Liking this a lot man. You're right about the wobble being a bit loud in places, easy fix thoughAstral wrote:Worked on this a little bit more, alt tabbing from my uni work to the daw and failing at education.
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Verbs probably to strong in places, as is the volume of the wobbleh.
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Hey! New tune i started working on the other day, still needs quite a bit of work though
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Has deffo potential.. and i apologise in advance the shitty feedback but im in a rush (im cum back and critique properly later!)hexade wrote:Hey! New tune i started working on the other day, still needs quite a bit of work though
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ah thanks man
Im glad to get noticed at all haha, be it good or bad feedback 
And nice one that you got there! Im liking it!
And nice one that you got there! Im liking it!
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spesh thats sick, and hexade good start mate, chop it about a bit an youll have a bangerjunior spesh wrote:Has deffo potential.. and i apologise in advance the shitty feedback but im in a rush (im cum back and critique properly later!)hexade wrote:Hey! New tune i started working on the other day, still needs quite a bit of work though
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yeah mate thats naughtychicken wrote:check out my sound acound
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thats a good start mate, needs bass sooner and a bit of eqing, but its sounding goodzonetrooper5 wrote:Got a new wip track up, need some feedback to make it better and eventually finish it.
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nemesis this tune is a a beastDubNemesis wrote:Updated version, Wobble still needs a bit of tidying in some places and it needs filling out a bit, but you get the idea where its going now. The second drop is basically the same as the first at the mo, plan to change it. Let me know what you think..
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kk, i posted this in a seperate thread, which i now know was wrong 
just after a couple of pointers really.. been looking over a few forums and few seem to have as big of a production section as this site so i thought i would give here a go.
i have only uploaded a couple of songs onto my Soundcloud, an old one that sort of counts as dubstep and a new one that is abit of drum and bass.
I can't help but think that they sound 'corny', like all the different parts sound placed over each other instead of mixed together if you know what i mean.
I try not to use presets as i feel like its cheating, maybe thats my problem haha
i have only been seriously giving this production stuff a propper go for the last 6 or so months, but i dont feel as though i am progressing
well, if anyone has any feedback (not on the actual tracks, but how to make them sound more whole) it would be appreciated.
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just after a couple of pointers really.. been looking over a few forums and few seem to have as big of a production section as this site so i thought i would give here a go.
i have only uploaded a couple of songs onto my Soundcloud, an old one that sort of counts as dubstep and a new one that is abit of drum and bass.
I can't help but think that they sound 'corny', like all the different parts sound placed over each other instead of mixed together if you know what i mean.
I try not to use presets as i feel like its cheating, maybe thats my problem haha
i have only been seriously giving this production stuff a propper go for the last 6 or so months, but i dont feel as though i am progressing
well, if anyone has any feedback (not on the actual tracks, but how to make them sound more whole) it would be appreciated.
Thanks
Nick.
P.S. sorry if its in the wrong section
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Thanks man, reworked it some more, made the bassline better, the sub-bass comes in earlier. I'll check my song again on my monitors so I can EQ it properly.deadnoisesystem wrote:thats a good start mate, needs bass sooner and a bit of eqing, but its sounding goodzonetrooper5 wrote:Got a new wip track up, need some feedback to make it better and eventually finish it.
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ummmmm yup!!! i sure docontinuumdnb wrote:This is a promising start. Do you have to write in rainbow colours and use that many exclamation marks though?soulshynchyld wrote:well this is the first movie ive chopped up into samples, went quite well i reckon!!
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yeah zone, thats better already, at 1.30ish when the wobble comes in, try adjusting the volume envelope so it swells rather than drops and that will sound naughtyzonetrooper5 wrote:Thanks man, reworked it some more, made the bassline better, the sub-bass comes in earlier. I'll check my song again on my monitors so I can EQ it properly.deadnoisesystem wrote:thats a good start mate, needs bass sooner and a bit of eqing, but its sounding goodzonetrooper5 wrote:Got a new wip track up, need some feedback to make it better and eventually finish it.
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Do you have any tracks which need some feedback on?
i got a few tunes on the go, none ready to render and send yet, but thanks anyways
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Thanks matedeadnoisesystem wrote:nemesis this tune is a a beastDubNemesis wrote:Updated version, Wobble still needs a bit of tidying in some places and it needs filling out a bit, but you get the idea where its going now. The second drop is basically the same as the first at the mo, plan to change it. Let me know what you think..
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been trying to get some chilled vibe stuff out lately, would appreciate some feedback.
bass seems to be coming through a little weak on my speakers, still trying to adjust to my new headphones
been trying to get some chilled vibe stuff out lately, would appreciate some feedback.
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This is a really nice start. At 20 the repeated drum hit is a bit machine-gun like at the moment. Try playing with the velocity of each hit and switching up the envelope very slightly to help make it sound more organic. Ideally use another, very similar sample for some of the repeats.aspect-dubz wrote:Soundcloud
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bass seems to be coming through a little weak on my speakers, still trying to adjust to my new headphones
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yeah mate, do so.DubNemesis wrote:Thanks matedeadnoisesystem wrote:nemesis this tune is a a beastDubNemesis wrote:Updated version, Wobble still needs a bit of tidying in some places and it needs filling out a bit, but you get the idea where its going now. The second drop is basically the same as the first at the mo, plan to change it. Let me know what you think..
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yeh i actually dropped the velocity of the drums at the beginning of the second part but only just read your comment after uploading the second edit, thanks for the feedback though will get on editing the drops nowcontinuumdnb wrote:This is a really nice start. At 20 the repeated drum hit is a bit machine-gun like at the moment. Try playing with the velocity of each hit and switching up the envelope very slightly to help make it sound more organic. Ideally use another, very similar sample for some of the repeats.aspect-dubz wrote:Soundcloud
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Sure that wasn't there beforedeadnoisesystem wrote: yeah mate, do so.
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Will check and leave feedback tonight
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