit right with the drums.

Cheers

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 8:30 pm
by lodestone
Astral wrote:Just been working on this a little more, drying to get the bass sounding organic and always moving, to sit right with the drums.

Cheers

Soundcloud

This is sounding like a tank just waiting to be armor plated and ready for battle. Loving it.
We Bang wrote:Soundcloud

A Little piece I am working on. Should I toss the vocals or keep them. If I keep them they will get Varied up alot more.

Personally I'm liking the vocals but I'd say less is more. Might sound better with the vocal pattern as the first 4 and the 8th one, and drop 5,6,7.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 8:58 pm
by detrimental
Okay so this is my second Dubstep tune that i've uploaded on this site, it's a work in progress and i'm looking for suggestion to spice it up.

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 9:20 pm
by billy the robot
Side scroll funk? Wizardstep? You make the call :D

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@ 80/160bpm. I'll probably do a few more edits before it's through, feedback appreciated. Thanks DSF!

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 10:37 pm
by Dropkick_Kid
Not dubstep but would appreciate some feedback on this electro tune :roll:

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Not finished article, don't like 2nd drop atall.
And qualities quite poor due to me only being arsed to upload a 192kbs mp3 :oops:
Oh well, give us some feedback and I'll share the love babes :w:

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 11:43 pm
by sminch
Hi there, had this track for a while and have no idea what to do with it. Any sugestions or feedback would be great!

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:03 am
by The Phantom Banger
dr-zitbag wrote:Not dubstep but would appreciate some feedback on this electro tune :roll:

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Not finished article, don't like 2nd drop atall.
And qualities quite poor due to me only being arsed to upload a 192kbs mp3 :oops:
Oh well, give us some feedback and I'll share the love babes :w:
Nice track, personally i really like the second drop. Really liking the gated effect on the synth very nice overall. Noticed a bit of clashing going on there but it seems to fit the track nicely. :e:

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Rogue Agent master class Pt.1 - RARRRR (New producer)

Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:49 am
by RARRRR


Looking to get some feedback on this new track I am working on, "Rogue Agent master class Pt. 1". Don't be a tnuc about it though, just trying to learn :)

Safe for whoever gives me some feedback, the track is coming along very well!

http://www.myspace.com/rarrrrbeats

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZECviGAibIw

EDIT - The intro. is ment to sound messy, it's what I was aiming for. Like it or not, still, tell me why so I can improve :)

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:50 am
by WeBang
edit

Re: Rogue Agent master class Pt.1 - RARRRR (New producer)

Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:51 am
by wirez
RARRRR wrote:

Looking to get some feedback on this new track I am working on, "Rogue Agent master class Pt. 1". Don't be a tnuc about it though, just trying to learn :)

Safe for whoever gives me some feedback, the track is coming along very well!

http://www.myspace.com/rarrrrbeats

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZECviGAibIw
It's shit. You're a tnuc. :o

Hehe, welcome to the forum bruv!!

Re: Rogue Agent master class Pt.1 - RARRRR (New producer)

Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:58 am
by WeBang
wirez wrote:
RARRRR wrote:

Looking to get some feedback on this new track I am working on, "Rogue Agent master class Pt. 1". Don't be a tnuc about it though, just trying to learn :)

Safe for whoever gives me some feedback, the track is coming along very well!

http://www.myspace.com/rarrrrbeats

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZECviGAibIw
It's shit. You're a tnuc. :o

Hehe, welcome to the forum bruv!!

a bit messy at first. Maybe just clean it up sounds a little clutterd. not a bad drop though.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:25 am
by WeBang
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Intro added and feed back appreciated.