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				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 7:04 pm
				by Mutated Maeden
				3 new tracks
hope you like, feedback appreciated. 
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Soundcloud   NOT FINISHED!!! 
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Mutated Meaden
Mutated Mindz
 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 7:05 pm
				by Mutated Maeden
				
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 7:38 pm
				by Muta
				continuumdnb wrote:icebagg wrote:Updated version of SCANNERS much cleaner and super heavy. A little iffy on the levels, would like to hear your thoughts...
Soundcloud
much love DSF!!
 
Impressively dark, i don't think it needs the bits with really fast wobbling tbh. I think it'd benefit from staying with the nice dark downtempo feel, no need to speed it up that suddenly.
reminds me of kryptic minds 

 
I dont agree, The faster wobbles that come in actually get me pumping, Matter of preference i guess?
love the glitchy wobbles very much!!
Great dark theme!
*Oh and a lil' edit:
First post :] New on the Forums, Hi, I'm Muta.
 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 8:00 pm
				by WeBang
				
1.The drums are really great on the first track.  I mean they sound perfect.  The drop how ever is lacking some real punch or power.  I listend to this great intro with good drums then it drops and its like ehhh....its okay.  
2. drums good again except the kick I am feeling the kick needs a little more natural and less synthetic.  
3. did the track nice and dark in a deep way.
 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 8:05 pm
				by WeBang
				Muta wrote:continuumdnb wrote:icebagg wrote:Updated version of SCANNERS much cleaner and super heavy. A little iffy on the levels, would like to hear your thoughts...
Soundcloud
much love DSF!!
 
Impressively dark, i don't think it needs the bits with really fast wobbling tbh. I think it'd benefit from staying with the nice dark downtempo feel, no need to speed it up that suddenly.
reminds me of kryptic minds 

 
I dont agree, The faster wobbles that come in actually get me pumping, Matter of preference i guess?
love the glitchy wobbles very much!!
Great dark theme!
*Oh and a lil' edit:
First post :] New on the Forums, Hi, I'm Muta.
 
 wicked tune.   a couple minor changes in the wobbles maybe to make it prefected but not much.  The actually sound of the bass I really dig.
 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 8:09 pm
				by Muta
				Thought i'd put something i'm workin on aswell.
(I use Renoise Btw :] )
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http://soundcloud.com/mutadubstep/muta- ... rack-w-i-p 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 8:33 pm
				by WeBang
				
Not a bad start man.  Maybe a little lows out and some volume adjustment on the SFX.  I prefer to lowpass those out at around 250.
 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 9:10 pm
				by Muta
				We Bang wrote:
Not a bad start man.  Maybe a little lows out and some volume adjustment on the SFX.  I prefer to lowpass those out at around 250.
 
Thanks ^^ i'll keep it in mind, havn't payed so much attention to the SFX yet haha
 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 12:37 am
				by JemGrover
				Soundcloud
Influenced by 65DAYSOFSTATIC. 
 
wrote it at 119bpm, so, um, probably not one for chainsaw purists...
 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 1:12 am
				by JTL
				Hey guys, this is my second go at production, and I feel it's better than my first by quite a way, but still of course pretty amateur.
If anyone could just have a QUICK look at it, I'd really appreciate ANY feedback at all. I will of course return the favour!
Soundcloud
Many many thanks in advance,
-jim
 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 1:16 am
				by KrefCheffington
				continuumdnb wrote:KrefCheffington wrote:<---- New to the forum
Also very new to making Dubstep...
I use Pro Tools with plug-ins such as Xpand! and Vacuum
My music is pretty damn groovy but I could use some feedback from people that really know what their doing
Heres a track im working on that kind of switches from dubstep to some form of upbeat electronic music.
If u have the time please listen to my other tracks on soundcloud so i can get more critique out of this here forum
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Nice use of space in the intro, i don't like the 0:40-50 section much, though the synth just after that is pretty nice, needs subbass though.
There's quite a lot of hiss in the track, not sure if it's intentional, but i think the whole thing might benefit from a highcut somewhere around 10Khz.
 
Thanks for the quick feedback. i think the hiss u hear might be the constant hihat because i noticed when i listened to it coming out of my laptop speakers i also noticed a hiss so i'll take the 10k cut into account.
 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 1:31 am
				by KrefCheffington
				Soundcloud
So this is really my first real attempt at Dubstep except i give it a twist of some metal guitar.
I recorded and chopped up small bits of me playing plus a solo i plan to redo later.
what do you guys think?
 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 1:35 am
				by soulshynchyld
				k...so i added the bassline...seems to be cloudy as,
real need/want some feed back in this one.
its coming along nicely, but shits missing!!hollah
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				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 1:42 am
				by JTL
				KrefCheffington wrote:Soundcloud
So this is really my first real attempt at Dubstep except i give it a twist of some metal guitar.
I recorded and chopped up small bits of me playing plus a solo i plan to redo later.
what do you guys think?
 
Love the panning at the beginning. I dig the metal guitar, it's not often you hear it.  Needs some work, but let me know when you add in those other bits!
 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 1:44 am
				by JTL
				soulshynchyld wrote:k...so i added the bassline...seems to be cloudy as,
real need/want some feed back in this one.
its coming along nicely, but shits missing!!hollah
Soundcloud 
In my honest opinion I think it has potential, but at around the 28 second mark, the repeat on "theyve become too fowl" sounds pretty poor. Re-do that. And no need to overkill the vocals! Other than that, I quite like it mate! LESS IS MORE!
 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 2:22 am
				by soulshynchyld
				
kinda like a slowed down trance track, i dont mind it.but cant listen to it for long, to repetitive for me!! che
 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 2:54 am
				by DubNemesis
				JTL wrote:Hey guys, this is my second go at production, and I feel it's better than my first by quite a way, but still of course pretty amateur.
If anyone could just have a QUICK look at it, I'd really appreciate ANY feedback at all. I will of course return the favour!
Soundcloud
Many many thanks in advance,
-jim
 
Sounding good for your second production. Drums are sounding pretty good. Think you should try some distorion or something similar to make the bass sound fatter.
 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 3:10 am
				by kontigobeats
				Soundcloud
Brand new track im working on, some nice synths in this one , been trying to work on my basslines sounding better, feedback appreciated!
 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 3:13 am
				by Astral
				kontigobeats wrote:Soundcloud
Brand new track im working on, some nice synths in this one , been trying to work on my basslines sounding better, feedback appreciated!
 
Nice start, drums could do with a little bit of depth and something to mix things up a little, I had a similar problem with my latest (in my sig, we have the same taste for bass manipulation it seems) just think of ways to drop the focus on that bass drone, then pull the listener straight back in after a little break rather than the longish breaks you have atm, could be anything, run a filter, drop the bass and make a drum beat to bring it back in etc etc.
 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 3:14 am
				by JTL
				DubNemesis wrote:JTL wrote:Hey guys, this is my second go at production, and I feel it's better than my first by quite a way, but still of course pretty amateur.
If anyone could just have a QUICK look at it, I'd really appreciate ANY feedback at all. I will of course return the favour!
Soundcloud
Many many thanks in advance,
-jim
 
Sounding good for your second production. Drums are sounding pretty good. Think you should try some distorion or something similar to make the bass sound fatter.
 
Do you mean the kick or the bassline? I have no idea how to wobble.  Next on the agenda to learn!