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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 2:56 pm
by chicken
check out my sound acound
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:08 pm
by hexade
soulshynchyld wrote:hexade wrote:Hey everyone

Im new here as you can see. Heres one of my songs.. probably one of my best. Please tell me what you think!
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k...bro...study up on how to eq ya sound & thicken up ya wobble, there is some nice sounds, BUT not your wobble...
ya lost all respect with that!!! good luk!!
CHeers man, yeah it still needs work, ill try make the wobbles filthyer and generally improve the song. Thanks for the comments though

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:24 pm
by WeBang
KidQw3rty wrote:We Bang wrote:KidQw3rty wrote:made some additions and adjustments, still just a start, give me some suggestions!
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Ending part of the clip is cluster fucked, because the levels are out of wack. But I like the direction
hey man thanks for giving some feedback, i'll be sure to hit up your posts as well.
i was trying to get myself acclimated to producing with logic again with this track...the end is def fucked...i'm thinking i need to do without those new voices that come in and work on that original bass.
No Problem....I think what I wrote sounded a lil harsh but I had to take a shit so.... I def like the feel.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:33 pm
by zonetrooper5
Got a new wip track up, need some feedback to make it better and eventually finish it.
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:39 pm
by jaydot
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Needs work....improvement ideas taken onboard.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:50 pm
by standard-proceduremusic
http://soundcloud.com/standard-procedure-1
some tunes are unfinished and previews but still let us know what ya syaing!
pz
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 6:48 pm
by akanekal
i dunno what to do! i keep on starting off making tracks but never finish them. i guess i just run out of steam. i can never see anything i start ending up good!
http://www.box.net/shared/5ysu793jnk
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 11:31 pm
by DubNemesis
New one i started this evening.
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 2:09 am
by Orrie
Here's one I started last night, haven't really mixed it or anything yet.
Any feedback appreciated.
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 2:30 am
by bradicle
DubNemesis wrote:New one i started this evening.
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Liking it dude, starting to sound good, keep up that shit!! Liking the drums, n variation

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Any feedback from anyone thanks. More of a lax dub tune, random sample in it. Please and thankyou
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:56 am
by sigbowls
first track ive made dont know how to do anything but loops on reason
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 7:05 am
by a.paul
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 7:54 am
by DubNemesis
bradicle wrote:DubNemesis wrote:New one i started this evening.
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Liking it dude, starting to sound good, keep up that shit!! Liking the drums, n variation

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Any feedback from anyone thanks. More of a lax dub tune, random sample in it. Please and thankyou
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Thanks mate

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Liking your tune, got a good feel to it. I reckon it needs a short break between the intro and the bass dropping, only my opinion but i think it kinda rolls in. Use the same sample you got there and chop it up over the break. Up to you of course

. The church bells give it a good atmosphere as well, nice and dark. Good job mate hope to hear more!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 10:59 am
by joekool
VERY MUCH in progress...
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let me know what you think - - - - been rinsin this one at the crib since i got a plate cut, homeboy said the track was just too big so i looped a few bars and he took it down to dallas..
sounds good on some 18's!

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 12:50 pm
by DubNemesis
Updated version, Wobble still needs a bit of tidying in some places and it needs filling out a bit, but you get the idea where its going now. The second drop is basically the same as the first at the mo, plan to change it. Let me know what you think..
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 1:01 pm
by jaydot
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Needs work. let me know your thoughts. Cheers

WU-TANG!!! CLAN BANGAH!!
Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 1:58 pm
by soulshynchyld
well this is the first movie ive chopped up into samples, went quite well i reckon!!
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if ya dont check tha track your a dick!!HAHHAHHAAH
have a look ya, nooo way ya will regret it!! NZ repn it hard!!CHE
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 2:10 pm
by Astral
Worked on this a little bit more, alt tabbing from my uni work to the daw and failing at education.
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Verbs probably to strong in places, as is the volume of the wobbleh.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 2:22 pm
by jaydot
Astral wrote:Worked on this a little bit more, alt tabbing from my uni work to the daw and failing at education.
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Verbs probably to strong in places, as is the volume of the wobbleh.
The verb is v strong in places yeah, good start though.
Re: WU-TANG!!! CLAN BANGAH!!
Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 2:27 pm
by continuumdnb
soulshynchyld wrote:well this is the first movie ive chopped up into samples, went quite well i reckon!!
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if ya dont check tha track your a dick!!HAHHAHHAAH
have a look ya, nooo way ya will regret it!! NZ repn it hard!!CHE
This is a promising start. Do you have to write in rainbow colours and use that many exclamation marks though?