FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010

Post by rhek » Tue Dec 21, 2010 9:22 pm

Thankyou dude! Might put it up for D/L if I can't try flog it to a label once its mixed! Add me on soundcloud and I can chuck you a 320 tho!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010

Post by NeyeKON » Tue Dec 21, 2010 9:45 pm

@fatach-ahhh, haha, ur right dude, i havent really turned it up that much since i wrote it and ended up throwin it to fast :P, had the resonance to high on the 2 opening wobbles-thx though bud XD
i had a listen to your tune-sounds really kool, only thing i suggest is that you have a good bit of headroom, turn it up some here and there and add more sub

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010

Post by Grumblex » Wed Dec 22, 2010 12:55 am

Krave wrote:
Grumblex - i absolutely love it, a relaxing ambient tune with well produced drums and great samples. like that rain in the background too haha definitely following you on soundcloud if you keep throwing up these tunes, and where can i download it?
Should be out sometime next year on migration mate :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010

Post by WeBang » Wed Dec 22, 2010 2:00 am

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010

Post by WeBang » Wed Dec 22, 2010 2:06 am

rhek - Nice tune.....some good mastering to beef it up and your set

reignz-filthy man not bad for mixing down in your headphones hahah

Fatach-a little slow for my taste but I have made slow tunes aswell. needs a bit beefier kick. keep at it

Galbm - pretty fucking instense. Insane sounds like alot of skrillex samples in there. but pretty fucking gnarley Def bangin tune.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010

Post by Blanx » Wed Dec 22, 2010 3:32 am

Rhek- man im diggin your intro its clean and awesome very ambient but dark and has a mysterious touch i liked it. however i feel the snare could be a little more clear later on in the intro!

We-Bang - Greg i love all your stuff BIG UPS on the new track fuckin amazing! i always love your melodical high end synths they are sooo sickkk!! (sorry about my obseessing over intros lol i feel i really need to work on them)

Grumblex- Wow such a clean sub bass. and so HEAVY! nice groove man im feeling the rain and the ambient noises flowing in the backround. the snares feel so at home in the mix amazing track!

I just wanted to get some feedback on my newest solo track called "Blanx- Rockin Robo Rooster"

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Post by WeBang » Wed Dec 22, 2010 4:09 am

Thank you and no worries man!!!! much respect
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Post by sprayyypaint » Wed Dec 22, 2010 4:52 am

Blanx-damn dude shit sounds clean as fuck. just one thing, i feel like the drop might be too long or something. after a while it just stops keeping my attention.

We Bang- nice track man :) fuckin legit, i dont find anything wrong with it

rhek-its got too much space for me. the snare and kick need more punch! the track seems sorta quite to me too? some pretty dope sounds in there tho.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010

Post by WeBang » Wed Dec 22, 2010 6:44 am

Blanxs agreeed maybe take the drums out after the first 17 have something build into the drop. sick sounds though
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010

Post by Blanx » Wed Dec 22, 2010 6:48 am

sprayyypaint wrote:Blanx-damn dude shit sounds clean as fuck. just one thing, i feel like the drop might be too long or something. after a while it just stops keeping my attention.

We Bang- nice track man :) fuckin legit, i dont find anything wrong with it

rhek-its got too much space for me. the snare and kick need more punch! the track seems sorta quite to me too? some pretty dope sounds in there tho.
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thanks man! i totally agree with the drop sounding long but i think its because i dont have enough note changes and i focused more on modulations. so its kinda the same notes just different modulations. i think i gotta make a chorus like drop part.

sprayyypaint- I liked your track alot!! i feel the wobble could be a little louder, i dont know though im listenin to headphones right now ill have to listen on my monitors later. i really like the way it sounds though!

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Post by sprayyypaint » Wed Dec 22, 2010 6:58 am

Blanx wrote:
sprayyypaint wrote:Blanx-damn dude shit sounds clean as fuck. just one thing, i feel like the drop might be too long or something. after a while it just stops keeping my attention.

We Bang- nice track man :) fuckin legit, i dont find anything wrong with it

rhek-its got too much space for me. the snare and kick need more punch! the track seems sorta quite to me too? some pretty dope sounds in there tho.
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thanks man! i totally agree with the drop sounding long but i think its because i dont have enough note changes and i focused more on modulations. so its kinda the same notes just different modulations. i think i gotta make a chorus like drop part.

sprayyypaint- I liked your track alot!! i feel the wobble could be a little louder, i dont know though im listenin to headphones right now ill have to listen on my monitors later. i really like the way it sounds though!
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Post by Blanx » Wed Dec 22, 2010 7:54 am

hell yea im from sac hahahhaa thats whats good!!!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010

Post by Debaser1 » Wed Dec 22, 2010 11:08 am

Cheeky little bump on this after not a lot of feedback. Thanks people, it means a lot :m:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010

Post by RmoniK » Wed Dec 22, 2010 12:59 pm

Debaser1, i love your drop, really love it, but it comes kind of unexpected. You got a little white noise riser (or rev cymbal, dunno) before it but i was under the impression it would last longer. I was expecting the drop 4 bars later. I love the pad that goes through the song too. Maybe the cowbell sound every quarter note is a little too loud, but that's just my opinion. I really like the song though, you're one of the few people that actually have a nice melody instead of just focussing on the filthy noises. The outro white noisy thingie is a little brusk too, maybe let it start a little earlier and give it a slower attack time. Congratz!
sprayyypaint, i'm usually not a fan of dubstep with a bizar key (that give a dissonant feel), although it's nice at parties. I like your intro sounds, they're really nice. The drop is awesome, but i have the feeling there's a liiiil bit too much reverb on that. It gives me a bit of a "woomwoom" feeling in the head when i listen to it.

i'm gonna give mine a bump too, since i got no feedback at all.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010

Post by ts engage » Wed Dec 22, 2010 6:12 pm

Let me know what you guys think of this one guys? Its supposed to be quite a chill one, not a dirty bass terminator punch your granny in the face track :P

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zmE6Y8cPJxY

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010

Post by RmoniK » Wed Dec 22, 2010 6:35 pm

ts engage, nice subline imo, but it gets rather repititive after a while, i think it's because it's only four bars long. Try making an eight bar loup with the last 4 bars being a copy from the first 4, but slightly changed.
I like the delayinh in the track too, it really fills up everything. You have a nice snare too, real punchy. Like the melody too, but as i said, more variation wouldn't kill (imo)

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Post by Debaser1 » Wed Dec 22, 2010 8:40 pm

Cheers Rmonik, I think I remember feedbacking yours aha.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010

Post by Fatach » Wed Dec 22, 2010 8:58 pm

ok thanks guys for the comments!
that's the final cut:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010

Post by poyanp » Wed Dec 22, 2010 11:56 pm

I have been perusing this forum for quote some time, gathering info and reading advice that has been given about production. Just want to say thanks! and check my track that i create with help from this forum and its users. Dint have quite enough time to finish it though. let me know what you think i should do more or less of next time

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010

Post by JBE » Thu Dec 23, 2010 1:08 am

@We Bang: Love the intro. The drop is sick. Love the bass, it has a really nice funky flow to it. The sub accentuates it nicely. Those little 80s pop synth stabs are a nice touch as well. Great stuff.

@Reignz: I love the dark touch to it. It's got almost a "scary movie" feel to it in the intro. I'm almost expecting the dude from scream to pop up and say, "Do you like scary movies?". The drop is great, it feels a bit weak on the sub though. I'm really used to your tracks really pushing the sub quite a bit.

@Tomi: I like the sub. Those strange tuba stabs are interesting. I think the hats could definitely come down a bit. They are a bit loud compared to everything else. It could use some more variation in the sub, or something over the top to pull away from the sub a little bit. It just feels really repetitive.

@Rhek: The second part of the intro, after the drums, is like the perfect intro for a track like this. Overall, the track isn't bad. I like the bass. I like the fact that the song is continuous. It doesn't really stop until the very end. This is something I've been experimenting with myself. I think the one problem I have with this is the kick. It really feels like the kick could hold a little more weight. I think there's definitely room for that. Other than that, very nice work.

So here's something new. Just finished it today I think. I'm not really going to say "finished" in a permanent sense as who knows, a week from now I may do something to it. It's not dubstep......or is it? I don't know, it's "dubstepish" maybe. I don't know, I started out wanting to make dubstep and now I just don't know what I make. I have no idea where to slate this as a genre, we'll just say it's "bass music".

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