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JTL · Post by **JTL** » Wed Mar 03, 2010 6:33 pm

hexade wrote:A Dark new track i started work on yesterday. Im still experimenting. My mate thinks its sick, but what do you guys think?
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I think it goes on too long before you get any of that snare action but after that, shit gets dark real quick. Needs work but I think it's a good basis. Need to hear it on some good monitors!

hexade · Post by **hexade** » Wed Mar 03, 2010 6:35 pm

JTL wrote:
hexade wrote:A Dark new track i started work on yesterday. Im still experimenting. My mate thinks its sick, but what do you guys think?
Soundcloud
I think it goes on too long before you get any of that snare action but after that, shit gets dark real quick. Needs work but I think it's a good basis. Need to hear it on some good monitors!

Cheers, thanks alot for the useful feedback! Anyone elses opinions/feedback would also be greatly appreciated!

JTL · Post by **JTL** » Wed Mar 03, 2010 6:37 pm

Soo... been working on this today, it's my first ever go at doing wobbles using the LFO not sure how it's come out.. I've changed up the drums and added in a NIN vocal and electric guitar.

What do people think?

I know the vocals are out of time in parts, (still haven't mastered warping tracks properly).

Also, there are issues with there being clashes in key between some of the parts...

I'm still a complete rookie so don't be too mean

Any feedback really appreciated as always,

Soundcloud

What d'ya think?

Peace

hexade · Post by **hexade** » Wed Mar 03, 2010 6:40 pm

JTL wrote:Soo... been working on this today, it's my first ever go at doing wobbles using the LFO not sure how it's come out.. I've changed up the drums and added in a NIN vocal and electric guitar.

What do people think?

I know the vocals are out of time in parts, (still haven't mastered warping tracks properly).

Also, there are issues with there being clashes in key between some of the parts...

I'm still a complete rookie so don't be too mean Any feedback really appreciated as always,

Soundcloud

What d'ya think?

Peace

I like this

Something about this that just works for me, niice

lol. Sorry i have nothing that useful to say

honey-d · Post by **honey-d** » Wed Mar 03, 2010 6:51 pm

hexade wrote:
JTL wrote:Soo... been working on this today, it's my first ever go at doing wobbles using the LFO not sure how it's come out.. I've changed up the drums and added in a NIN vocal and electric guitar.

What do people think?

I know the vocals are out of time in parts, (still haven't mastered warping tracks properly).

Also, there are issues with there being clashes in key between some of the parts...

I'm still a complete rookie so don't be too mean Any feedback really appreciated as always,

Soundcloud

What d'ya think?

Peace
I like this Something about this that just works for me, niice lol. Sorry i have nothing that useful to say

yeah I think the key clashes are from the harmonics of the bassline... but I like the bass and I like the sample, so compatibility must be found!

jaydot · Post by **jaydot** » Wed Mar 03, 2010 8:02 pm

Soundcloud had another work on this. Hopefully it's synced better.

Crux · Post by **Crux** » Wed Mar 03, 2010 9:04 pm

jaydot wrote:Soundcloud had another work on this. Hopefully it's synced better.

I like the chill vibe to this track alot. The voclals seem to work well but the track could use some final touch ups here and there.

I have uploaded my very first attempt at dubstep in hopes of getting some feedback and opinions. I use to produce alot of hardstyle so i do have some experience. I also just tossed in random samples to get the feel of the genre. Let me know what u think

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The Phantom Banger · Post by **The Phantom Banger** » Wed Mar 03, 2010 9:08 pm

JTL wrote:
The Phantom Banger wrote:Soundcloud

My newest work in progress would love some feedback from you lot

much love to the WIP crew

Louis
Love your synth selections and your melodies, good work man! What do you use for your synth work?

This has got that UK Funky/Carnival vibe with the snare arrangement. DIGGING IT MAN! Great work !

I do all my synths in NI massive, takes up a lotta cpu though on my shitty 1 gb ram laptop

thanks for the feedback

WeBang · Post by **WeBang** » Wed Mar 03, 2010 10:00 pm

The Phantom Banger wrote:
JTL wrote:
The Phantom Banger wrote:Soundcloud

My newest work in progress would love some feedback from you lot

much love to the WIP crew

Louis
Love your synth selections and your melodies, good work man! What do you use for your synth work?

This has got that UK Funky/Carnival vibe with the snare arrangement. DIGGING IT MAN! Great work !
I do all my synths in NI massive, takes up a lotta cpu though on my shitty 1 gb ram laptop thanks for the feedback

Love your drumz in this one. Very nice

zonetrooper5 · Post by **zonetrooper5** » Wed Mar 03, 2010 11:01 pm

Re-upped this song since the mixdown on it was pretty shit, should be better this time, feedback would be great.

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jam1 · Post by **jam1** » Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:20 am

Very much a work in progress. No structure, just an idea which I'm not sure where to go with now...

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WeBang · Post by **WeBang** » Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:32 am

jam1 wrote:Very much a work in progress. No structure, just an idea which I'm not sure where to go with now...

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Trash it and move on. Not hating but your stuck and really it doesn't sound like much could come out of it. I got about a billion of these on my hard drive aswell

WeBang · Post by **WeBang** » Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:36 am

zonetrooper5 wrote:Re-upped this song since the mixdown on it was pretty shit, should be better this time, feedback would be great.

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I think you gotta really focus on that mix down. The synth at the drop sounds like it lays ontop of everything. Drums sound distant to the the bass.

silentk · Post by **silentk** » Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:44 am

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Re-up from before, various improvements made, better mix imo, more variation in drums and sorted out the vocal samples so they sit nicer

As always feedback very much appreciated and 320s if anyone fancies one

step correct · Post by **step correct** » Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:57 am

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Just the intro and the drop to show people. I'm looking for a better way to mix the pianos with the bassline it almost sounds to abrupt but I've tried lots of things to no avail. Thanks!

zonetrooper5 · Post by **zonetrooper5** » Thu Mar 04, 2010 3:33 am

We Bang wrote:
zonetrooper5 wrote:Re-upped this song since the mixdown on it was pretty shit, should be better this time, feedback would be great.

Soundcloud

I think you gotta really focus on that mix down. The synth at the drop sounds like it lays ontop of everything. Drums sound distant to the the bass.

Thanks man, I'll work on the mixdown tomorrow, is there anything else wrong with the song that could be fixed or anything else that could be added?

sarkz · Post by **sarkz** » Thu Mar 04, 2010 4:12 am

http://www.youtube.com/sarkzbeats

sarkz · Post by **sarkz** » Thu Mar 04, 2010 4:26 am

eazii people! hopefully you like the track its a work in progress. just want some fresh ears for some feed back

despite the intro it does get dirty HAHA safee

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Bassmagnet · Post by **Bassmagnet** » Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:09 am

sarkz wrote:eazii people! hopefully you like the track its a work in progress. just want some fresh ears for some feed back

despite the intro it does get dirty HAHA safee

Soundcloud

Dirty, very dirty.

Bassmagnet · Post by **Bassmagnet** » Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:11 am

Hey guys, I am new to the forum

I have been remixing a track for The Sharpest Sword's "The Cunning Use of Flags".
Not finished but let me know how your earzorz like it
PS - For some reason the embed player isn't popping up after pasting the code...

http://soundcloud.com/dudesommer/the-cu ... -of-synths

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