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Post by j_one » Fri Mar 05, 2010 3:46 am

Yeah I like that mate, can imagine with a biggg juicy sub in there it'd really move especially with a bit of work on the drums (quite like the pattern).

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Post by zonetrooper5 » Fri Mar 05, 2010 4:10 am

Updated this song again, still a work in progress, hopefully the mixdown is better this time around and any feedback would be great.

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Post by lushman » Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:11 am

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lushman wrote:Ok, got a bit of a chilled one here - not really sure what direction to take it in, or if it's got enough to it already. Anyway feedback greatly appreciated, hope you enjoy :)

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The vocals midway through are just so gorgeous. I really need to learn how to cut up and pitch/sample vocals like that. Burial esque. Would love to know how to do it, or at least where to start.. any tips?

Great track : )
Cheers man. I've only started dong it recently myself - I'm working in ableton, so you can take your vocal and then have ableton chop it up in a variety of ways for you (transients etc). So for this I made an 8 bar loop of from the original vocal track, with sections reversed and doubled up etc then sliced it up, so you then effectively have something similar to a .rex loop - then start tinkering with it. Hope this helps :)

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Post by SteX13 » Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:53 am

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ypDuC72XJgE

Hi peeps just finished this track about British soldiers dieing young in Iraq & Afghanistan.

Its my second track and personally I wish I could make decent noises :(

BUT its for my mate to rap over so will hide the failure in production :lol:

Rap & Dubstep, hate if you want :D

Please as much criticism as possible would be gratefully appreciated.

Should I take out my epic fails in grimeyness and just have a nice medolic tune? or try and work on making the noises sound good?

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Post by redjuan » Fri Mar 05, 2010 1:30 pm

j-one wrote:
redjuan wrote:MY BIT...

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Nice sounds, like how it builds... I'd personally give the drums more weight, they sound a bit feeble, especially when it builds later.

cheers man,im still developing the track to be honest,really interested to hear what way people think i can improve it,as so far im quite pleased with its sound..thanks for the feedback,anymore takers???

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Post by tripwire22 » Fri Mar 05, 2010 2:11 pm

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just made this would like to hear anything for it i kno it needs some work

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Post by Drekbek » Fri Mar 05, 2010 6:13 pm

Hi dearest dubbers!
Iam new to this community and since a few months iam doeing my attempts at dubstep aswell!
I would love it if you guys could rate my songs and tell me what iam doeing wrong at the moment and what i could do on my tracks to get em better!
my youtube account has 2 songs on it, please check and rate them! :D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HYfqmSv1NyE

and

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jrDTHLvD4eI

thanks alot!


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Post by collige » Fri Mar 05, 2010 8:52 pm

tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud

just made this would like to hear anything for it i kno it needs some work
It feels like pretty much every element of the track (bass, drums) is too high. The bass isn't very deep and the drums don't have too much "punch".
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Post by collige » Fri Mar 05, 2010 9:04 pm

Here's my latest WIP:
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I'm having trouble deciding whether to work more on the wobble or drop it altogether. I also don't know whether to treat the track as a remix of Left Leg Out or as an original work that alludes to said Mala track.
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Post by junior spesh » Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:16 pm

SUM COKI (ISH) SOUNDIG DUBSTEO IM WORKIN ATM, WITH A HINT OF SEGA MEGADRIVE! TELL ME WOT U FINK!

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Post by Olux » Fri Mar 05, 2010 11:07 pm

Hey everyone! :t:

A bit of a harder dubstep/D&B-ish track.

Not sure how to level this one to make it sound best, also struggling for leads that do it justice.

http://www.soundcloud.com/olux/explorium-olux

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Post by tripwire22 » Sat Mar 06, 2010 3:58 am

collige wrote:
tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud

just made this would like to hear anything for it i kno it needs some work
It feels like pretty much every element of the track (bass, drums) is too high. The bass isn't very deep and the drums don't have too much "punch".
thanks for telling me i prolly wouldnt have noticed that

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Post by hanzfritzl » Sat Mar 06, 2010 5:06 am

first dubstep tune would appreciate feedback

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arghh how do i get my soundcloud to appear here

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Post by Olux » Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:47 am

hanzfritzl wrote:first dubstep tune would appreciate feedback

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arghh how do i get my soundcloud to appear here
YEah, i cant figure out this soundcloud thing either! Olux

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Post by jaydot » Sat Mar 06, 2010 10:00 am

The soundcloud tags are Soundcloud, just them either side of your URL.

Chilled out ambient vibes going on here on this WIP:

[soundcloud]http:/www.soundcloud.com/jaydot/japanese-dreams[/soundcloud]
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Post by maelstrom99 » Sat Mar 06, 2010 7:33 pm

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Hey check out some mixed method I did, let me know what you think! be brutal

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Post by futures_untold » Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:14 pm

Here's a little jungle track I made this afternoon. :)

http://dubfiler.com/665230a4db10

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Post by grunt » Sat Mar 06, 2010 11:26 pm

junior spesh wrote:SUM COKI (ISH) SOUNDIG DUBSTEO IM WORKIN ATM, WITH A HINT OF SEGA MEGADRIVE! TELL ME WOT U FINK!

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Loving this man, really am. bassline works very well. big ups

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Post by grunt » Sat Mar 06, 2010 11:30 pm

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First track ive got round to making this year, let me know what youz tinkzzzz. safe guys

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