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hexade wrote:Hey guys! I'm completely new here. I have about 9 new tunes, all made on FL Studio, and i never really know what to do to 'finish' them. If your only going to check out 1, Shadows or 'Get the F*** out' are probably my best, but ti would be nice if you could check them all out! Thanks

http://www.youtube.com/user/hazlynch << My youtube channel there

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jaydot wrote:Feedback needed on my first bootleg. Will gladly return-

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KidQw3rty wrote:made some additions and adjustments, still just a start, give me some suggestions!

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made this the other day

4x4 beat would love some feedback on this one ill offer to any who feed me

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NeonOrdnance wrote:I need more feedback on this track! If you hate it then tell me, but also tell me why.

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I fucking love this thread

The structure is good. The kicks are not popping out enough for me though, and the synthesized dialog sounds harsh to me, like it is too loud, but then again mixing down and levels is a weak point for me.

Anyways, give a penny, take a penny, here is a new one I am working on:

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Not sure how I feel about the snares, whole thing is kind of tribally to me, and I should probably work in a bit of automation on a few elements plus some more edits at the end of 8- or 16-bars. Actually have two or three other tunes in various stages, so I might throw them up too; they're a bit older though, been sitting around a while.

Thanks bra, I'm still working on the final master, and I think the synthesized vocals are going to go, just as soon as I knick my mate's mic

Liking this track so far, it all fits together quite well and you've done a great job making the low end pump. The vocals are at just the right volume to give the "vibes." It definitely feels unfinished though-- you need to add something overtop that awesome bass. Maybe a synth or even just a few well-placed beeps or noise samples or something, but the first build and drop are probably too repetitive. I know you're going for a minimal-dub sound and you've definitely nailed the style, but it needs something else. If you listen to a guy called Graphics, he does a fantastic job of laying awesome, haunting synth lines over mainly chilled dubstep. Of course, I make mainly club tracks, so I'm a bit biased.

But yeah, the mastering and levelling sounds great, very professional, so well done on that. Drums are also good, and work with the track, although could maybe use slightly more variation on the kick-snare pattern. I like to change up my drums every fourth or eigth loop with a break on the fourth beat, usually a double-snare or something, and that adds a lot of momentum. Definitely interested in where you'll take this, and if you think you have other tracks that are ready for listening then by all means put them up!

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KidQw3rty wrote:made some additions and adjustments, still just a start, give me some suggestions!

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Ending part of the clip is cluster fucked, because the levels are out of wack. But I like the direction

octopusonfire wrote:EZ peeps,

This is my first post on the dubstep forum.
And this is the first dubstep track I've made.
Not done yet of course, but anyone with some feedback on it?
What to do... What not to do, etc... Anything would be glorious.

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zettazepto wrote:I'm new here and this is my first attempt at a song any thought so far??
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hexade wrote:Hey everyone Im new here as you can see. Heres one of my songs.. probably one of my best. Please tell me what you think! Soundcloud

soulshynchyld wrote:woah...just made this today. still needs final mixin, but im luvn it hard!!

U REAL NEED/WANT TO LISTEN TO THIS ! DEF!!

str8 my styles..... this is a new take on dubstep....

need info for sure on what yall think!! LO LO LOWS!!

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continuumdnb wrote:

soulshynchyld wrote:woah...just made this today. still needs final mixin, but im luvn it hard!!

U REAL NEED/WANT TO LISTEN TO THIS ! DEF!!

str8 my styles..... this is a new take on dubstep....

need info for sure on what yall think!! LO LO LOWS!!

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I'd try to get the drums a bit more syncopated, at the moment they sound too static.

It's a nice start, and i realise this is the WIP thread, but you have a lot to do in making it interesting. The incidental/atmospheric sounds and subtle variations in patterns are what make tracks hold your attention. Yours sounds nice, but barely changes for way too long. Mix up the drum pattern every 8 bars, add a couple of rides, a random sound or 4 and you've got a nice tune here.