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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Yeah I like that mate, can imagine with a biggg juicy sub in there it'd really move especially with a bit of work on the drums (quite like the pattern).
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Updated this song again, still a work in progress, hopefully the mixdown is better this time around and any feedback would be great.
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Cheers man. I've only started dong it recently myself - I'm working in ableton, so you can take your vocal and then have ableton chop it up in a variety of ways for you (transients etc). So for this I made an 8 bar loop of from the original vocal track, with sections reversed and doubled up etc then sliced it up, so you then effectively have something similar to a .rex loop - then start tinkering with it. Hope this helpsJTL wrote:lushman wrote:Ok, got a bit of a chilled one here - not really sure what direction to take it in, or if it's got enough to it already. Anyway feedback greatly appreciated, hope you enjoy![]()
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The vocals midway through are just so gorgeous. I really need to learn how to cut up and pitch/sample vocals like that. Burial esque. Would love to know how to do it, or at least where to start.. any tips?
Great track : )

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ypDuC72XJgE
Hi peeps just finished this track about British soldiers dieing young in Iraq & Afghanistan.
Its my second track and personally I wish I could make decent noises
BUT its for my mate to rap over so will hide the failure in production
Rap & Dubstep, hate if you want
Please as much criticism as possible would be gratefully appreciated.
Should I take out my epic fails in grimeyness and just have a nice medolic tune? or try and work on making the noises sound good?

Hi peeps just finished this track about British soldiers dieing young in Iraq & Afghanistan.
Its my second track and personally I wish I could make decent noises

BUT its for my mate to rap over so will hide the failure in production

Rap & Dubstep, hate if you want

Please as much criticism as possible would be gratefully appreciated.
Should I take out my epic fails in grimeyness and just have a nice medolic tune? or try and work on making the noises sound good?

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j-one wrote:Nice sounds, like how it builds... I'd personally give the drums more weight, they sound a bit feeble, especially when it builds later.
cheers man,im still developing the track to be honest,really interested to hear what way people think i can improve it,as so far im quite pleased with its sound..thanks for the feedback,anymore takers???
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Hi dearest dubbers!
Iam new to this community and since a few months iam doeing my attempts at dubstep aswell!
I would love it if you guys could rate my songs and tell me what iam doeing wrong at the moment and what i could do on my tracks to get em better!
my youtube account has 2 songs on it, please check and rate them!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HYfqmSv1NyE
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jrDTHLvD4eI
thanks alot!
Iam new to this community and since a few months iam doeing my attempts at dubstep aswell!
I would love it if you guys could rate my songs and tell me what iam doeing wrong at the moment and what i could do on my tracks to get em better!
my youtube account has 2 songs on it, please check and rate them!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HYfqmSv1NyE
and
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jrDTHLvD4eI
thanks alot!
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feed back would be wiked cheers!
feed back would be wiked cheers!
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It feels like pretty much every element of the track (bass, drums) is too high. The bass isn't very deep and the drums don't have too much "punch".tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud
just made this would like to hear anything for it i kno it needs some work
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Here's my latest WIP:
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I'm having trouble deciding whether to work more on the wobble or drop it altogether. I also don't know whether to treat the track as a remix of Left Leg Out or as an original work that alludes to said Mala track.
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I'm having trouble deciding whether to work more on the wobble or drop it altogether. I also don't know whether to treat the track as a remix of Left Leg Out or as an original work that alludes to said Mala track.
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SUM COKI (ISH) SOUNDIG DUBSTEO IM WORKIN ATM, WITH A HINT OF SEGA MEGADRIVE! TELL ME WOT U FINK!
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Hey everyone!
A bit of a harder dubstep/D&B-ish track.
Not sure how to level this one to make it sound best, also struggling for leads that do it justice.
http://www.soundcloud.com/olux/explorium-olux

A bit of a harder dubstep/D&B-ish track.
Not sure how to level this one to make it sound best, also struggling for leads that do it justice.
http://www.soundcloud.com/olux/explorium-olux
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thanks for telling me i prolly wouldnt have noticed thatcollige wrote:It feels like pretty much every element of the track (bass, drums) is too high. The bass isn't very deep and the drums don't have too much "punch".tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud
just made this would like to hear anything for it i kno it needs some work
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first dubstep tune would appreciate feedback
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arghh how do i get my soundcloud to appear here
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arghh how do i get my soundcloud to appear here
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YEah, i cant figure out this soundcloud thing either! Oluxhanzfritzl wrote:first dubstep tune would appreciate feedback
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arghh how do i get my soundcloud to appear here
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The soundcloud tags are Soundcloud, just them either side of your URL.
Chilled out ambient vibes going on here on this WIP:
[soundcloud]http:/www.soundcloud.com/jaydot/japanese-dreams[/soundcloud]
Chilled out ambient vibes going on here on this WIP:
[soundcloud]http:/www.soundcloud.com/jaydot/japanese-dreams[/soundcloud]
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Loving this man, really am. bassline works very well. big upsjunior spesh wrote:SUM COKI (ISH) SOUNDIG DUBSTEO IM WORKIN ATM, WITH A HINT OF SEGA MEGADRIVE! TELL ME WOT U FINK!
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