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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:24 pm
by AL4228
Appreciate the input Paravrais
i'll do abit more compression tweeking on the next track, love my kicks snappy aswell so ill be sure to give it abit more punch next one!
big ups!
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 1:18 am
by tripwire22
Soundcloud
finally finished this i think
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 1:54 am
by EraREdux
I have done some extensive reviews, and I would much rather critique a song through the comment pane on Soundcloud, which I do all the time. I'm not just posting tracks and running away, i really enjoy critiquing tracks, and i love with people do the same to mine.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 7:34 am
by Saef
@Tripwire: Really dope track. So chill, and I really like the way it begins. It does feel, however, that the kick drum is sort of out of place. Maybe backing it off a little more in the mix would help. Or maybe finding a kick with a tad but more punch, but not much. Other than that, good sounds.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 8:12 am
by rekstep
@ EraREdux
dark , heavy , enjoyed it , wish there was a tiny bit more action going on , maybe some more fx in between those big dark wobz , loved the sub bass
could imagen a big crowd wavering to this . disliked the synth that came in at 1.37 , killed that darkness vibe for me , other than that big track , grimey chur
@tripwire22
wish the snare was a bit heavier . not my vibe at all sorry didnt enjoy . good production quality specially on the intro and pads
feedback for feedback
Soundcloud
thanks
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 12:45 pm
by tripwire22
rekstep wrote:@ EraREdux
dark , heavy , enjoyed it , wish there was a tiny bit more action going on , maybe some more fx in between those big dark wobz , loved the sub bass
could imagen a big crowd wavering to this . disliked the synth that came in at 1.37 , killed that darkness vibe for me , other than that big track , grimey chur
@tripwire22
wish the snare was a bit heavier . not my vibe at all sorry didnt enjoy . good production quality specially on the intro and pads
feedback for feedback
Soundcloud
everything sounds good man, lol but this aint my vibe like mine wasnt urs. mix sounds good on urs though
thanks
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 3:00 pm
by Holda
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 3:55 pm
by Thuun
Hey guys
This ones called
Infiltrating the Enemy's BASS (Contra Remix)
*link sig*
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 4:58 pm
by paravrais
I've got a good idea, why don't we all just post up our tracks and nobody leave any feedback for each other yeah? I mean it's not like thats the point of the thread or anything!!
Why am I not a mod?
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 7:12 pm
by reignstep
- Tripwire: nice chilled out tune, productionwise it's neat. Tune ain't exceptional, but just good. Kickdrum sounds abit too muddy to me, did you add any distortion/gave it too much boost at the low freq?
- rekstep: nice tune, needs some mastering though. kick sounds too midrange to me, kinda annoyed me during the song. Also in your first part , up to 1.20, I'd do more with that subbass. You have it keep going at the same rate , same tone, which gets abit boring. Especially when your higher pitched bass comes in at 0.55 . Rest is pretty nice, dark feel to it.
- the 2 others above paravrais:
Paravrais ATTACK!!11
Need some opinions on the mixdown of my remix, it's finally mastered & finished (thanks to some tips here on the forums
). Tell me what you think:
Soundcloud
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 7:42 pm
by TheBreadMan
First month producing. First dubstep track....let me know what you think....ANNNd...if anyone can send me any suggestions on getting the sound louder on ableton live without VST's that cost money...let me know...i'm a broke ninja...
Let me know what y'all think of the first track out of the bakery...download it too...
Soundcloud
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 10:14 pm
by Noonyez
Arite I finished my project so here is the FULL version of Inception.
Soundcloud
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 10:30 pm
by rekstep
reignz wrote:- Tripwire: nice chilled out tune, productionwise it's neat. Tune ain't exceptional, but just good. Kickdrum sounds abit too muddy to me, did you add any distortion/gave it too much boost at the low freq?
- rekstep: nice tune, needs some mastering though. kick sounds too midrange to me, kinda annoyed me during the song. Also in your first part , up to 1.20, I'd do more with that subbass. You have it keep going at the same rate , same tone, which gets abit boring. Especially when your higher pitched bass comes in at 0.55 . Rest is pretty nice, dark feel to it.
- the 2 others above paravrais:
Paravrais ATTACK!!11
Need some opinions on the mixdown of my remix, it's finally mastered & finished (thanks to some tips here on the forums
). Tell me what you think:
Soundcloud
tru ... wat sound system have u got ?
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 10:56 pm
by netrik
tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud
finally finished this i think
Nice tune mate. Liking the melodys. Kicks seems like it might be a little out of place and maybe pan the percussion a bit more but other than that it all sounds good to me.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 4:17 am
by Saef
@TheBreadMan: Cool Idea, but all the panning was a little confusing on my ears. Couldn't really grasp on to a sound to flow with.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 6:56 am
by Bamron
http://soundcloud.com/bamron/next-release
Check out this new song of mine and this one too...
http://soundcloud.com/bamron/leo-pard
would appreciate any feedback !!!
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 12:19 pm
by jaspervc
@rekstep: damn hard bassline :p like the little rawwwwr that comes in.. good job
@Thuun: nice track but i think it's a bit to chaotic.. I could be wrong
But the 'tetris-like' melody is a bit to much for me
@reignz: That's one big tune! No comments at all, the vocals are insane.. no, everything is insane :p
@Noonyez: some nice drumstep.. Maybe a bassline? Think that would make the track really good
Would love some feedback over my trask to
thx
Soundcloud
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 2:19 pm
by jakerobert
@tripwire - love the samples of rain. drums are tight and just punchy enough. overall just wow! a top notch deep track. nothing more to say about it.
@jaspervc - not usually into anything this dirty but the energy is undeniable
i love the hoover. I just really enjoyed the track, didnt think i would at first since its not my style but was pleasantly surprised. that liquid bass sound is ace!
@noonyez- not a fan of this style so i'll try and be gentle. I think there are a lot of original ideas in the track already but i'd like to see you go a bit more nuts with it, mix in some different timbres, right now soundwise everything is rough. I realize you were probably going for that but I think having some more varied sounds would make the rougher stuff sound rougher.
here's my new one, fb much appreciated.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 2:48 pm
by Runna and Cricky
Soundcloud
My lil track released 1 day ago .
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 3:02 pm
by mimm
WELL WORTH CHECKING THIS DEBUT TRACK FROM EPWORTH PLAYED ON RINSE FM LAST SUNDAY
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ALSO FOLLOW EPWORTH ON HIS MYSPACE
http://www.myspace.com/whoisepworth
MASSIVE SHOUT OUT TO JAY 5IVE & G DOUBLE
CATCH THEIR ANTISOCIAL SHOW EVERY SUNDAY 5PM-7PM LIVE ON RINSE
MUCH MORE TO COME FROM EPWORTH KEEP YA EYES PEALED
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