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Re: Nation - People Don't Think (feedback please)

Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 3:16 pm
by Mike-Joyce
dj nation wrote:Ive just made this new track and id really appreciated some feedback to get me going on it again. cheers

People dont know

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F97kyJcuWO4
Nice Track, I like the feel to this. The subb/Bass is good, you can feel it nicely. Few things you could do is thicken up the beat. Maybe add some more percussion

Cheers
Mike

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 3:34 pm
by Mike-Joyce
tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud

hey guys made something new not like my usual plz feed back
Nice Track. You've got a good solid sub bass line going on. Rubbles my feet well!. Liking the triangle percussion at the beggining, maybe add more of that in the main bit. Some ambiant vocals would do this track well too. Also try out making more drum fills, where you take out the bass, so its a semi Rise/Drop.

Cheers
Mike

145BPM Too much subb?? Or just not clean enough?

Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 3:41 pm
by Mike-Joyce
Hey, Let me know what you think?

Soundcloud


Is the subb to loud at the begining and the end? and what do you think of the structure?

Cheers
Mike

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 4:03 pm
by soulshynchyld
mike.... reckon ya sub is all good, but bring ya rhythm in abit more gradually like.. im not too much into dance, but its real catchy ah!!chea
tripwire, thats real nice ay. nice movement throughout, luv it wen the subs hit, duno where i would take it, but mean!!

& this is one im working on. just playing around with freqz abit, theres a tone in the blakground that i think of as green, its quite overpowering, but when it all comes together it doesnt sound too bad lyk, alot of work could be done to this, likn where its going anyways!! CHEA
Soundcloud

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 4:33 pm
by Mike-Joyce
soulshynchyld wrote:mike.... reckon ya sub is all good, but bring ya rhythm in abit more gradually like.. im not too much into dance, but its real catchy ah!!chea
tripwire, thats real nice ay. nice movement throughout, luv it wen the subs hit, duno where i would take it, but mean!!

& this is one im working on. just playing around with freqz abit, theres a tone in the blakground that i think of as green, its quite overpowering, but when it all comes together it doesnt sound too bad lyk, alot of work could be done to this, likn where its going anyways!! CHEA
Soundcloud
Nice Track. I like the crackhead vocals going on. Also the sounds at the beginning are cool. they could be well good for a Rise-up and then have a fat old drop. Not too sure about the distorted noises at the end, sounded abit random to me. for this track I would replace them with some high pitch soft/screechy notes (if that makes any sence). Like the idea of a green noise thoe. Keep it up.

Cheers for your feedback
Mike

Re: nation - people don't think

Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 5:18 pm
by dj nation
cheers mike, muich appreciated, ill work on the drums alot more, and also need to work on the 2nd drop. cheers mate