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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:02 pm
by DubNemesis
freakah wrote:
NO BASS BEING BORING COMMENTS!!

Cheers man. Albino, send to two filters - scream and comb, play with filter saturation 3
I'm having real trouble with the sub - it is there!! I'm trying to get it like the sub from 'When I Look At You - Emalkay' - the sub on that is HUGE! But I can't seem to nail it - more high-passing and eqing needed methinks
Cheers man, appreciate it

Haha was a joke dude

. Aye ive got albino ill give it a go. What are you using for sub? I usually copy the project and call it 'trackname' - sub bass. Then change the automated wobble to a sine wave within the new project, -2 octaves and then add another at -1 octave. Bit of tweaking to get them to sit right together and you're away. You will have to use the same VST to use you're original automation on the sub so dont replace or change the patch unless you know it will still work with you're generator. I can tell you it DOES work with massive. Import wav to your original project and layer with your mid/top end synth. For an extra fat bass i sometimes distort and or compress the above method and then filter out the new frequencies using high and lowpass, and repeat if necessary. Be careful what distortion you use for this as some just chew it up.
These are only the methods i use, i am by no means saying this is correct and if anyone thinks/knows otherwise please say so as it will help me too

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:39 pm
by phrex
Soundcloud
this one's done today. not yet finished. no eqs and anything.
would just love to know what you think of it, somethings missing? not sure about 0:53. it's a wobble that is repeated, but this time with slight distortion. somehow it sounds... don't like it but still... would love to know what you think of it.
the choir samples are syrian folk from alep
also when this choir drops at 1:46 i'm very unsure about it... does the change sound too chopped?
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 8:23 pm
by christthetiger
vulvavibration wrote:Soundcloud
this one's done today. not yet finished. no eqs and anything.
would just love to know what you think of it, somethings missing? not sure about 0:53. it's a wobble that is repeated, but this time with slight distortion. somehow it sounds... don't like it but still... would love to know what you think of it.
the choir samples are syrian folk from alep
also when this choir drops at 1:46 i'm very unsure about it... does the change sound too chopped?
hey buddy, wow! this is gonna be an awesome tune. i really like the feel your going for. within the first 50 secs. i would def clean up the drums just a little.. the timing is still there, but i think it loses its essence. in the beat, the bass drum hits twice. i think it should only go once, its weird with two. and at 1:08. thats sick bro. i love the bass line and the sample. but i would def let that amen go alittle longer than just dropping back out. or actually veen having that at the end and letting it ride out for like a min or two. in the end and simple beat oing into that amen at the end would be f-ing sweet. work on your structure! big up! check out mines.
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:32 pm
by freakah
DubNemesis wrote:freakah wrote:
NO BASS BEING BORING COMMENTS!!

Cheers man. Albino, send to two filters - scream and comb, play with filter saturation 3
I'm having real trouble with the sub - it is there!! I'm trying to get it like the sub from 'When I Look At You - Emalkay' - the sub on that is HUGE! But I can't seem to nail it - more high-passing and eqing needed methinks
Cheers man, appreciate it

Haha was a joke dude

. Aye ive got albino ill give it a go. What are you using for sub? I usually copy the project and call it 'trackname' - sub bass. Then change the automated wobble to a sine wave within the new project, -2 octaves and then add another at -1 octave. Bit of tweaking to get them to sit right together and you're away. You will have to use the same VST to use you're original automation on the sub so dont replace or change the patch unless you know it will still work with you're generator. I can tell you it DOES work with massive. Import wav to your original project and layer with your mid/top end synth. For an extra fat bass i sometimes distort and or compress the above method and then filter out the new frequencies using high and lowpass, and repeat if necessary. Be careful what distortion you use for this as some just chew it up.
These are only the methods i use, i am by no means saying this is correct and if anyone thinks/knows otherwise please say so as it will help me too

Yeahh i know

. And yeah I do exactly what you do for sub there!! I just can't get it to sit right. I think I'll sit down and do a 'listen to emalkay', 'listen to my track and tweak', back and forth til it get's right. I don't know how he gets his to sound so clear, yet so deep! At the moment, I distorted it, and took all the highs and mids off, and boosted at about 40hz, but it doesn't sound right, so tweaking time tomorrow!! Cheers

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Oooh, btw - LFO to main amplitude or to both filter cutoffs! Forgot that, but hey, this is the dubstep forum, you know how to make wobbles already!!

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:34 pm
by Plasmic aka Hanlo
Alright just working on this deep 2step beat, looking for some general feedback! If you're feeling this check the rest of mine on soundcloud------sound!
Gaia below:
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 10:10 pm
by Astral
Been playing around with this for hour, and It'll be my next full tune, I get "that feeling" when adding to it.
Raw as hell
Soundcloud
Giving feedback asap.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 10:18 pm
by christthetiger
Astral wrote:Been playing around with this for hour, and It'll be my next full tune, I get "that feeling" when adding to it.
Raw as hell
Soundcloud
Giving feedback asap.
hey man! what a killer intro. i would def take out those claps. maybe throw em in ery now n then. and to be honest, i thought this was gonna be a banger when leading up to the drop, but it just sounded like some weird techno. keep the intro. figure out the rest!
big up.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 10:20 pm
by christthetiger
Plasmic aka Hanlo wrote:Alright just working on this deep 2step beat, looking for some general feedback! If you're feeling this check the rest of mine on soundcloud------sound!
Gaia below:
cool dude. i would drop those dark monster vocals after the beat comes in. other than that, its a sweet tune!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 10:21 pm
by christthetiger
yo check out mines. the drop is
massiveee
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 10:39 pm
by DubNemesis
Astral the song in your signitures sick. Nice job.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 12:08 am
by phrex
hey chris... it sounds good when the first beat drops in, at 0:27. has something quite melancholic... don't think that voice 0:40 really fits in. at least for my ear/taste. also 1:02 the vocals just dont sit right somehow.
i would do a break with the bass, after the drop. 40 seconds is for my opinion too long. the whole rythm looses energy.
more variation with the bass! and for my taste less ''dirty''. btu.. it's my taste, so just ignore this
anyway, keep the good work up.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 1:44 am
by WeBang
Astral wrote:Been playing around with this for hour, and It'll be my next full tune, I get "that feeling" when adding to it.
Raw as hell
Soundcloud
Giving feedback asap.
def dig the intro the drop needs to be crazier though
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 1:46 am
by Astral
We Bang wrote:Astral wrote:Been playing around with this for hour, and It'll be my next full tune, I get "that feeling" when adding to it.
Raw as hell
Soundcloud
Giving feedback asap.
def dig the intro the drop needs to be crazier though
It's already being reworked, I just had a 10 year old high on lemonade moment and had to get it uploaded asap.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 4:33 am
by Funicular
Hey,
This is my second tune i think the structure might need some help.
Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Soundcloud
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 5:14 am
by cynical
GET TO THA CHOPPA!
Soundcloud
A Reason rinse out I'm working on.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 8:19 am
by freakah
We Bang wrote:Astral wrote:Been playing around with this for hour, and It'll be my next full tune, I get "that feeling" when adding to it.
Raw as hell
Soundcloud
Giving feedback asap.
def dig the intro the drop needs to be crazier though
Bigger Snare, Bigger Kick, Clickier Hi-Hats, Bass is MONSTERRRRRR!! Can i put in a request for a 320 when it's done now?!?!

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 8:27 am
by KidQw3rty
freakah wrote:We Bang wrote:Astral wrote:Been playing around with this for hour, and It'll be my next full tune, I get "that feeling" when adding to it.
Raw as hell
Soundcloud
Giving feedback asap.
def dig the intro the drop needs to be crazier though
Bigger Snare, Bigger Kick, Clickier Hi-Hats, Bass is MONSTERRRRRR!!
Can i put in a request for a 320 when it's done now?!?!

seconded, that tune is going to be beast status.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 8:30 am
by KidQw3rty
two tracks I did in the past few weeks...not really sure where to go with them...any suggestions?
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props if you know where the sample in the first track is from.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 12:21 pm
by dexdur
Any suggestions for this?:
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 1:38 pm
by kontigobeats
Soundcloud
A new track im working on, some nice melodic synths, then goes into bassy drop with some nice background fx, got a kinda joker feel. think need a bit of work on the drums though, feedback appreciated!
peace