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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 4:01 pm
by Temo
icebagg wrote:YES YES i know i am guilty of crunching in some feedback before i post something! I am just not on the forums as much as i used to be, I am trying to keep up with life, add some url's and youve got total chaos! haha, more reviews to come, i really do love giving feedback, as artists we must help each other out because non-producers dont pay attention to detail, so BIGUP to everyone in the forum!

i got 2 new tracks im pretty stoked about, i would like to hear your thoughts...

thanks!
1st, sick, but i woulda made the drums harder and punchier and maybe abit more lively

2nd, didnt play :?

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 4:08 pm
by frank grimes jr.
Worker Ant wrote:Here's a remix/reproduction of dancehall deejay Turbulence's "Nah Sell Out." It's an anti-bling message. Please let me know what you think of it as a remix.

Soundcloud
I think this has potential for a remix, but I was waiting for the tune to start the whole time.
Maybe it's my headphones, but the entire tune sounded like an intro to me.

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 4:12 pm
by Temo
Soundcloud

any feedback would be much appreciated

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 5:07 pm
by raggatwin
http://soundcloud.com/raggatwin/babylon My first real go, been messing around on reason for about 8 months. Let me know what u think :)

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 6:17 pm
by frank grimes jr.
raggatwin wrote:http://soundcloud.com/raggatwin/babylon My first real go, been messing around on reason for about 8 months. Let me know what u think :)
It's a tune man, the sub sounds really nice.
I think the kick is getting lost a bit, but everything is fitting nicely otherwise IMO.

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 6:50 pm
by CollisionCourse
@Temo
thats a nice track, the drums roll very nicely. a little more variation wouldnt do any harm with the main strings, maybe trying a different sounds to add along the way, just to make it more interesting. i like the outro though, good work

@parisuk/sheepheads
i love the piano. is it sampled? the drums and the percussions especially sound a bit too loud and are slightly clipping but its probably just me. i liek the wobble, probably doesnt really go with the panio but it still sounds good. overall its very listenable

@blind prophet
all your tracks are big so the standard was quite high. and that intro is TASTY. drums are definitely head bobbing material. love the change of sounds at 1.50 aswell, big. there really is nothing i can find to fault this track, well done mate :mrgreen:

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 6:55 pm
by CollisionCourse

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 7:51 pm
by wirez
Temo wrote: instruments chosen are abit too generic for me, the piano in particular, sounds cheap, i dont know how long uve been making tunes so its hard to gauge if its good or not
Why would the length of time somebody has been producing make a different to whether or not it is a good track?

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 8:42 pm
by icebagg
Temo wrote:
icebagg wrote:YES YES i know i am guilty of crunching in some feedback before i post something! I am just not on the forums as much as i used to be, I am trying to keep up with life, add some url's and youve got total chaos! haha, more reviews to come, i really do love giving feedback, as artists we must help each other out because non-producers dont pay attention to detail, so BIGUP to everyone in the forum!

i got 2 new tracks im pretty stoked about, i would like to hear your thoughts...

thanks!
1st, sick, but i woulda made the drums harder and punchier and maybe abit more lively

2nd, didnt play :?

Yea its not quite finished being mixed yet, im going back and re mixing all my songs but thank you!... heres that second track... only thing about this new one, is that horrible little click i get on my vocal loops anyone have any suggestions for ridding of these? it really takes away fromt he song any help would be awesomeSoundcloud

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 8:52 pm
by wirez
Temo wrote:Soundcloud

any feedback would be much appreciated
A lush track you got there man, favourited :D

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 8:58 pm
by wirez
CollisionCourse wrote:Soundcloud
:mrgreen:
Nice track man!

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 9:12 pm
by icebagg
Temo wrote:Soundcloud

any feedback would be much appreciated
awesome track man! how long you been producing? very clean mix i like i like, love the ambiance as well. I love how versatile dubstep is, i tend to go for the heavy hitting stuff, but the mellower tracks with all that sub bass hit me in the right spot! bigups! i shall find you on the cloud!

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 9:12 pm
by dignan
CollisionCourse wrote:Soundcloud
:mrgreen:
nice track man, just my kind of tune - nice and chilled and spacious. i'm listening to it on some crappy pc speakers so I cant hear the sub so ill check it out again later.

thanks for the comments about my track, really appreciate it man!

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 9:56 pm
by Temo
icebagg wrote:
Temo wrote:Soundcloud

any feedback would be much appreciated
awesome track man! how long you been producing? very clean mix i like i like, love the ambiance as well. I love how versatile dubstep is, i tend to go for the heavy hitting stuff, but the mellower tracks with all that sub bass hit me in the right spot! bigups! i shall find you on the cloud!
about 3 years or so, im 17 lol

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 9:59 pm
by Temo
CollisionCourse, wirez, icebagg thanks for the feedback aswell

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 10:03 pm
by Temo
wirez wrote:
Temo wrote: instruments chosen are abit too generic for me, the piano in particular, sounds cheap, i dont know how long uve been making tunes so its hard to gauge if its good or not
Why would the length of time somebody has been producing make a different to whether or not it is a good track?
i cant say its good if hes been producing for a long time, and i cant say its bad if hes hasnt.

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 10:06 pm
by icebagg
Temo wrote:CollisionCourse, wirez, icebagg thanks for the feedback aswell
sure thing... 17 huh, you got a good ear man cant wait to hear more! i believe i followed you on soundcloud...(homage) bigups man keep it up

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 10:39 pm
by wirez
Temo wrote:
wirez wrote:
Temo wrote: instruments chosen are abit too generic for me, the piano in particular, sounds cheap, i dont know how long uve been making tunes so its hard to gauge if its good or not
Why would the length of time somebody has been producing make a different to whether or not it is a good track?
i cant say its good if hes been producing for a long time, and i cant say its bad if hes hasnt.
Lol but as a tune it can only be good or bad :lol: My guess is that most people post here because they want to be sure that a track will be liked publicly before they expose it properly, therefore when the general public hear a track they're not going to give a fuck how long somebody has been producing, if it's shit they'll turn it off and if it's good they'll keep it playing... You know?

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 11:05 pm
by Temo
icebagg wrote:
Temo wrote:CollisionCourse, wirez, icebagg thanks for the feedback aswell
sure thing... 17 huh, you got a good ear man cant wait to hear more! i believe i followed you on soundcloud...(homage) bigups man keep it up
yeah cheers man

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 11:14 pm
by Temo
wirez wrote:
Temo wrote:
wirez wrote:
Temo wrote: instruments chosen are abit too generic for me, the piano in particular, sounds cheap, i dont know how long uve been making tunes so its hard to gauge if its good or not
Why would the length of time somebody has been producing make a different to whether or not it is a good track?
i cant say its good if hes been producing for a long time, and i cant say its bad if hes hasnt.
Lol but as a tune it can only be good or bad :lol: My guess is that most people post here because they want to be sure that a track will be liked publicly before they expose it properly, therefore when the general public hear a track they're not going to give a fuck how long somebody has been producing, if it's shit they'll turn it off and if it's good they'll keep it playing... You know?
yeah defiantly, not sure if thats the case here though