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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by worldpremiere » Thu Feb 18, 2010 4:57 am

KidQw3rty wrote:
worldpremiere wrote:Hello lads,

I'm new in this one.. here are my first and second submissions to this thread, hit me up with some feedback:

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Thanks
both tracks sounding good, production is real tight. the first was pretty epic, i liked the way you worked in some almost kreftwerk-esque synth lines and arpeggs. pretty c00l.
second was good as well, every time that sample hits its brilliant. good tunes.
cheers mate, thanks for listening and giving feedback!

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Post by ParisUK » Thu Feb 18, 2010 5:06 am

worldpremiere wrote:
ParisUK wrote:http://soundcloud.com/sheepheads

there are a few on there, tell me what you think.
I like the nice mellow vibe in Aletti, Cola and Ressus. All tunes are easylistening with really nice setting. Try to make them a bit more diverse in structure - IMO that's what you need.

I'm not feeling the remix track.. it's not that vibe the other 3 have.

Keep on the good work!
Cheers, i know what you mean with the structure its summat im trying to work on with regards to the remix thats on there its on old one that i never got round to taking down even i think its a bit shit.

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Post by knell » Thu Feb 18, 2010 6:00 am

KidQw3rty wrote:
knell wrote:Hey BOYZZZZZZZ

yeh, its me, Knell, back again.

i know i havent done well with the reviews lately, but for those that missed the drama that happened in my life... i live in the back of a restaurant and wash dishes to get free food and a closet to sleep in... so, thankfully i have my computer, and Reason4, so my free time has been spent busting out my first EP

...which i'm going to share with you kind folks!! all 320 tracks

http://www.mediafire.com/?w045yygeiz2

cheers, feel free to hit me up with feedback/love/hate/whatever, ill be checkin back and bustin out reviews soon

much love :w: :w: :w:
straight off, was really feeling all juiced up...you had me with the hoover at :44...tight drop, the sample was perfect. you used reason for that? it sounds pretty dead on. liked this track a lot, your drums are BIG.
the samplework in max headroom was supreme, and i thought the last minute was off the chain, it sounds like some hyperspace chase jam.
the only thing i would change about interlude is possibly the main voice, for some reason it didnt sit with me.
last track was cool, reminded me a lot of Oizo, and again, nice hoover implementation, you have that on lock.
much thanks for the mpfrees, really enjoyable listen, good first ep.
mate, you're a saint!! thank you for your kind words and feedback, i really appreciate it..!! ill definitely be reviewing your tracks first for awhile now. biggup, i havent seen you in this thread before, but i've been out for awhile now... and your recognition of the hoover synth makes me respect you off the bat! much love

p.s. yeh i use Reason4 for everything, and i dont even use a keyboard haha.. and the interlude is more of an audio "palate cleanser" than an actual song... that main voice is a beast trying to get to sit right...

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Post by KidQw3rty » Thu Feb 18, 2010 6:51 am

knell wrote:
KidQw3rty wrote:
knell wrote:Hey BOYZZZZZZZ

yeh, its me, Knell, back again.

i know i havent done well with the reviews lately, but for those that missed the drama that happened in my life... i live in the back of a restaurant and wash dishes to get free food and a closet to sleep in... so, thankfully i have my computer, and Reason4, so my free time has been spent busting out my first EP

...which i'm going to share with you kind folks!! all 320 tracks

http://www.mediafire.com/?w045yygeiz2

cheers, feel free to hit me up with feedback/love/hate/whatever, ill be checkin back and bustin out reviews soon

much love :w: :w: :w:
straight off, was really feeling all juiced up...you had me with the hoover at :44...tight drop, the sample was perfect. you used reason for that? it sounds pretty dead on. liked this track a lot, your drums are BIG.
the samplework in max headroom was supreme, and i thought the last minute was off the chain, it sounds like some hyperspace chase jam.
the only thing i would change about interlude is possibly the main voice, for some reason it didnt sit with me.
last track was cool, reminded me a lot of Oizo, and again, nice hoover implementation, you have that on lock.
much thanks for the mpfrees, really enjoyable listen, good first ep.
mate, you're a saint!! thank you for your kind words and feedback, i really appreciate it..!! ill definitely be reviewing your tracks first for awhile now. biggup, i havent seen you in this thread before, but i've been out for awhile now... and your recognition of the hoover synth makes me respect you off the bat! much love

p.s. yeh i use Reason4 for everything, and i dont even use a keyboard haha.. and the interlude is more of an audio "palate cleanser" than an actual song... that main voice is a beast trying to get to sit right...
no keyboard WTF?!? grab up a cheap midi keyboard man, if yr making these all with step-edit, you're going to DESTROY with a keyboard! big up son!
also, you havent seen me here because im fairly new.

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Post by thrush » Thu Feb 18, 2010 8:00 am

http://soundcloud.com/quinn-miller/quin ... king-title

gidday fellers, first tune ive finished that in my eyes is up to the standard it should be. will start writing some feedback on some others.

enjoy the rave vibe on that bit

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Post by icebagg » Thu Feb 18, 2010 8:32 am

thrush wrote:http://soundcloud.com/quinn-miller/quin ... king-title

gidday fellers, first tune ive finished that in my eyes is up to the standard it should be. will start writing some feedback on some others.

enjoy the rave vibe on that bit
If dubstep was around in the 80's i believe this is what it would sound like! Very good for a first tune! My first song wasnt nearly as good as this one! Obviously much to work on but you seem to have your head in the right place, keep crunching man!
ears ringin all night you know how that shit go

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Post by icebagg » Thu Feb 18, 2010 8:40 am

YES YES i know i am guilty of crunching in some feedback before i post something! I am just not on the forums as much as i used to be, I am trying to keep up with life, add some url's and youve got total chaos! haha, more reviews to come, i really do love giving feedback, as artists we must help each other out because non-producers dont pay attention to detail, so BIGUP to everyone in the forum!

i got 2 new tracks im pretty stoked about, i would like to hear your thoughts...

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thanks!
ears ringin all night you know how that shit go

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Post by standard-proceduremusic » Thu Feb 18, 2010 9:40 pm

You can listen to our tracks @ http://www.myspace.com/standardproceduremusic1 + http://soundcloud.com/standard-procedure-1
any feecback would be greatly appreciated
cheers!
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Post by wirez » Thu Feb 18, 2010 11:24 pm

icebagg wrote: Soundcloud

Really enjoyed listening to this one, I think the wobble was a little too thin though man

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That one's fucking fire, nice one for going easy on not wasting a good Gorillaz sample, you did really well. I copped that!
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Post by djaccel » Fri Feb 19, 2010 6:31 am

First one on the new comp.

For those who like some space in their dubstep.

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Post by dignan » Fri Feb 19, 2010 7:36 am

djaccel wrote:First one on the new comp.

For those who like some space in their dubstep.

Soundcloud
nice, spacious tune... the drums are sounding tastey!

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could I get some feedback on this one? i've been in Europe for the past month and was itchin' to get home so I could finish this one. I'll return the favor, don't worry!

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Post by substance1 » Fri Feb 19, 2010 10:05 am

http://dubstepxclusive.ning.com/profile/Substance



some tunes up there any feedback would be much appreciated

Thanks

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Post by Skechy » Fri Feb 19, 2010 10:38 am

Just finished this remix for Mint. Approaching dubstep from a bit of a different angle, filmic and a bit epic. Really its electronica with a heavy pivot. Dunno if it works, but have played it out a few times and gets a good reaction. Definitely works with the Spielberg Close Encounters video though!

Mint System Cost (Echaskech Dub Mothership Mix)

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Post by Worker Ant » Fri Feb 19, 2010 1:32 pm

bass hertz wrote:
Worker Ant wrote:Whatcha think of this one? I'll bet nobody can guess what films the snare samples come from.

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Robocop
No Robocop samples...snares and some other sounds came from "Pendulum," some human voice samples came from "The Violent Years." But...i shoulda kept that a secret, huh?

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Post by Worker Ant » Fri Feb 19, 2010 1:53 pm

thrush wrote:gidday fellers, first tune ive finished that in my eyes is up to the standard it should be. will start writing some feedback on some others.
I like how the two riddims interweave throughout the song and the hats come in and out of one riddim. I woulda put a stronger bassline in it and put more hats in the last riddim section. The part before the last riddim section (the long part with no riddim) is too long -OR- it feels like it needs some random percussion sounds fading in and out (maybe panning too)...something to stir it up a bit and keep people from wanting to stop listening. That's prolly the only helpful feedback i can offer.

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Post by Worker Ant » Fri Feb 19, 2010 2:00 pm

Here's a remix/reproduction of dancehall deejay Turbulence's "Nah Sell Out." It's an anti-bling message. Please let me know what you think of it as a remix.

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Post by Temo » Fri Feb 19, 2010 3:36 pm

worldpremiere wrote:Hello lads,

I'm new in this one.. here are my first and second submissions to this thread, hit me up with some feedback:

Thanks
feeling that dub tune definatly, make you feel right's pretty good aswell

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Post by Temo » Fri Feb 19, 2010 3:45 pm

ParisUK wrote:http://soundcloud.com/sheepheads

there are a few on there, tell me what you think.
1st, decent idea, but i think was abit too stripped down

2nd, sick

3rd, what the melodys trying to do and what the drums are trying to do are too apart, think the tune wouldve been better with simpler drums and more concentration on the melody.

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Post by Temo » Fri Feb 19, 2010 3:55 pm

thrush wrote:http://soundcloud.com/quinn-miller/quin ... king-title

gidday fellers, first tune ive finished that in my eyes is up to the standard it should be. will start writing some feedback on some others.

enjoy the rave vibe on that bit
instruments chosen are abit too generic for me, the piano in particular, sounds cheap, i dont know how long uve been making tunes so its hard to gauge if its good or not

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