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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 7:14 am
by cleanexecution
some new dub comin out of cali, i use reason to produce my beatz. What do you guys think?
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 8:10 am
by jaydot
Crux wrote:
jaydot wrote:Soundcloud had another work on this. Hopefully it's synced better.
I like the chill vibe to this track alot. The voclals seem to work well but the track could use some final touch ups here and there.

I have uploaded my very first attempt at dubstep in hopes of getting some feedback and opinions. I use to produce alot of hardstyle so i do have some experience. I also just tossed in random samples to get the feel of the genre. Let me know what u think :)

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Yeah it does need touching up here and there, gonna try and sync it better. One of my speakers is out for the count so I haven't listened to it properly on speakers, sounds ok on my brother's Turtle Beaches though.

I was thinking of a sub underneath but it might confuse things, will comment your track now. :D

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 8:15 am
by jaydot
@Crux, comments are on the soundcloud.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 8:47 am
by redjuan
cleanexecution wrote:some new dub comin out of cali, i use reason to produce my beatz. What do you guys think?
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liked the bassline etc,could do with a better build up imo and maybe strengthen your drums

@ who ever done the heart of asia track,does sound very out of time,and quite cheesey at points,nice idea tho,could maybe do with a rework

heres my track,quite a "soulful" dub bit,let me know ur ideas folks,cheers J

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 8:51 am
by jaydot
Yeah it needs a rework.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 10:19 am
by jam1
We Bang wrote:
jam1 wrote:Very much a work in progress. No structure, just an idea which I'm not sure where to go with now...

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Trash it and move on. Not hating but your stuck and really it doesn't sound like much could come out of it. I got about a billion of these on my hard drive aswell
Ha Ha! I hear what you're saying! Might try and persevere with it over the next few days and then bin it at the weekend if I get no further!

p.s - it sounds really gash played through Soundcloud...

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 10:53 am
by redjuan
jam1 wrote:
We Bang wrote:
jam1 wrote:Very much a work in progress. No structure, just an idea which I'm not sure where to go with now...

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Trash it and move on. Not hating but your stuck and really it doesn't sound like much could come out of it. I got about a billion of these on my hard drive aswell
Ha Ha! I hear what you're saying! Might try and persevere with it over the next few days and then bin it at the weekend if I get no further!

p.s - it sounds really gash played through Soundcloud...
reckon this could be pretty nice with some moody atmospherics and more work,sounds alrite,bass is nice in it...

MY BIT...

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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 1:13 pm
by Olux
Hey,

Couldn't post a song here so here's a link.

http://soundcloud.com/tracks/search?q%5 ... xt%5D=Olux

Bottom song 'Culture Thug' i cant decide if i should leave it or fill it out.

All works in progress. Need some advice on how to sculpt them into finished tunes. Also if you have mastering suggestions it would be appreciated.

Cheers! Olux

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 3:05 pm
by djaccel
Woah. Worng Thread

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:35 pm
by j_one
redjuan wrote:MY BIT...

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Nice sounds, like how it builds... I'd personally give the drums more weight, they sound a bit feeble, especially when it builds later.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:36 pm
by j_one
Bit of a random one... think I want to get even more sub in, but any feedback welcome :t:

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 7:03 pm
by Crux
j-one wrote:Bit of a random one... think I want to get even more sub in, but any feedback welcome :t:

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Hey man, nice chill style u got to this tune. Although it does repeat itself alot, it doesnt get that annoying, Keep up the good work.


My second track i have been working on. Yet again, i havnt really been trying to make an amazing song, but more yet just get the elements of dubstep down. Any opinions and feedback would be appreciated. :)

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 7:39 pm
by j_one
Crux wrote:My second track i have been working on. Yet again, i havnt really been trying to make an amazing song, but more yet just get the elements of dubstep down. Any opinions and feedback would be appreciated. :)

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Cheers man.

This track is cool, really dig the bass in the intro... and it's quite catchy when it get's going. Needs a lot more low end I reckon, add in a nice sub to compliment teh wobblez.

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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 8:54 pm
by hexade
EZ Peeps, second version of my dark ass song 'Death' Tell me what you think, my mates think its sick.



Feedback very welcomed :)

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 10:59 pm
by lushman
Ok, got a bit of a chilled one here - not really sure what direction to take it in, or if it's got enough to it already. Anyway feedback greatly appreciated, hope you enjoy :)

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Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 12:13 am
by standard-proceduremusic
http://soundcloud.com/standard-procedure-1

feedback would be awesome cheers!

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 1:54 am
by JTL
Hey boys, I know the beat is pretty shit and the quality isn't great, whipped this one up in an hour or so, I basically just want feedback on the SYNTH melody, what do people think?

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Do people think this could work? Or is it too 8bit computer gamey.. ?

Thanks!

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 1:57 am
by JTL
lushman wrote:Ok, got a bit of a chilled one here - not really sure what direction to take it in, or if it's got enough to it already. Anyway feedback greatly appreciated, hope you enjoy :)

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The vocals midway through are just so gorgeous. I really need to learn how to cut up and pitch/sample vocals like that. Burial esque. Would love to know how to do it, or at least where to start.. any tips?

Great track : )

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 1:59 am
by JTL
Crux wrote:
j-one wrote:Bit of a random one... think I want to get even more sub in, but any feedback welcome :t:

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Hey man, nice chill style u got to this tune. Although it does repeat itself alot, it doesnt get that annoying, Keep up the good work.


My second track i have been working on. Yet again, i havnt really been trying to make an amazing song, but more yet just get the elements of dubstep down. Any opinions and feedback would be appreciated. :)

Soundcloud
This has potential man! It needs some direction though, but what you've got is great. Need another section to the track, need to maybe take it somewhere different, right now it feels like you have a 4 minute intro :)

Love what you've done though. Steel drums ftw.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 2:44 am
by JTL
JTL wrote:Hey boys, I know the beat is pretty shit and the quality isn't great, whipped this one up in an hour or so, I basically just want feedback on the SYNTH melody, what do people think?

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Do people think this could work? Or is it too 8bit computer gamey.. ?

Thanks!

Anyone? :i: